Darus05:
[color=#000000][/color]Seriouly some naija police ar stup*d...D7ty9 nice work u ar doing.

Bro, don't be quick to judge o. This story is mere fiction, I don't know if the police acts like this plus the story is not about the NPF.
When I did "All in a circle", the police was at the centre and they ended everything like Jack Bauer, it was my imagination. And in this story, I say 'NO' to Jack Bauer-rism from the police.
That's what imagination does.

D9ty7:

Sorry o, but Al Yakob is not part of Mark snr's names. Maybe you meant Al Biyal? Al Biyal is the Egyptian president who is partnering with Mark Anthony snr.

Then I will like to call you attention to this, on page 8 or 9, where you've wrote and I will quote

... Loyal officers, he was smuggled into the republic of Togo where he underwent treatment and five years later, he travelled to India where he had a facial surgery that had a little effect in changing in outlook from being light skinned to a little bit dark, something Nigerians call chocolate skinned.
As a friend of Sheik Mosur Al Biya, the president of Egypt, Mark Anthony has enjoyed various level of impunity and immunity in the continent of Africa under the disguise of the name, Al Yakub. Mark Anthony made known his decision to punish everyone in Nigeria for celebrating his downfall thirty years ago and the masterminds of the attack in his....

Anyways, I may be wrong thou, and it might also be a mistake from you boss



Whatever It is, I still dey here oooo

harjibolar10:

Then I will like to call you attention to this, on page 8 or 9, where you've wrote and I will quote



Anyways, I may be wrong thou, and it might also be a mistake from you boss



Whatever It is, I still dey here oooo

Sorry oga, I forgot abt the disguise name. I only added dat. No problems, its all good

D9ty7:

Sorry oga, I forgot abt the disguise name. I only added dat. No problems, its all good

No qualm boss

D9ty7:

Bro, don't be quick to judge o. This story is mere fiction, I don't know if the police acts like this plus the story is not about the NPF.
When I did "All in a circle", the police was at the centre and they ended everything like Jack Bauer, it was my imagination. And in this story, I say 'NO' to Jack Bauer-rism from the police.
That's what imagination does.

I knw it's fiction . Txns

atlast, now i can relax. Waitin for nxt update. Weldone d9ty7

Ooh God I'm weeping for those kids

What am i doing here at this time of the day? As if there would be update at the middle of the night. Anyway, D, no disappoint me o, give me early morning dossage o

D war has began, bt his son may b involve d way it looks like. D9ty7 u re @it again. Thanks man

Yeah!!! It's mah birthday, just saying tnx to God for a oda year. OYA oya D9ty7, I need a bdae update dedicated to me ooo. U know na


Cc: Suxxman, alberto2k, stuff46,onemansquad,Olashas
, standd, Kenwins, cm n gimme mah presents o

Skimpledawg:
Yeah!!! It's mah birthday, just saying tnx to God for a oda year. OYA oya D9ty7, I need a bdae update dedicated to me ooo. U know na


Cc: Suxxman, alberto2k, stuff46,onemansquad,Olashas
, standd, Kenwins, cm n gimme mah presents o

Happy birthday bro... Enjoy ya day, grab a bottle of Orijin and cheers







But don't be like these idiots below

alberto2k:


Happy birthday bro... Enjoy ya day, grab a bottle of Orijin and cheers







But don't be like these idiots below

wer av u bn all dz yle niqqa?

Skimpledawg:

wer av u bn all dz yle niqqa?

I've been around bro... I juss say make I dey silent mode make I knw who go miss me...

Turns out that none did *sobs*

Just kidding thou

Nigga' How ya doing?

--continuation--
Tina parked her car five blocks away from Ocean view hotel and turned to face Mark who was punching a number on his phone.
"Hey! Agent Mark on the line."
"Hello sir." A masculine voice boomed at the other end.
"Where are you. I am inside a cream coloured Toyota..." He turned to face Tina who smiled.
"Toyota Camry." She said.
"You heard don't you? Cream coloured Camry, in front of a boutique five blocks away from your stand point." Mark explained.
"I'll be there in a jiffy."
Less than two minutes later, two men walked out of a sky scrapper opposite Ocean view hotel and approached Tina's car. Without being invited, he hopped into the backseat while the other man leaned on the car.
He exchanged pleasantries with the two agents before he started explaining things to them.
"According to the report given to the lady who spied on the man, she claimed he was lodged in room thirty five, third floor, which is directly adjacent to the fourth floor on the sky scrapper. She claimed she heard him speak about the stadium and a certain event going on there." The private investigator explained.
"Be clear with your words." Mark said.
Even the man looked offended at Mark's rudeness, he hid it perfectly.
"I mean the suspect we are talking about her is leading a certain team to the stadium. A SUV drove into the hotel less than five minutes ago and the four occupants of the vehicle all entered the suspect's room."
"It is now getting clearer. Where are your men?" Mark asked.
"They are somewhere inside the sky scrapper keeping tabs on the men in the hotel."
"How many men are they in total? I mean the ones in the hotel and the ones who came to join them?" Tina spoke for the first time.
"According to my calculation. They are ten. The main suspect arrived with six men and the SUV had six men. My boys were able to identify four of the men who came with our suspect who are also in the room with him. Only one man is missing as we speak," The PI(private investigator) explained.
"The suspect is on the move. I repeat, the suspect is on the move." The PI's walkie talkie boomed.
"Copy that."
He faced Mark who had already opened the door.
"Stay put with your men in the sky scrapper as planned, out team enter into the hotel." Mark rushed over to the space bus parked behind Tina's car, briefed the men of the situation and immediately, the drove slowly behind Tina's car, while Mark walked the remaining distance into the hotel.
Mark, Tina and two other agents walked into the hotel reception.
"Lock every entry and exit of this hotel." Mark commanded.
The female receptionist looked at him like he was crazy and ignored him.
"In the best interest of this hotel, lock every entry and exit. Speak to the security. There are terrorists lodged in here." He said hitting his fist on the table.
"Calm down sir. Who are you?"
"Who am I? Can a common man enter a hotel and tell them terrorists are lodged in the hotel?" He asked angrily.
"Mark, go over to room thirty five, I'll take it from here." She said to Mark who calmed down immediately and left.
Tina moved closer to the counter table, introduced herself politely.
"My sister. Check the number of men you have admitted into room thirty five, and you'll know it is against the ethics of hotelling." Tina said calmly.
The lady checked the log book and gasped.
"I just took over some minutes ago. I never admitted such number of men."
"Fine, I think calling the security to lock everywhere won't be difficult." Tina said.
The lady picked the intercom and rang the security post downstairs.
"We are sorry for any inconvinience caused. There are suspected terrorist members inside this hotel. Do not panic. You will all be moved into another hall. The law enforcement agents are here to handle the situation. Thank you." She said to the customers seated waiting to be attended to.
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Mark in company of four agents ran the way up to the third floor until they arrived at room thirty five.
"One...two...three." They kicked the door hard and it burst opened. They moved swiftly into the room, but alas, they met an empty room.
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Tina held her communication device tightly against her ear as she ascended the stairs to the third floor, to join Mark and others.
"I'll be there in seconds. I know someone must have tipped them off." She said.
Just as she arrived at the third floor, she felt a cold metal on her neck. She turned to face the direction where the metal was stretched and saw a young man of about thirty holding the 9mm revolver.
She recognised the man immediately. He was one of the customers seated at the reception while she briefed them on the situation of things.
He gave a wicked smile and immediately, the others whom she suspected as the occupants of room thirty five came around.

--to be continued--

alberto2k:

I've been around bro... I juss say make I dey silent mode make I knw who go miss me...

Turns out that none did *sobs*

Just kidding thou

Nigga' How ya doing?

Bn real good bro. Ya babie az bn missing u tho. Kenwins

Oga Dee more updates plzz. Dz is an appetizer. Me liking dz Tina tho

DEDICATED TO SKIMPLEDAWG, THE FIRST BIRTHDAY CELEBRANT SINCE WE STARTED THIS STORY
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--continuation--
"Tina, are you there?" Mark's voice boomed in her ear through the device.
She felt tempted to tell him the situation of things, but the fear of the consequence made her keep quiet. With the hope that with the device still attached to her ear, everything said by the terrorists would get to Mark. But they knew better, because, she was yet to conclude her thinking when one of them grabbed the device tore it off her ears and smashed it with his feet.
"Where are your colleagues?" One the men asked.
"Downstairs." Tina replied fearfully.
"Liar. Five of you entered the reception. Four came upsatairs, you waited and spoke to the receptionist. Where are the other four?" The spy whom she had seen at the reception asked.
"They came upstairs, but when they met an empty room, the took the other exit." She replied even though she was not sure if she was speaking to the the men who were spotted in room 35 some minutes ago, but it was a risk worth taking.
"You, go in there and confirm her story." The person she guessed to be the superior told one his men and immediately, he left.
"You'll assist us in getting outof here. We have a more bigger plan and Mark Anthony won't take it lightly with us."
Tina understood where they are driving at. She would be held at hostage in exchange of escape and release.
"Now, lets get out of here." And slowly, they walked Tina down the stairs until they got to the reception where everyone looked at Tina in suprise and pity.
"Go down everybody." And everyone bowed down without hesitation.
"Unlock the door." Tina said to the hotel security man who gently unlocked the front door and they all got outside only to be faced by about eleven armed men, and much to her delight, Mark was missing.
"Drop your weapons." Tina told them and they obliged.
"Now, here is the deal, we had the intention of attacking the honourable minister for education today at the stadium, but our lady here has made everything easier." The leader of the terrorist began. And one after the other, they siezed the guns belonging to anti terror agents.
"Now, detonate this bomb." He continued as he gave Tina a tiny remote.
"No way am I going to waste the live of the masses. I'll rather die than kill an innocent soul." She replied.
Tina glanced at the Private investigator who was hidden behind a the security house at the gate, with his gun in hand. He gave her a signal and mouthed something like "do it."
"Do it or not, we will surely detonate the bomb." They informed her.
She reluctantly collected the remote, glanced at the Private Investigator once again and he edged her on to press the button. The reason behind this, she couldn't tell.
Reluctantly, she closed her eyes and pressed the only button on the remote.
"Bomb set, remote area unknown, bomb area undefine. Three minutes." A voice said from the remote.
Tina was pushed away afterwards and just before the men could enter their car, gunshots were rained at them, thanks to the Private investigator and his men who were positioned inside the building opposite the hotel.
In less than a minute, the terrorists have been overpowered, but they were smiling happily, afterall, they had completed their mission whichever ways.
"What the hell were you thinking when you asked me to detonate the bomb?" Tina asked as she dragged the PI away from the scene.
"Mark got it covered. He is on his way to the National stadium. He get the bomb out of the stadium before it detonates." He replied.
Tina quickly unclipped her key from her waist and ran towards her car, the private investigator followed suit.
"What were you thinking when you took such risk? Can you identify where the bomb was dropped?" Tina asked as she joined the main road.
"The bomb was dropped in a truck. Easy to identify."
Tina was yet to be convinced. Because to save lives, the bomb has to be taken to a less populated area or an open field, and three minutes won't be enough, except there is a river around.
"Its emergency." She cried to the LASTMA official close by as she violated the traffic light.
--to be continued--

Skimpledawg:
Yeah!!! It's mah birthday, just saying tnx to God for a oda year. OYA oya D9ty7, I need a bdae update dedicated to me ooo. U know na


Cc: Suxxman, alberto2k, stuff46,onemansquad,Olashas
, standd, Kenwins, cm n gimme mah presents o

Happy birthday Skimpledawg. Long life and prosperity

Thanks so much Bros..... It's gonna make mah day.

D real story just got started..... Am liking d actions n twists. More cells to ya brain Dee.

Harjibolar10, cm n read n analyse o.

olashas:

Happy birthday Skimpledawg. Long life and prosperity

Tnx boo....

Ma'am is this you?

Vibra:
Haba!you guys are wicked,you didn't bother to ask after me.

Kudos to D9ty7

I stopped at page 2

welcome back tho

Oh God three minutes
I'm sweating, D9ty7 come and tell me what happened

Set the world on fire with your dreams and use the flame to light
a birthday candle. HAPPY BIRTHDAY SKIMPLEDAWG!!

bless you!

Hp am nt late D9ty7 > cnt fit wait to start reading ooo

stuff46:
Set the world on fire with your dreams and use the flame to light
a birthday candle. HAPPY BIRTHDAY SKIMPLEDAWG!!

bless you!

Tnx niqqa...

Skimpledawg:
Yeah!!! It's mah birthday, just saying tnx to God for a oda year. OYA oya D9ty, I need a bdae update dedicated to me ooo. U know na


Cc: Suxman, alberto2k, stuff4,onemansqua,Olasha
, stand, Kenwins, cm n gimme mah presents o

May the wishes of ur hrt be granted this special day of ur life and always.
............. Happy birthday dear.........

Skimpledawg:

Bn real good bro. Ya babie az bn missing u tho. Kenwins

Let him know oo.
Alberto2k.... U shld know i miss u lyk WHAT HAPPEN! BTW Albert,if i dnt miss u,who will?

Tellin da truth n paintin Jimmy extra black wl not b bad. Stl Adeola looses. Jimmy is soo annoyin. Tina shd watch it before her son is kidnapped. Hope da bomb is taken out before disaster strikes. D9ty7 kip on

kenwins:

May the wishes of ur hrt be granted this special day of ur life and always.
............. Happy birthday dear.........

Tnx bae

kenwins:

May the wishes of ur hrt be granted this special day of ur life and always.
............. Happy birthday dear.........

Tnx bae

D9ty7 u sef u b bomb,sha dy detonate dy go wit d stories wey u dy drop

D9ty7 u sef b bomb sha dy detonate d stories dy go

@ Skimpledawg, happy birthday, long life and prosperity



@d9ty7, keep em coming boss + Thanks for the update

Happy birthday bro. Now the action has begun. Good job bro