stefikal:

Ahan! Philip iyaf In-SUGAR me

ok liven up u'll be going for a yr training course frm tomorow

**manages 2 struggle 2ru d crowd and enters..** *sits at the back and waves..*
I d0n sh0w oooooo... Sorry am late. Had sumtnz 2 fixup..
Hailings 2 my boss d9ty7, temitope dan, chiefprist.. Nice story line.. I loveee action..
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*mutters... This bouncers no dey do any work, c as crowd full gate..*

J0nyb0y: **manages 2 struggle 2ru d crowd and enters..** *sits at the back and waves..*
I d0n sh0w oooooo... Sorry am late. Had sumtnz 2 fixup..
Hailings 2 my boss d9ty7, temitope dan, chiefprist.. Nice story line.. I loveee action..
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*mutters... This bouncers no dey do any work, c as crowd full gate..*

Fenks boss!

kingphilip:
see person wey no sabi action de talk

*in bobby lashe's voice* Mr oga kingphilip abeg coolu jeje oh!na my oga sister b stefkal if u no want make I bounce u out,u beta compose ursef oh I don yarn u b dat

--continuation--
Venue: L.A.T.U
"Meeting with Mr Bill Cuevas by 9pm, all departmental heads should be in attendance. Agent Chris should stand in place of Agent Richard. Agent Oriol replaces Agent Nina who was supposed to be in place of Agent Mill." The operator's voice echoed all round the building.
All concerned agents walked to the conference room.
"Ladies and gentlemen, as you already know about the failed attempt in arrestin Rofl Anderson. I sent the most competent field agent to lead the team but it seems like Anderson knew about the attack. What do you think can be done?" Bill asked.
"Where on earth is Agent Richard?" Agent Tom(head of the forensic team) asked.
"He is in detention." Bill replied.
"I think he should be released. He is speciallized in this kind of thing." Tom explained.
"He shouldn't, he was going against the rule of this corporation. Let him learn his lesson." Sucre defended.
Tom looked at Sucre with a killer eyes.
"Good evening viewers at home. It was reported that the vice president's motorcade was attacked some twenty minutes ago on his way from the airport. Millitary men have been put to act, with some evidence in place." The television reporter casted.
"Why on earth will this kind of thing happen and the millitary will be ordered to investigate?" Tom asked angrily.
"Let me put a call through to the millitary base." Bill said and reached for a phone.
Just then a video call came in. Bill picked the call and the Chief of army staff was seen on the screen.
"I believe you saw what just happened, a whole vice president was attacked. When a corporation like you is in existence." Gazidis said angrily.
"Your excellency sir. We were delibrating on how to nab a man called Rofl Anderson." Bill explained.
"Delibrations at this crucial hour?" Gazidis asked angrily.
"We are sorry sir. But we promise you result very soon." Bill spoke calmly.
"You have just twenty four hours to stop this attack, because a note was clipped to the vice president's body that the Secretary of defence is the next target." Gazidis explained.
"With due respect sir, we'll start investigations now." Bill said only to see the screen blank.
Bill looked at his colleagues with an innocent face.
"Agent Richard is the right man." Tom said.
Bill dismissed them and went into his office. He pressed the security button.
A man in his early thirties showed up.
"Release Agent Richard and Nina." Bill commanded.

--to be continued--

Can agent richard pull this one through?time surely will tell

--continuation--
venue: L.A.T.U
Richard drove out of L.A.T.U and headed for Oisbourne road with Agent Chris seated beside him.
He surveyed the whole of Oisbourned then proceeded to Allen avenue where Anderson's house was located.
"How do we pull this through?" Chris asked with doubt all over his face.
"Just be ready for action." Richard told him in a millitary manner.
They got down from the car and walked to the third house to Anderson's. They knocked on the door.
A girl in her teens opened the door for them.
"I am Agent Richard and with me here is Agent Chris, we are from the Latvia Anti-terrorist Unit." Richard explained flashing his I.D card.
The girl trembled with fear as she opened the door wider for them to enter.
"You have no reason to tremble. We are here for questioning. Okay." Richard asked.
She nodded her head in affirmation.
"What's your name?" Richard asked.
"Nancy." She replied calmly.
"Where are your parents?" Richard asked.
"They are at work." she replied.
"What's the nature of their job?" Richard asked.
"My dad works as a holticulturist, while my mum works in a local restaurant." she explained.
"Okay." Richard said and gave Chris a sign.
Chris was looking around the sitting room in a suspicious manner.
"Do you by any chance know those that lived in the semi detached house over there. I mean the old house, third to yours?" Richard asked.
"Yes, it was occupied by one Mr Abib." Nancy replied.
"Do you in anyway have contact with him. I mean are you in talking terms?" Richard asked.
"Not at all but....." she was saying but lost her voice.
Richard urged her to continue.
"I know of a boy who used to live with him, but recently the boy moved out with his mum." Nancy explained.
"What's the boy's name. And what the relationship between you two?" Richard asked.
"His name is Rodger. And we are sort of dating then." she said shyly.
"That mean you guys are pretty close?" Chris who has been quiet all along asked.
"Yes." Nancy replied. It seems like she is now getting along with the question and answer session.
"Did Rodger tell you the reason behind their moving out?" Chris asked.
"He said a man moved in with Mr Abib and his mother detest the man." Nancy replied.
"Do you know the man's name?" Chris asked.
"He never told me his name, he said its confidential but he decodes his name as R.O.A." Nancy explained.
Richard gave Chris a knowing look. Chris pass the notepad in which he had been jotting all what Nancy had told them.
The two men stood up to leave.
"Miss Nancy, thank you for sparing your time to talk to us." Chris said extending his hands for a handshake.
"Its my obligation to help in investigations. But do you think all i said are relevant to what you are in search of?" She asked.
"You've been helpful." Chris replied and walked out to join Richard in the car.
Nancy waved the shut the door.
"Richie what do you think we should do?" Chris asked.
"firstly, lets get Rodger to tell us about the new man." Richard said.
"Let me go back in and get his contact. " Chris volunteered.
"No, don't. We'll come back later." Richard advised.
"What about Anderson?" Chris asked.
"Think about the name the girl gave us." Richard said.
"R. O. A." Chris added.
"Rofl Oier Anderson." Richard explained and switched on the ignition as he drove out of the street slowly to avoid suspicion.
"I guess, Oriol should be able to run a search on Abib?" Chris asked and Richard gave him the go ahead to make the call.

D9ty7: GOODNIGHT GUYS.
I went beyond my limit by posting three updates today but you guys aren't commenting.
You can advice me if i am getting it all wrong. I'll improve with time. Please drop your comments.

As For Me, I Dey 'Gbadun' You Oo !!

Getting it wrong??
*reads all over again*...I no c d wrong oooo...u'r doing a gud job, dnt assume evry1 isn't commenting...
4 instance I just got 2 read d last 2 updates..

As 4 d R.O.A name...i think it was easily decoded...most times dese pple tend 2 use names dt are difficult 2 unravel...#My Thinking Tho

U're too much ! But this Oriol guy na judas o !

D9ty7: GOODNIGHT GUYS.
I went beyond my limit by posting three updates today but you guys aren't commenting.
You can advice me if i am getting it all wrong. I'll improve with time. Please drop your comments.

keep doing ur thing bro, trust me the comments will come. your writing is excellent save for the spacing

Interesting updates boss..
Actually, there is one thing I want to point out in your update. It was reported that the vice president's motorcade was attacked some twenty minutes ago on his way from the airport..
Is either its "some minutes ago or twenty minutes ago"….

Well done...

--continuation--
Richard and Chris got back into L.A.T.U, they parted ways as they both went into their respective offices.
Richard diverted his headed direction to Bill's office.
"How was it?" Bill asked.
"Great." Richard replied.
"What have you got?" Bill asked again.
"We met a girl, who lived close to Anderson's hideout. Anderson's hideout was owned by one Mr Abib. We are really progressing." Richard explained.
"Lets bring the girl in for questioning." Bill advised.
"It's too early for that. Moreso, she's not a suspect." Richard explained.
"No problems." Bill smiled.
"That's good to hear." Bill said.
"Summon all department heads for meeting." Richard advised.
"Will do just that." Bill answered.
Richard turned and walked towards the door.
"Richie?" Bill asked.
"Yes?" Richard answered.
"Am sorry about your wife and the detention stuff. You see....." Bill was explaining.
"Come off it. It's nothing." Richard replied and exited Bill's office.
¤¤CONFERENCE ROOM¤¤
"It is with joy i announce to you that investigation about Anderson is progressing. Agent Chris tell us what you got." Bill began.
Chris stood up and opened his notepad.
"Anderson lived in a semi-detached house in Allen avenue along Oisbourne road. A bungalow is located very close to it. We succeeded in meeting with the occupant of the bungalow, who in turn told us that Anderson lives with one Mr Abib." Chris explained and sat down.
"Run a search on Mr Abib." Bill ordered the computer operators in the meeting.
Oriol sat down looking at his computer screen.
"Got it. Mr Abib was a former convict. He has a small bar down Oisbourne road." Nina said.
"Is that all?" Chris asked.
"No, i got his twitter handle here. He tweets that a party will hold in his house today." Nina explained.
"That's good. Get all men ready for action. We need to strike." Bill replied pointing to Chris.
"Okay." Chris replied and everyone of them left the room back to their duty post.
Oriol left and walked to the restroom. He brought out his phone.
"Abib, abort the party with immediate effect. A tactical team is on its way to nab Anders, one of your neighbours, the bungalow owned by that holticulturist told us about you." Oriol poured out and ended the call.
He walked out of the restroom only to find Eric(Richard's fourteen years old boy) standing outside the door.
Oriol walked out without uttering a word even though he knew he has been caught or so he thought.

--to be continued--

Chei ! ..make dem no kill dat boy o

[color=#000099][/color]great story so far bt my guy I av sum observation 2make: abt dat vice presido attack according 2ur write up u made us believe dat it happened sum 20mins ago,u also made us 2believe dat LATU is a top intelligence security unit,now dis is my point if d so called LATU is dis important I believe dey shud av bin informed earlier nt 20mis after n definitely nt frm d press its so absurd 2 tink dat d press got d news b4 LATU n actually reported it b4 LATU knew abt it, I believe all dis top intelligence security unit av a general time line in which dey share info among oneanoda so I believe LATU shud av known abt d news earlier b4 d press reported it,guy dis is a top security write up u nid 2 watch out 4dis kind of small loopholes....aba enuf seriousnes *turns off my critic mode switchs on my bouncer mode * hope u guys are enjoyin d show rmb if u nid anytin lemme knw...hey secretary logowhiz dat guy in white t shirt @ d far end of d 1st row nids sumtin pls go attend 2 him tanx....*goes bak. 2my duty post* nice work ogami d9ty7...

This is unfair o......how dem go do Richard that strong thing na!!haba!!!D9ty7 I go vex o!

@D9ty7: u're doing a gr8 work...it aint easy 2 create a story especially 1 dt has 2 do with action

bt my observations, u r asking 4 comments...mind u comments include observations as well.
I made an observation earlier, LogoDWhiz did same and now Walewunmi has equally joined and u did not reply me or the others... Why now?

Back biting

Keep d gud work going...u r doing jst gr8

Im fully bk nw.dis z gonna b interestin.any popcorn nd zobo in d huz?

walewunmi: [color=#000099][/color]great story so far bt my guy I av sum observation 2make: abt dat vice presido attack according 2ur write up u made us believe dat it happened sum 20mins ago,u also made us 2believe dat LATU is a top intelligence security unit,now dis is my point if d so called LATU is dis important I believe dey shud av bin informed earlier nt 20mis after n definitely nt frm d press its so absurd 2 tink dat d press got d news b4 LATU n actually reported it b4 LATU knew abt it, I believe all dis top intelligence security unit av a general time line in which dey share info among oneanoda so I believe LATU shud av known abt d news earlier b4 d press reported it,guy dis is a top security write up u nid 2 watch out 4dis kind of small loopholes d9ty7...

L.A.T.U wasn't informed about the attack as a result of their inconsistency. I wuld have loved you all to kip ur fingers crossed and know why L.A.T.U was scrapped off from recieving news immediately. Anyways thanks for the observations.
@LogoDWhiz, Stefikal and Walewunmi.

Hameenat94: Im fully bk nw.dis z gonna b interestin.any popcorn nd zobo in d huz?

Ask LogoDWhiz, he'll gve u wat u nid.

The story is interesting& i'm interested in it

So far, so good. Great work

D-Ninety Seven! welldone oo

D-NinetySeven !

Hameenat94: Im fully bk nw.dis z gonna b interestin.any popcorn nd zobo in d huz?

yeah... But we have a prob, we dont have sobo, but we have la casera

--continuation--
Agent Richard and Agent Chris drove down to Oisbourne road in a quest to nab Anderson and his crew during the party.
They parked their car at the entrance of the street. They walked towards the end of the street where Anderson's house was located. Immediately they got to a vintage position through which they can see Anderson's hideout, they split. Richard was walking on the left side on the road while Chris was walking on the right side.
They got to a T-junction that stretched to the left leading to Nancy's house and to the right leading to Abib's house. They exchanged position as Richard changed from the left to the right and Chris from the right to the left.
Richard walked towards Abib's house casually to avoid suspicion. He walked past the house and turned into an old farmhouse where he could see all the happenings in the house with the help of his binoculars.
Chris got to the Douglas house and knocked on the door.
"Agent Chris!" Nancy exclaimed on opening the door.
"Good afternoon Nancy." Chris greeted.
"Come in." Nancy said opening the door wider.
Chris walked into the sitting room and sat down on the couch he sat on the last time they came.
"Mum! The man i told you about is here." Nancy called on her mother.
A woman in her late fourties came into the sitting room from a room Chris assumed to be the laundry room because Mrs Douglas hand's were wet.
"Good afternoon ma'am." Chris said rising to his feet.
"Good afternoon sir. Sit down." Mrs Douglas replied.
Chris sat down and brought out his notepad.
"You know, i was actually scared when Nancy told me that some men came to question her about Mr Abib." Mrs Douglas began.
"You have no reason to be scared madam. We came just for questioning. You know to enhance our investigation, considering the fact that you are our prime suspect' neighbour." Chris explained.
"But what is Mr Abib's offence?" Mrs Douglas asked.
"He was involved in recents terrorist attacks in the state." Chris replied.
"But what concrete evidence do you have to backup your claim?" mrs Douglas asked.
"It was reported that a man called Rofl Anderson stays with him. And this Anderson of a man is a terrorist on the government's wanted list." Chris explained.
"I can be of help." Mrs Douglas said.
"How?" Chris asked.
"My husband normally hang out with Mr Abib on sundays." Mrs Douglas explained.
"His workplace?" Chris asked.
"MicBrights horticulture ,18, carrow road, west seatle." Mrs Douglas dictated while Chris jotted.
"Thanks madam. You've been really helpful." Chris said shaking hands with Mrs Douglas before he left.
He got out and switched on a communicator attached to his ears, he dialled a number on his phone.
"Mrs Douglas told me her husband is a friend to Mr Abib and i've gotten his workplace address." Chris informed Richard.
"Call L.A.T.U now and tell them to run a search on how far the place is. Then you go there for further questioning while i stay put here keeping watch on Abib's movements." Richard ordered.
"Okay sir." Chris replied.
He walked some distance and go to where their car was parked. Then he put a call through to L.A.T.U.
"Agent Oriol on the line." A voice said from L.A.T.U's end.

--to be continued--

My Boss, awesome brain work here... People don't know how tasking it is to paint pictures to words, hmmmmmmmmmm... I salute U Boss... Welldone Sir... Master Piece...

Must de always communicate to this mole of am agent, oriol? The earlier they dump him the beta for dem in thier quest to end this terrorism