FOR DEMOCRACY TO THRIVE,THERE SHOULD BE THE NECESSARY ENABLING PARTICIPATION AT THE GRASSROOTS.MAJOR AMONG THESE IS A SELF RELIANT ECONOMY THAT WILL HELP FIGHT DISEASES,LACK,WANT SQUALOR AND IGNORANCE....A SITUETION WHERE THE GENERALITY OF THE CITIZENRY INEXORABLY STRUGGLE FOR DAILY SURVIVAL(WHAT TO EAT)IS A DANGEROUS THREAT TO DEMOCRACY AND POLITICAL PARTICIPATION.A SOUND ECONOMY WILL HAVE SANGUINE EFFECT ON SOCIAL IMPROVEMENT.

Nice One but I personally think that you would have explained the meaning of democracy and relate it to your points.
Try to include
public opinion and
youth participation.