The magazine that would be publishing the story has requested that the story be taken off nairaland.

Bravo, Einstein! Well done; at last a REAL "Naija-made" horror tale. Not to compare with a King or Sheri S. Tepper, but still good - very good.

However (I don't know to say this without it sounding like a cliche), I think the story could do with a few more swipes of the literary brush - you get?

Thanks for the comment, Kay9. My main goal in producing this forthcoming short story collection is to entertain.

i keep on getting more n more addicted to the odd combo of people that make up lit-land
nice story
very catching if i might add

Thanks to the two people who have replied so far. The replies shows i am on the righ track. My aim in writing is to write the weirdest and most entertaining story possible. I will post the second story in the forthcoming collection soon.