It feels like you're breathing
But you feel like you're choking
Life's problems hold you down
Like you're tied to railway tracks
A freight train's heading your way
You scream for help
But you can't even hear yourself
Voices drowned by the train's engine
And all you can do is wait for your ending


It feels like you're breathing
Your legs are still moving
But you feel unfeeling
A robot on autopilot
Still there but still missing
Working day and night
But losing the fight

It feels like you're breathing
Your heart is still beating
Something seems missing
You're alive but not living

safarigirl: It feels like you're breathing
But you feel like you're choking
Life's problems hold you down
Like you're tied to railway tracks
A freight train's heading your way
You scream for help
But you can't even hear yourself
Voices drowned by the train's engine
And all you can do is wait for your ending


It feels like you're breathing
Your legs are still moving
But you feel unfeeling
A robot on autopilot
Still there but still missing
Working day and night
But losing the fight

It feels like you're breathing
Your heart is still beating
Something seems missing
You're alive but not living

Deep. I can totally identify with your poem

Hy safari girl, nice poem.

Ur sis neva told me u write lovely. Go tru my poem and tell me wat u think.