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Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by StormAngel(f): 8:50am On Mar 26, 2015
Fatalveli:
Updated

@Thronekid, I sight you bro

@stuff46, bro... I don drop another comment ooogrin

@missmossy, thanks...

@StormAngel, where are you boo

I am right here boo

chaii i am late ooo angry
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 9:19am On Mar 26, 2015
StormAngel:


I am doing great dear.
Thanks alot cheesy

how about you?
I'm tranquil,,, Nice Dp, you're so pretty!
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Hawlahscho(m): 1:36pm On Mar 26, 2015
continue the story na. am addicted to it
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by StormAngel(f): 5:25pm On Mar 26, 2015
Fatalveli:
I'm tranquil,,, Nice Dp, you're so pretty!
cheesy grin

Thanks dearie
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by StormAngel(f): 5:26pm On Mar 26, 2015
Fatalveli:
I'm tranquil,,, Nice Dp, you're so pretty!
cheesy grin

Thanks dearie

please hun com and update sad
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 6:20pm On Mar 26, 2015
StormAngel:

cheesy grin

Thanks dearie

please hun com and update sad
I'm very tired, maybe I'll update in the evening!!!

Pls bear with me

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Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 6:20am On Mar 27, 2015
Baba fatal always doing great. Oboy you drink blood?? Chai, God deh!


GIVE US UPDATE
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Ishilove: 6:52am On Mar 27, 2015
Fatalveli, thanks for blowing the whistle on NightWhisperer. Anywhere you and others come across a plagiarised story on Nairaland, please let the mods know and they will be dealt with.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 9:52am On Mar 27, 2015
Ishilove:
Fatalveli, thanks for blowing the whistle on NightWhisperer. Anywhere you and others come across a plagiarised story on Nairaland, please let the mods know and they will be dealt with.
Comprehended!
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 1:47pm On Mar 27, 2015
Iku ti npojugba eni, owe ni npa. Adia fun ori, l'ojo ti nsawo re'le Olofin, adia fun Osanimogbo, to l'oun o joye ile baba re... Make I no start reciprocating baba's jargons o. You have a nice genre here.

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Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 1:52pm On Mar 27, 2015
Fatalveli:
I really don't think I can translate the yoruba into english, the yoruba is a very deep one and it can only be translated by professors and gurus like your sir...
Yes, boss! Orisaye, the vestal votary of Obatala in Osofisan's masterpiece!
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 2:00pm On Mar 27, 2015
Fatalveli:
I really don't think I can translate the yoruba into english, the yoruba is a very deep one and it can only be translated by professors and gurus like your sir...
That will be a product of research. There are some Yoruba words I can translate that many of those professors can't. For instance, 'odidere' bird means 'grey parrot' in English; 'igunnugun' bird -- turkey-buzzard etc. You are doing a great job, bro.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 4:17pm On Mar 27, 2015
StealthIdeals:
That will be a product of research. There are some Yoruba words I can translate that many of those professors can't. For instance, 'odidere' bird means 'grey parrot' in English; 'igunnugun' bird -- turkey-buzzard etc. You are doing a great job, bro.
Thanks bro, hope you're enjoying it?
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 6:42pm On Mar 27, 2015
Nice one,but i felt it's rushed

i mean the forest aspect was rushed

All in all,gud job @ fatalveli
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 8:29pm On Mar 27, 2015
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Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Teebashy(f): 10:22pm On Mar 27, 2015
Short and interesting

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Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nobody: 10:56pm On Mar 27, 2015
Agbe ni gbe ire pade Olokun, aluko ni gbe ire pade Olosa; may the said birds no longer dispatch fortunes to Olokun and Olosa again, but to you Fataveli. Gud job! Works that depict African cultures are becoming rare in Nairaland by the day; that's why a few released will always be appreciated.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by stuff46(m): 7:06am On Mar 28, 2015
Its been a nice one with you brother. Thanks for sharing your thoughts with you and thanks for christianity for coming to liberate us from those dark ages.

Kudos to you.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by StormAngel(f): 1:28pm On Mar 28, 2015
I so much love this story fatalveli grin altho i didnt expect it to end so soon...
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by harjibolar10(m): 3:13pm On Mar 29, 2015
Wow, what a scintillating short story



Oga, thoug you wanna 'taku' on the road, cos if you haven't finish this story ni, I may... NVMD


Thanks bro, it's a nice work, I must confess
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 6:02pm On Apr 15, 2015
Theorbiters, kenikazi, Nimen, Nellyme, pls drop your numbers in here.... Let's have a chat via whatsapp.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by theorbiters: 9:01pm On Apr 15, 2015
Fatalveli:
Theorbiters, kenikazi, Nimen, Nellyme, pls drop your numbers in here.... Let's have a chat via whatsapp.
Hope all is well sir??
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by nellyme(f): 9:09pm On Apr 15, 2015
Fatalveli:
Theorbiters, kenikazi, Nimen, Nellyme, pls drop your numbers in here.... Let's have a chat via whatsapp.

Owkay but hope no cause for alarm?
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 9:27pm On Apr 15, 2015
theorbiters:

Hope all is well sir??
Yeah! Pls drop it here or better still, mail it to either me or thronekid.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Nimen(m): 7:01pm On Apr 16, 2015
Fatalveli:
Theorbiters, kenikazi, Nimen, Nellyme, pls drop your numbers in here.... Let's have a chat via whatsapp.

Hope all is good Fatalveli?
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Fatalveli(m): 7:36pm On Apr 16, 2015
Nimen:


Hope all is good Fatalveli?
Yeah bro. Mail it to me or thronekid.
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Kflorencek(f): 8:30am On May 20, 2015
Interesting story. But I was suprised when the narrator died, and I Was like "if he died then who is narrating the story"?

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Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Ebigbola(f): 11:12pm On May 30, 2016
it has been long u updated hope all is well? wonder y u guys write up unfinished stories
Re: The Broken Oath - A Short Story by Amaga(m): 12:17pm On May 31, 2016
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