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Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Olorididan(m): 9:51pm On Oct 12, 2012
bronzed bronzed
between many suns and
cold winds
of emotional scars
fine lines worn proud
reflecting outer of inner
confidence, not defeated
not to be questioned
largeness, warmth
naturalized in the heart
despite all disposed
spites
and scorns unloaded and abandoned
still full of
love-longing life
balancing, balanced
red stilted stiletto strides
tall approach of no reproach
only fingers outreached
tell of many memorable
wonderful, tropical eras
gone by
eyes speaking
speeches of desire
not of need, not burning
but enduring fire
to touch me and give and share
all exposures
ready to expose
all that truth
and beauty
not passed, never robbed of youth
yes, indeed would have worshipped you
but both knowing
my apologetic eyes
could never defeat your completeness
glorious Iluminada
in another place
another time

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Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by ndaghi(m): 2:21pm On Oct 14, 2012
An excellent piece.
Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 11:01pm On Jul 24, 2014
Olorididan: bronzed bronzed
between many suns and
cold winds
of emotional scars
fine lines worn proud
reflecting outer of inner
confidence, not defeated
not to be questioned
largeness, warmth
naturalized in the heart
despite all disposed
spites
and scorns unloaded and abandoned
still full of
love-longing life
balancing, balanced
red stilted stiletto strides
tall approach of no reproach
only fingers outreached
tell of many memorable
wonderful, tropical eras
gone by
eyes speaking
speeches of desire
not of need, not burning
but enduring fire
to touch me and give and share
all exposures
ready to expose
all that truth
and beauty
not passed, never robbed of youth
yes, indeed would have worshipped you
but both knowing
my apologetic eyes
could never defeat your completeness
glorious Iluminada
in another place
another time

Best poem I ever readon nairaland

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Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 8:08pm On Mar 09, 2015
Wow!

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Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 1:53am On Nov 30, 2016
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Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 7:36pm On Aug 25, 2019
Beautiful
Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 2:57pm On Feb 11, 2022
Olorididan:
bronzed bronzed
between many suns and
cold winds
of emotional scars
fine lines worn proud
reflecting outer of inner
confidence, not defeated
not to be questioned
largeness, warmth
naturalized in the heart
despite all disposed
spites
and scorns unloaded and abandoned
still full of
love-longing life
balancing, balanced
red stilted stiletto strides
tall approach of no reproach
only fingers outreached
tell of many memorable
wonderful, tropical eras
gone by
eyes speaking
speeches of desire
not of need, not burning
but enduring fire
to touch me and give and share
all exposures
ready to expose
all that truth
and beauty
not passed, never robbed of youth
yes, indeed would have worshipped you
but both knowing
my apologetic eyes
could never defeat your completeness
glorious Iluminada
in another place
another time

@ Magnoliaa

What do you think of this piece?
Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 10:05pm On Feb 11, 2022
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Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by Nobody: 10:06pm On Feb 11, 2022
@ magnoliaa

I wish I could read one of your poems if you have any written. smiley
Re: Another Place, Another Time Iluminada by ForChrist1: 9:08pm On Oct 18, 2023
Olorididan:
bronzed bronzed
between many suns and
cold winds
of emotional scars
fine lines worn proud
reflecting outer of inner
confidence, not defeated
not to be questioned
largeness, warmth
naturalized in the heart
despite all disposed
spites
and scorns unloaded and abandoned
still full of
love-longing life
balancing, balanced
red stilted stiletto strides
tall approach of no reproach
only fingers outreached
tell of many memorable
wonderful, tropical eras
gone by
eyes speaking
speeches of desire
not of need, not burning
but enduring fire
to touch me and give and share
all exposures
ready to expose
all that truth
and beauty
not passed, never robbed of youth
yes, indeed would have worshipped you
but both knowing
my apologetic eyes
could never defeat your completeness
glorious Iluminada
in another place
another time

Mr Olorididan. You wrote this masterpiece and disappeared. I see you logged in last year 2012. If you ever log in with this account again, please say hi. This is a wonderful piece.

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