Kaycee7: AudreyTimms or whoever U are, I'm going to have U arrested and charged to court on charges of keeping me captivated since the wee hours of this morning with ur fantastic tale.
Sweetheart, U're something else. Keep it up. I'm sure U'll go places

Hehehe! I b don fear o! Tanx a lot

Aliyuozioma: wow, I must say u r more than good, waitn 4more update, followin u til d end.

Tanx dear. Hmm...dts swit of u

Congrats for hitting front page, we now av more followers. You deserve it dear n am happy for you.

I keep loving the story more n more, I trust Oleng to make d ryt choice.

Oya nau come and update.. Much love.

timpaker: I'm telling you. The guy/girl just had me mesmerised. I had to hide somewhere to finish the story to avoid bn distracted. Its no doubt among one of the best stories I've read here on NL. BTW, how you dey self?

Girl. Tanx a lot!

My best part of d series "For the past one month he has been calling you like twenty times a day. Does he work with MTN?" ...Ma'am ur write-up got me spellbound for hrs on end,ure a genius...and errm pls update sharpish nau

princesa: Lol, I find it hard to believe that such kind of possessive fits as shown by Dave still exist. Nah, I'm not a believer.


Congrats on the frontpage hit, you deserve it.

Hehehe! Dey stil exist o! Make I no mention names sha. He alone knows y he's being so possessive. Okay, I know 2 sha. Tanx dear

dadoctore: My best part of d series "For the past one month he has been calling you like twenty times a day. Does he work with MTN?" ...Ma'am ur write-up got me spellbound for hrs on end,ure a genius...and errm pls update sharpish nau

hehehe! Tanx dear

bibie01: Congrats for hitting front page, we now av more followers. You deserve it dear n am happy for you.

I keep loving the story more n more, I trust Oleng to make d ryt choice.

Oya nau come and update.. Much love.

Yipeee right? Tanx dear

Pls guys, I'll try to update b4 12 noon. Visitor don com disturb me and I no no hw I go take discharge am. Tanx everyone 4 following and commenting.

Heeeey Aud! Congrats on hitting FP, I know I promised to read o but me and my plenty pikinses, you know na! But I will read soon, keep up the work, I already know its da bomb sef.... you know na, u be my mentor dat time dat time. .....

repogirl: Heeeey Aud! Congrats on hitting FP, I know I promised to read o but me and my plenty pikinses, you know na! But I will read soon, keep up the work, I already know its da bomb sef.... you know na, u be my mentor dat time dat time. .....

repogirl is finally here! *dancing shoki* I'm honored by ur visit. I undastnd. Tanx dear. Haba! Na we we na. We wre each other's mentor den. Ur story 'False Pretenses' is off da chain! Tanx 4 stopping by.

Dave quickly swerved his car to the curb and practically jumped out of it. He walking briskly to where Oleng and Collins were standing, staring at each other.

"Angel, what's he doing here?" He asked his stunned girlfriend.

Before she could reply, Collins leaned on the car and lazily said,
"Dude, isn't it obvious?"

Oleng saw Dave flex his fingers and knew he intended hitting Collins. She quickly held his hand.

"Please Dave. This whole thing will end right now."

Dave gave Collins a murderous look but kept quiet.

Oleng looked uneasily around her. Passersby were beginning to get interested in the whole scenario. She knew she had to end it here despite the fact that it would break someone's heart.

She walked up to Collins. He stood straight, smiling.

"Collins," she began softly. "I want to apologize for toying with your emotions.

Back in school, I was really getting to like you until you spoke those harsh words to me even after I opened up to you about my past. You called me a wolf in sheep's clothing. I was innocent of that accusation yet it didn't stop you from calling me such.

Well, here standing before you now is a real wolf in sheep's clothing. I really don't feel anything for you. I used you to make my boyfriend jealous. I don't love you, I don't want your money or your gifts and I don't want to marry you."

Dave gave a whoop and came to stand beside her.

Collins turned away and hit his fist on the hood of the car. He was like that for awhile and when he turned around, Oleng's mouth dropped open.

Tears were running down his eyes. Dave snickered. He believed it was just for show. He wasn't moved but Oleng was deeply moved. She really hadn't meant to hurt him.

Collins went to his car to remove the tarpaulin he had used to cover the murano jeep. He spread it haphazardly over the car, hooked the car back to his and drove off.

"Trying to get me jealous, hmm?" Dave chuckled after they couldn't see the car anymore.

Oleng turned to him with tears in her eyes.
"I feel so bad. I really didn't mean to hurt him."

Dave held her hand and led her inside the compound away from the view of their spectators. He hugged her.

"I know but he obviously hurt you first. What happened by the way?"

Oleng shook her head. There was no way she would ever tell Dave what she told Collins. Once bitten, twice shy. Dave would also kick her out of his life.

"Story for another day." She sadly told him.

"Angel, please don't feel bad today of all days. His tears weren't real. They were just to make you feel guilty and you fell for it. He'd make it in Nollywood."

Oleng couldn't help laughing at that. Dave smiled.

Oleng had a good time with Dave and her friends. She came back home exhausted. She had her bath and was about saying her night prayers when her phone beeped. A message had just entered. She smiled. It was probably a late birthday wisher. It was Collins.

"Oleng, I've got to be angry with you for what you told me earlier in the day but I realise I have no right whatsoever to be. I'm at fault in everything. I lost you due to my own stupidity.

For the first time in my life, I had a heart to heart talk with my father and he made me see reasons to give you up and accept defeat. Dave is a lucky guy.

I'll be leaving for London next week for my masters. I had planned for you to join me there but I guess that's wishful thinking now. I wish you the best in life.

I'll never forget you."

Tears came to Oleng's eyes but she smiled through them as she remembered good times with him. She'd return the box of gifts to him.

*Haters of Collins, this is the end of Collins and Unfulfilled Promises. So make una free d guy abeg. Funny, he actually found his virgin in london but he never forgot Oleng*

Longer update later please.

DISCLAIMER
For all those who enjoy preying on the hard work and sweat of people,

1. I've got copyright 4 dis story and others I've written. Wen u get brother 4 dre, na small tin 2 get.

2. I get agent/manager wey sabi para wella.

3. I've got a lawyer whose favorite words are, "Let's sue them to court!"

So beware! Permission can be sought for to be placed on blogs and other sites but definitely not in YOUR name.

Thanks.

I still see Eric in the big picture.
I think his elder brother sent the message oleng received while eric wasnt around.
I know they'll still meet. That's why the story is titled "unfulfilled promise"
This story will likely end with a tragedy.
One thing im certain about is Eric and Oleng are going to meet again

Audrey timms, u re such a dear. I didnt regret readin ur work and all thz to my luvin Princesa for recommendin dis. Weldone! But i sincerely hope that d two Erics shall reconcile wit Oleng.

#TeamEricandOleng#

Audrey,what I really admire is the simplicity of ur grammar. Your descriptive power is still coming up( I really look out for that). You have a story that easily gets to your audience,that's great but don't be too carried away to explore other areas. Wonderful one and by the way,keep it coming...... How do the posts come? Daily?

See as I leave work wey my oga give me they read dis totori story, please miss audrey, do quick come post de remainder of the story here before the piss wey I dey hold since go burst.

Chai, I can relate with oleng's experience, it is not an easy one rara rara.

started reading yesterday now i'm here
nice 1 Audrey
I hope Eric has a better explanation cos I want 2 c him 2geda with Oleng living happily ever after




more ink 2 ur pen

less i 4got more data also

U are a pro bro! M hungry 4 more update, I mean longer version....boss

I dnt tnk dz has ended o ;
wat abt d aunty vien secret
wat abt eric d whereabout,dead or alive ....taking kia cud mean alot of tnz
wat abt eric wat is his fate if he claims he really isn't guilty
wat abt linda,she eat her cake and have it, suffering dat innocent child and still living life okay

pammusphy: I still see Eric in the big picture.
I think his elder brother sent the message oleng received while eric wasnt around.
I know they'll still meet. That's why the story is titled "unfulfilled promise"
This story will likely end with a tragedy.
One thing im certain about is Eric and Oleng are going to meet again

Prophet pammusphy, I gbadu u o! Let's kip our fingers crossed. Tanx 4 following and commenting

toykathy: Audrey timms, u re such a dear. I didnt regret readin ur work and all thz to my luvin Princesa for recommendin dis. Weldone! But i sincerely hope that d two Erics shall reconcile wit Oleng.

#TeamEricandOleng#

Tanx dear. Tanx 2 Princesa too. I hpe so 2

Essyydiamond: Audrey,what I really admire is the simplicity of ur grammar. Your descriptive power is still coming up( I really look out for that). You have a story that easily gets to your audience,that's great but don't be too carried away to explore other areas. Wonderful one and by the way,keep it coming...... How do the posts come? Daily?

Beautiful and accurate analysis. I dnt tink I hv descriptive power @ all. I'm finding that part difficult 2 get. I tink d prblm stems frm hw I read novels. I skip descriptive parts cos dey bore me and go straight 2d conversations. I'll wrk on it. Pls throw more light on wat u min by other areas, I rily dnt get u. Yeah, I post daily. Tanx 4 following and commenting. I appreciate it.

This is Mindblowingly awesome. Abeg nor mind my grammar...Audrey you're GOOD(Daz an understatement)...More okra to your elbow.

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avuekwe: See as I leave work wey my oga give me they read dis totori story, please miss audrey, do quick come post de remainder of the story here before the piss wey I dey hold since go burst.

Chai, I can relate with oleng's experience, it is not an easy one rara rara.

Abeg go piss o! B4 ur bladder burst. Me I no fit rite statement 4 police station o! Yep, she's been through a lot. Tanx 4 following and commenting

hebenz: started reading yesterday now i'm here
nice 1 Audrey
I hope Eric has a better explanation cos I want 2 c him 2geda with Oleng living happily ever after




more ink 2 ur pen

less i 4got more data also

Congrats. I hpe so too. Tanx 4 following and commenting

timpaker: I'm telling you. The guy/girl just had me mesmerised. I had to hide somewhere to finish the story to avoid bn distracted. Its no doubt among one of the best stories I've read here on NL. BTW, how you dey self?

Paker, I'm fine. Just trying to work around limited internet connection

Savigne: This is Mindblowingly awesome. Abeg nor mind my grammar...Audrey you're GOOD(Daz an understatement)...More okra to your elbow.

Lol! Tanx dear. Okra? Me I no lyk okra o!

Audrey post now!!!

Audrey see how you just dey pack crowd,more grease to your finger tips

Hi,Audrey,congrats for making front page. I noticed a mistake. at first,u said Emem's dad came to terms with d baby and was happy it was a boy. then later,u wrote DT her dad disowned her because of d baby.