Like my indian friend would say "this ez mind blaaasting" I'm so joining the literary section.

great writing dude . . . waitin on the last piece tho . . .

Suspense!
Nice one, said this story was too 'sweet' to end with 5 episodes


Can't wait

This is really really really really really interesting.

What a wonderful write up. I love your mix of simple Nigerian language with the story. The name you gave to that Ijebu man's bike got me laughing. It was a perfect description for the bike as I don't need to see it before I know how it looks like. Keep it up!


Wait a minute, what if the man says Babatunde should marry his daughter? Na trouble be that one ooo. Anike go vex big time.lolz


Episode 6 please.

Make sense

Am lovin dis!!!

Good story line!! Keep it up. . .

Very interesting can't wait to read the rest

Dis is interestin...

Abeg dis my no 08059887665,giv a cal wen nx episode is out.i'l pay back ur credit cad.u'r too much

chei, this is a nice stuff.

Episode 6 its all about 'Would you please leave my daughter alone? you are being close to her which I dont find interesting' waiting for Episode 7

following bumper to bumper.... infact leme bookmark the page on my fone so i can always refresh during my free hrs.

@ OP chop knuckle, you be sure guy

GUY FINISH UP THIS STORY B4 I GO FLOG U...... AM LOVING IT... GOOD ONE THERE

am still waiting, since have been coming here to read the next episode but to no avail.

nice story.infact an award winning story for dat matter.next episode joor

I'm so subscribing

INTERESTING! I wz actually passing by but got captivated after all.

Next episode or season soonest pls

Lovely story line. keep it coming!

@OP
I almost turned stupid smiling in the eyes of my staff while carefully reading the post......... this is wonderful

please do well to put up episode 6

seriously waiting for the next episode

where is the continuation?
abeg post am o before i go vex

Nice one. Was having serious headache before now but after reading this story the headache vanished due to excessive smiling.
Episode 6....come and work for my company....
@ OP...keep it up!!

[quote author=pappyt ]Abeg dis my no 08059887665,giv a cal wen nx episode is out.i'l pay back ur credit cad.u'r too much
^^^now dis got me laughing. @ OP nice write-up. Readers can go on 20 pages without getting bored sef.

Next episode pls

This is sooo unfair! Why wud u stop like that? The suspense is killing... Seriously, the literature section is my favorite now since I bumped into it yesterday. I wasn't really a novel freak while growin up but I think all that has changed now. Who says 9ja ain't got talent? Abeg continue b4 I teleport come worry u where u dey

what's all this rubbish na...

First time reading all una literature, only to turn it to come tomorrow, who go follow u come?.. abeg abeg.. if u wan make we pay 100, make we pay finish the film, how people u think say dey watch soap opera... na women now.. come today, come tomm....

Even if u post everything now, I no go gree read again

Dont start what u cant finish d suspense is too much 4 me to behold.pls conclude it ASAP.

d7thcaller:
Nice one. Was having serious headache before now but after reading this story the headache vanish due to excessive smiling.
Episode 6....come and work for my company....
@ OP...keep it up!!

You forgot to add ' Praaaaaaaaaisseeeee the Lord, Alleluyaaaaa"

But seriously OP, this your delay in posting part 6 - end is becoming annoying. Is it until people begin to occupy this space that you will post the rest.

Abeg do the needful. Post the rest abeg. I know I was threatening to stalk you before; please sorry. I no go do am again. Just post the rest eh. Biko o.

Chei! see suspence anyway nice one @ OP

@Poster, I am officially endorsing the Literature Section. And from now on, I will be a regular visitor there all because of you. I know I will find other great writers there too.

A beautiful job you have done.