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| #the Message Of My Mother by Psalmology(m): 3:13pm On Dec 07, 2014 |
THE MESSAGE OF MY MOTHER. ---Psalmology. The message of mother Digging deep by day into my asunder. Never weak, never wither Was her message to my soul in my time of winter. Saunter to your world of imagination Was her solidary admonition when the loud silence in me couldn't just be still. Never bow your head even when the world beef at you, Never, never and never Was the song she rhythmically sang into my ears When blood still govern her veins. But now, she is at the realm Where my arms can't reach her balmy palm. |
| Re: #the Message Of My Mother by holatin(m): 3:34pm On Dec 07, 2014 |
nice post but over long |
| Re: #the Message Of My Mother by ayd91(m): 7:21pm On Dec 07, 2014 |
Your poem is nice, though I think you ought to arrange it for an easy read, plus the ending was rather brief (my opinion). All in all, Thumbs up and keep writing. |
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