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| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 10:41pm On Dec 23, 2013 |
Dear my noble readers, sowi if I'm so slow in updating..... just kinda busy....tanks for your understanding...... #simplicity# |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 10:43pm On Dec 23, 2013 |
tanks.....@la- jume.... I will work on that.... |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 12:41pm On Dec 24, 2013 |
I wokeup healthy and strong,had breakfast and zoomed to the chamber. I found the profession interesting just only because the S.A.N was nice . Apart from that, I heard different cases everyday most of which were humorous. oooh less I forget,the Secretary was awesome. apart from being beautiful. she was damn sexy that caught the vision of my eyes. she had an open heart.a soft one,and a heart I can talk to. I was about to reveal my heart raps,when S.A.N Al-amin walks in and ordered me to his office. At exactly 5.30pm,I left the chamber for our usual rehearsal. I was so happy to meet my friends in good condition. we talked,gisted and rehersed. " how are we going to raise the money". Mubarak asked.........it sounds like a jamb question at first. "The amount is huge.and we still need to get costumes or what do you think?" olumide uttered. at this time I was so deep in taught. I knew my friends won't be able raise much because of their financial status. hmmm! a home without money.is like a house without pillars" I said within. |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 1:05pm On Dec 24, 2013 |
it was already late when I got home.different thought ranging through my mind. I taught of the reaction to expect most specifically from my dad. ooooh what a night! it will be" I said. As I walked in slowly to the sitting room.everywhere was dark which signifies that everyone was already asleep. I felt so calm that atleast I would sleep with no complaints on my head. As I was climbing the steps to my room, I heard a groan from behind with the full light on.I stopped, shivering, and very scared to look back. I taught of my father immediately: a lion that will eat me up. 2 Likes |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 9:54am On Dec 25, 2013 |
merry Xmas to u my noble readers |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 10:14am On Dec 25, 2013 |
What a relief! when I heard my mum voice. " why are you home this late son?" she asked. I turned back,stepping down confidently. " mum you scared me....". I apologised to her and told her my friends and I were discussing some issues". what issues son?"she asked with a calm tone. I sat beside her and reveal everything, including the financial support we needed. she paused for some seconds,stood up, and walked around. my mum was a caring woman,a mother, and a special friend to me. she understood my intentions,celebrate with me when I'm happy and cry with me when I'm sad. As for my sister, I don't know.......she looks cool.....but I never trusted her.i tried to always share most of my taught with her, but something do kept pushing me back. |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by LaJuMe: 11:24am On Dec 25, 2013 |
noble4d: merry Xmas to u my noble readersmerry xmas |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 8:41pm On Dec 25, 2013 |
alryt |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by stefikal(f): 9:37pm On Dec 25, 2013 |
Noble just stumbled on ur story... Good storyline I must tell u, but watch your paragraphing, spacing, length, tenses, spellings. You can read stories of other writers who use the same style of narration as yours. And before you post each chapter try to read them. That way you can picture how your readers will feel when reading them, mind you some chapters will end up being messed up. But your aim should be bringing out the beauty in the mess. #following 1 Like |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 10:29pm On Dec 25, 2013 |
typing on mobile is not an easy task.... no matter how many times a work is reviewed,there will still be errors. As for the tenses,u should know that I employed Ist person narrative technique. tanks |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 10:41pm On Dec 25, 2013 |
As for the paragraphing, I never want it to be that way........ |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by stefikal(f): 10:52pm On Dec 25, 2013 |
noble4d: typing on mobile is not an easy task.... no matter how many times a work is reviewed,there will still be errors. As for the tenses,u should know that I employed Ist person narrative technique. tanks I understand...but would u believe if I tell u I've neva used a laptop to type any of my updates both on NL and on my blog. I do evrytin via my small nokia 200... Just try 2 improve. All d best 2 Likes |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 12:32am On Dec 26, 2013 |
alryt tanks 2 Likes |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 11:53am On Dec 26, 2013 |
My mum said we shouldn't get worried that she would take a step. I felt so calm and happy as I requested for my meal. Not too long that I saw my dad stepping down from the mini steps, tip-toe It was. he yawned and looked so tired. I left my food and rushed towards him. I greeted him briskly placing my right hands to my tummy. he only came down to give me the jamb scratch card to fill immediately. after my meal,I filled the form online. I couldn't get a sleep, I was thinking about the secretary. I found her so irresistible. " is this love" I asked myself. I had never felt that way all my life. falling in love at 18 was unimaginable........ I stood still, placing my hand to my heart, feeling every bit of it. "she is older,how will I tell her? what will I tell her? when should I tell her?" this are the questions warbling through my heart. I went low, placing my head on the pillow and dozed off. |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by donifez(m): 1:38pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
I saw ur username,so i decided to read...nice story,but u interchange thought for taught sometimes and also your tenses,there is a place you said i couldn't caught some sleep,get would be better instead of caught.....by the way we are all learning...more ink to your pen, i dont really know if i will be able to write a story...always poem,poem and more poem,will try to very soon. 1 Like |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by Gabriel6(m): 1:52pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
Following |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by Inyanga(m): 2:12pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
*Grabs a chair* What happens next..? Nice story though |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by lymelyte(m): 2:23pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by Ehichrisco(m): 2:44pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
No be lie |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by Aliydave(m): 2:56pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
Following... Nice story. Happy boxing day |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by adegwurulez(m): 2:58pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
noble4d: As for the paragraphing, I never want it to be that way........ noble4d: typing on mobile is not an easy task.... no matter how many times a work is reviewed,there will still be errors. As for the tenses,u should know that I employed Ist person narrative technique. tanksfirst of all, good work and congrats on hitting fp. That said, i dont want you to put all your blames on ur mobile phone. proof reading aint all about reading with ur 'writer's' eye but doing so with ur 'reader's' eye. You can blame phone for pagraphing(some java phones cant paragragh) but you cant blame phone for tenses and spelling. Some of us type with android phones(no buttons). Just make ur proof reading a lil more critical. All the best man. 1 Like |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by chiefololade: 3:23pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
following |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 3:35pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
alright tanks...my nobles readers.......the errors will be corrected |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by sowprice(m): 3:53pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
nice1 |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by Ephhay(f): 4:24pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
#Following# |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by sheddyboy: 4:29pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
adegwurulez: |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by stefikal(f): 5:07pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
Congrats on hitting FP Noble... adegwurulez: Mr Ade plz how do u find typing on an android, I want to change my fone but I'm worried it will affect my typing and all |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by adegwurulez(m): 5:20pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
stefikal: Congrats on hitting FP Noble...Android is very 'user friendly' They are some apps that can help writers. personally,i use my memo to type my work. So anytime i want to update on nl, i just proof read then copy and paste. This way, you can finish your work before posting them online but lazy me, i prefer to upload half works. All am saying is, 'you go enjoy android'. |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by stefikal(f): 5:25pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
adegwurulez: thanks na typing with touch screen be problem now |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by noble4d(m): 6:14pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
to type with touch screen e no easy oooooo  .......dats wat I'm using |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by shorxynla(m): 6:16pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
Nice story! But hearing Five star group hope the story is not about Kcee (limpopo crooner)  |
| Re: Road To Fame (A Fictional Story) by trixandra(f): 6:18pm On Dec 26, 2013 |
noble4d: to type with touch screen e no easy ooooooUse prediction. thats what I usually use. it saves time and auto corrects |
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