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My Short Poem 'YOU & I' by tomiblack(m): 10:46pm On Sep 27, 2013 |
Give me the smile i long 2 see No matter what the situation might be Even if the condition sting like Bee It will be you &i Even when gossips said i'll flee I knew you'll never Agree Even when the darkness makes u eerie It has been you & i In d wind i'll be d Lee Cover you like coat made from Fleece Then you smile at me in Glee Be warm for you & i All the problem that make u Dizzy I will make sure i Bury So we can make Merry Let it be you & i You smell so sweet as Jasmine I'll show you the world in my Ferry Don't bother abt d Money We'll make it you & i And when its time to Marry The soldier will put on their Busby Then i'll kiss the lips dat taste lik Berry And forever you & i......... tomiblack |
Re: My Short Poem 'YOU & I' by tomiblack(m): 1:13pm On Oct 03, 2013 |
any poet in d house its my 1st poem pls i need constructive criticism to improve |
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