Abu Mikey:

1st to comment

quivah: Do you hope to spit this one on a beat?

Or its just a textcee thing?

god_of_music: Please y'all should rate, criticize, scatter, arrange and tell me how my rhymes be!

You must not derail please, just tell me where my faults is and try to correct me. Thanks...

Errm. . . Life is a B1tch, you just gotta keep banging/
You surprised? It happened thousands of years before Christ. . . She ain't a virgin/

Mad _Dope!

Story of my life. . . I never thought i could be a rapper/
I was busy writing books and comics, my best artwork was the metro Skycrapper/

Rubbish!

But now na me dey reign, as i dey ehn.. i dey rap something wey dey make sense/
If you no like me, abeg oga go sit down for that fence/

Giiyaz, you dey craze ni? , strike out this rubbish jor

Just yesterday a brother tried to mess with my dream/
i was like, you ain't sh'it, your case is a piece of an ''iceberg'', your chance to get to ma level is ''slim''/

Mah Nigga »» WordplayOfLife

It's kinda akward, i wish Jay Z was my dad, Blue my sis and Beyonce ma wife/
[s]My hommie laughed and was like. . Keep dreamin, Such is life/ [/s]

This would make a hip-hop head look so uncool like my Father's brother

But i got the mind of a hustler/ i'm never a quiter/
prolly i could get a Beyonce look alike if ah dig her/

New cars, real cash, women and bottles going through my mind/
my ambition is to be that celeb y'all never seen his kind/

Nice

Verified tweeter and facebook account/
Chillin' beside the pool, of'cause ladies massaging my bones... That, Thomas can never doubt/

I keep reppin' the East-coast/
But shoutout to my real nigga M.I.. He was the ''butter'' to my bread-toast/

For ya dreams ba?

I'm lookin' forward to that day when the ''fat 'I'' gon' be ''rolling dollars''/
My Cheapest cars be the black and white Range-Rovers/

I like this

.....Oh i remember the words of my dad/
He always said ''A real man is that man who keeps travelling even when the going is bad''/

And with these words he sowed in me, i'm sure he's gonna reap/
Yeah i wrote this one down with passion that's why the song' deep!/

Nice one bro

god_of_music: Rate me na



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deejay_harry1: 7/10 dope

which one be drugs i typed D.O.P.E... nawa seun...

god_of_music: Your mate dey give 8 you dey give 7... Greedy and wicked ''Gambler'' like you!



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deejay_harry1:


if i give you 8 now, which one i go give you when you release track!??

god_of_music: Whatever

Guy mo cut that deal, i don't think e make sense!


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deejay_harry1:

backdoor msg

god_of_music: It's a verse from the song i'm writing ''DEEP''


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god_of_music: This would make a hip-hop head look so
''uncool'' like my ''Father's brother''


LWKMD! I get it now, i just kept looking at this and i discovered the lines under the words. . . Then i noticed it's a wordplay!

Nice one


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quivah:
Cool dear...
But I'd suggest you shorten some of ya words (without losing their meaning)for better delivery... except if you know you are going faster on the longer lines..

god_of_music: My delivery on this track is perfect... Though a line may seem too long, it's just perfect when i'm saying it.

Thanks baby.



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quivah:
... if delivery is perfect about the flow..?
You know bars are calculated on a beat.

Anyways, wish you the best dear

Andyblaze: Wow......!

This Is D.O.P.E!
I even prefer it to your other lyric thread!

BTW Do as Abu Mikey said, strike out those lines he said you should strike out...your wordplay is good mahn...abeg no dull me next year o, try enter studio do something us

god_of_music: Thanks Andy bro, i will do exactly


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Andyblaze:
no p man....u na boss na!

god_of_music: Biko Mazi Andy, stop flattering me



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Andyblaze:
Go N Die

god_of_music:


You must gimme 2 million for this insult oo!


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Andyblaze:
Looool No be wetin u de like to tell people these days?

god_of_music: Ehen If gods and Governors do, you sef go wan do??



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