I wrote, directed, shot, choreographed and edited this short movie a must watch. please comment, like, criticize.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IWV7_L7n_A8

Visual effect, animation, 3D presentations
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I don't get the message of the short movie. Nice shooting effects. Stunts to me is a 5.5/10

Napolitano: I don't get the message of the short movie. Nice shooting effects. Stunts to me is a 5.5/10

I wouldn't even call it a 'short film' - just a series of shots without a story that is... oh, yeah wait for it - 'To Be Continued'... Duh! You rated it very high though - I'd give it a 2.5/10 for now - and that is for the effort that must be recognised.

Having said that if the OP/filmmaker does something short and complete with a contained 'story' I'm pretty sure he can make really good work and should be one to look out for in the future.

Napolitano: I don't get the message of the short movie. Nice shooting effects. Stunts to me is a 5.5/10

Yea, the story isn't really there per say, I was just trying to see if I could pull an action fist fight scene. Thanks anyway

VillageBoi:

I wouldn't even call it a 'short film' - just a series of shots without a story that is... oh, yeah wait for it - 'To Be Continued'... Duh! You rated it very high though - I'd give it a 2.5/10 for now - and that is for the effort that must be recognised.

Having said that if the OP/filmmaker does something short and complete with a contained 'story' I'm pretty sure he can make really good work and should be one to look out for in the future.

Like I said, I wasn't thinking of story, I was just showing a fight scene. But anyways thanks for ur comment

genetos:

Like I said, I wasn't thinking of story, I was just showing a fight scene. But anyways thanks for ur comment

I see. If you had said at the start. 'It's just a fight scene, what do you guys think?' that would have been so much better. What you wrote below is what misled us.

genetos: I wrote, directed, shot, choreographed and edited this short movie a must watch. please comment, like,

As already said - you have some skills, keep working on them. Definitely put more stuff out there. Thanks.

VillageBoi:

I see. If you had said at the start. 'It's just a fight scene, what do you guys think?' that would have been so much better. What you wrote below is what misled us.


As already said - you have some skills, keep working on them. Definitely put more stuff out there. Thanks.

Thanks I sure will working on short also beautiful story nd also a feature too... Thanks anyways, always good to hear another film makers point of view

genetos:

Thanks I sure will working on short also beautiful story nd also a feature too... Thanks anyways, always good to hear another film makers point of view

Yoy're welcome bro. How did you know I'm an aspiring filmmaker too?

VillageBoi:

Yoy're welcome bro. How did you know I'm an aspiring filmmaker too?

For one thing you criticize nd u talk like one too

genetos:
For one thing you criticize nd u talk like one too

I hope not in a bad way shaa?

Glad to hear your working on a short and feature too. Well done.

Nice work,can u pls drop ur email so we can talk better

sheyma: Nice work,can u pls drop ur email so we can talk better

thanks!
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Nice one, can we run things together. I will email u.

kelvin22: Nice one, can we run things together my email is kelvin.orji@gmail.com. I will email u.

sure!

genetos:
sure!

I sent u an email. Pls check the subject is (Re: Action Short Film)
I droped my number in the email

Saw Ur flick yesterday. And talkin about the action, I dont fink its dat bad, especially in ds country whr fins like fighting arts are not encouraged. The skill set of both fighters are close to been on same level, no special additionals.
My advice if I may, for a better fight scene, is turning them loose on eachother, in dat way they instinctively fuse into eachother. but this can only b achieved if they train together or @least know eachothers moves.
There were alot of wide angle punches flyin in d air, n d block simulations were fair though, they dont do dat John wayne style anymore.
In summary, given the circumstances, I fink U did a great job cuz I‘ve not seen any beta in our films asides Gugu‘s DM.

reidkrugger: Saw Ur flick yesterday. And talkin about the action, I dont fink its dat bad, especially in ds country whr fins like fighting arts are not encouraged. The skill set of both fighters are close to been on same level, no special additionals.
My advice if I may, for a better fight scene, is turning them loose on eachother, in dat way they instinctively fuse into eachother. but this can only b achieved if they train together or @least know eachothers moves.
There were alot of wide angle punches flyin in d air, n d block simulations were fair though, they dont do dat John wayne style anymore.
In summary, given the circumstances, I fink U did a great job cuz I‘ve not seen any beta in our films asides Gugu‘s DM.

Thanks bro! I was just testing to see if I could pull it off! The whole project was done in three days from pre-production to post-production. Wrote today, rehearse the next day, shot and edited the day after, wasn't really a serious film.

This is a Talent.....i like you brother..keep it up!

Starbeams: This is a Talent.....i like you brother..keep it up!

thanks bro!