hello 2 all aspiring writers on nairaland, heres to challenging your seductive genius. . . .

On a worn out mouka foam we sat, she with her legs crossed (good gal style) and eyes downcast, me perched on the edge of the bed holding her arms with my eager hands while staring at her nubile form with the dreamy eyes of a slave. a sudden draught of air blew in from the chaotic streets of port harcourt, four floors below, ruffling her blouse and revealing two hard dots on her chest. It was then i knew i had to make a move, with a heavy breath and thickened voice of a larynx twisted with lust

i said "Ada"

slowly those long eyelashes lifted uncovering oval eyes that told stories of her Nnewi upbringing, eyes that asked no questions, eyes that beckoned like a lighthouse to a sailor

this was the moment

slowly, i leant nearer, my lips found hers, tongues entangled, fluids exchanged, while my left hand roamed the entire 5,6" of her sensous length
meanwhile, my right hand explored her thighs with the curiosity and boldness of a child, it was a thing of beauty to see those panties slide off legs that'll make kelly brook's look deformed, with tongue slithering, i gradually made my way down, past that elegant neck, through those twin molds of joy(D-cup), across that perfect belly button, and finally to the honey hole, covered with weeds from many years of neglect. . .

with 0.437 pints of my blood pumping to my love muscle, alongsides a brain starved of oxygen, u'll agree with me that at this point it was pretty hard to think

and so it happened that just as i was about penetrating, i noticed her secondary school I.D and heard the raucous voice of an alpha male. . .

her FATHER

the end

i hope ya'll enjoyed it, now lets see wat u,ve gat

first you need to define where the sublety is in the piece, and also where is the seduction. The title is interesting, but doesnt match the content. as in, its rather misleading.

Seduction:
Traditionally, the word implied leading someone astray, as when a woman lured a man into a sexual relationship. In contemporary usage, seduction is frequently used more broadly as a synonym for the act of charming someone—male or female—by an appeal to the senses. The seducing agent may even be nonhuman, such as music or food.


Subtle:

fine or delicate in meaning or intent; difficult to perceive or understand: subtle irony. 
3. delicate or faint and mysterious: a subtle smile. 
4. requiring mental acuteness, penetration, or discernment: a subtle philosophy. 
5. characterized by mental acuteness or penetration: a subtle understanding. 
6. cunning, wily, or crafty: a subtle liar. 
7. insidious in operation: subtle poison. 
8. skillful, clever, or ingenious: a subtle painter



The seduction is supposed to happen before the sex or pre-intimacy- often before the man or woman consciously falls for the seducer. Subtlety is supposed to mean something is not obvious. Is that the case here.

tpia:

first you need to define where the sublety is in the piece, and also where is the seduction. The title is interesting, but doesnt match the content. as in, its rather misleading.

Seduction:
Traditionally, the word implied leading someone astray, as when a woman lured a man into a sexual relationship. In contemporary usage, seduction is frequently used more broadly as a synonym for the act of charming someone—male or female—by an appeal to the senses. The seducing agent may even be nonhuman, such as music or food.


Subtle:

fine or delicate in meaning or intent; difficult to perceive or understand: subtle irony. 
3. delicate or faint and mysterious: a subtle smile. 
4. requiring mental acuteness, penetration, or discernment: a subtle philosophy. 
5. characterized by mental acuteness or penetration: a subtle understanding. 
6. cunning, wily, or crafty: a subtle liar. 
7. insidious in operation: subtle poison. 
8. skillful, clever, or ingenious: a subtle painter



The seduction is supposed to happen before the sex or pre-intimacy- often before the man or woman consciously falls for the seducer. Subtlety is supposed to mean something is not obvious. Is that the case here.

See Critique

sorry i didnt correlate btw the title and article

doyin13:

See Critique 

And very well done too.

Tpia, I applaud you for critiquing without mocking or degrading.  If only more people will take a page out of your book.


@ Topic
You tried, you did. . . romance and love isn't really my forte, so I admire people who can go there. Like Tpia has said, it needs a little more subtlety and Seduction.

In my opinion, Seduction is better than then actual sexual intercourse . . .

Utilize the five senses

Sight -  let her look him like he is ice cream and she wants to devour him, Let her talk to him with her eyes
Taste -  Make him believe his life depends on tasting her. Let her show him him she's open to it. . . maybe it's the way she softly bites her lips or just runs her tongue over them.
Touch - She touches him like she's not touching him. . . feathery touch
Smell  - You know people can turned on by smell right? Certain odors in both males and females can trigger arousal.
Sound - let him hear what's he's doing to her, Maybe a quick breath in take, a soft sigh, a subtle moan. . .

And the beauty of seduction is it can happen anywhere. They are can be sitting at the dinner with 20 people, They can be in opposite ends of the room, They can be surrounded by100 children and it still works.

Seduction is POWERFUL. 

The first part is only slightly over-descriptive.

can anyone interest us with a piece on the same topic?