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Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 8:17pm On May 31, 2015 |
Pastor Mayowa-pastor.Mrs Mayowa-pastor's wife. Elder and Deaconess Banise-parent. Bukola, Temitope, Toluwani-Children. Dr Famulo. Moyinoluwa. Gateman. Others. |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Queening(f): 8:35pm On May 31, 2015 |
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Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 8:37pm On May 31, 2015 |
CHAPTER ONE Bukokasobbing silently). Elder Bamise: Bukola oooo. Bukola:sir sir. Elder Bamise:it's better you come here quickly and tell us why you're vommitting. Bukolawalks in)sir, i'm here. Dcns Bamisehissed at her) Are you deaf? Your dad wants to know why you're vommitting and you're busy shouting sir sir. Bukola:i just feel like vommitting ma. Elder and Dcns Bamise: Ehn!!! Dcns Bamise:it's better you tell us now before we later find out. Are you pregnant? Bukolascared) Ah! No o mummy, pregnant ke, maybe in the next 10years sha. Elder Bamiseslaps her) Ah! You've already killed me, see how pale you are? Your eyeball is white, your palms and you are vommitting ah mogbe. Dcns Bamise: Daddy bukola. Elder Bamisecuts her off) Ehn! Daddy bukola ke, when i have other glorious children that will never disappoint me. Dcns Bamise: Daddy lets confirm first before we carry on with our judgement. Bukolacrying) Truly mummy, am not pregnant. 1 Like |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 9:02pm On May 31, 2015 |
Dcns Bamisehissed) Ehn en! Daddy i will call our family doctor now and tell him to come and do the. . . . . Oh! We will go there. Elder Bamise: Idiot, go and put on your slippers and get inside and get me my car key. (They boarded the car and zoomed off). Dr Famulo: (takes a deep breath) with the test taken on your daughter sir, you have to take it easy. . . . Elder Bamise: (scared) What's wrong with her? Is it malaria? Or what? Please doctor. Dr Famulo: Sir, you need to take care of her because she's in a complicated situation. Elder and Dcns Bamise: Jesus!!! What's wrong with her doctor, please shed more light on the proverb you're saying doctor. Dcns Bamise: Daddy, i don't think it's what we're thinking oh. Doctor Famulo: (laughs) It's not a matter of laughing or whatever but i have to, stop all your drama and listen to me. She might face emotional, physical and psychological trauma but try to take good care of her. (Faces bukola) bukola, what class are you? Bukolastill crying) ss3, sir. Doctor Famulo: Oh! You're preparing for your WAEC. Bukola: Yes sir. Dcns Bamise: Yes, she's even preparing for Jamb. Doctor Famulo: So, bukola what am about to say may weigh you down but you know all about it. Sir and Ma, your daughter is . . . . .. . . |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by ademoladeji(m): 9:08pm On May 31, 2015 |
Nice one first lady |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 9:10pm On May 31, 2015 |
Tiffanyj Divepen1 hazardous queening larrysun oyinprinbe D9ty7 kingphilip scentmalc 360prince sidecheek naijaboiy tosyne2much lekinsRebirth tohpahz . Come over 1 Like |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 9:11pm On May 31, 2015 |
ademoladeji:sup sweetie |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Divepen1(m): 9:26pm On May 31, 2015 |
You really need to work on the spacing |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by ademoladeji(m): 9:37pm On May 31, 2015 |
Divepen1: That's true buh message passed! |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by ademoladeji(m): 9:39pm On May 31, 2015 |
Aipete2:Omoge, mowapa oooo |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by D9ty7(m): 9:48pm On May 31, 2015 |
Aipete2 is writing? Yippee! Dances shoki and azonto.
Brb to read and do the needful.
Divepen1: I dey hail o |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Divepen1(m): 10:18pm On May 31, 2015 |
D9ty7: Baba... I hail oo |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Nobody: 10:27pm On May 31, 2015 |
Aipete2, You have a nice story going on here...... but the story is a Drama or Play right? Please you really need to put a lot of space in between...... It's too crammed. Don't manage the space abeg. I had to stare long at my phone before I could get the Characters.............. |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by hazardous(m): 11:31pm On May 31, 2015 |
Divepen1: He said it all. The spacing needs to be checked; so as the paragraphs. Once you are able to get the spacing; all other mistakes can be easily corrected. Nice one Aipete2..... looking forward to know the outcome of the pregnancy test. |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 2:06am On Jun 01, 2015 |
ademoladeji:lol |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 2:07am On Jun 01, 2015 |
D9ty7:chairman |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 2:07am On Jun 01, 2015 |
Divepen1:Baba agba, are u with me? |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 2:08am On Jun 01, 2015 |
adeh39:noted babe, both play and drama nani |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 2:09am On Jun 01, 2015 |
hazardous:Baba longest time oh |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by harjibolar10(m): 6:40am On Jun 01, 2015 |
Present |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by blackmarya(f): 7:14am On Jun 01, 2015 |
just here on time...never read drama on this forum b4...keep it coming sha |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 12:05am On Jun 05, 2015 |
CHAPTER TWO Elder bamise: (thinking) This girl has already disgraced me. People will never take me serious again, i wont be that special elder again. Wait oh!!! My daughter doesnt move boys, she only has a friend, moyinoluwa. Moyinoluwa, my pastor's daughter is a very good and responsible girl. Then howcome? Is she really concieved of the holy spirit? Noway!!! She's not mary now. |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 12:13am On Jun 05, 2015 |
Dcns bamise: (touches her husband) Daddy!!! I have been calling you since, its okay. Elder bamise: shut up my friend, your daughter disgraced me and you're shouting okay all is well |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 12:22am On Jun 05, 2015 |
please, twas due to network palava |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 11:58pm On Jul 24, 2015 |
Dcns bamise: ahn ahn, oro yii abi imi i dont deserve all these your daughter deserves it. Elder bamise: (hissed) its in the bible that its your fault, you didnt teach your daughter in the way of the lord. (picks up his phone) Hello sir. Goodevening sir. Mummy and my children nko? Fan i come over and pick moyinoluwa? Ah! Okay sir, on my way. Okay. Dcns bamise: it seems you're reading my mind, i had the intention of taking bukola there. Elder bamise: Just listen to this fool oh Dcns bamise: Daddy, are you calling me a fool? Elder bamise: if you're not a fool, will you think of taking har there? Train up your child in the way she should go and when she is old she will not depart from it. Dcns bamise: dont cast blames on me dear, i trained well and also stop calling me names because if i start my own its not going to be easy for us oh. Elder bamise: (angry) you're an idiot and also a fool, its not going to be easy, right? I am personally ready. Dcns bamise: see this stupid man calling me a fool oh, you call yourself an elder in the church and you're behaving like an animal Elder bamise : a deaconess and a children teacher see your life, your 15years old daughter is pregnant, maybe she took after you because i didnt meet you a virgin too (storms out) Dcns bamise: (crying) |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 9:52pm On Mar 08, 2016 |
CHAPTER THREE moyinoluwa: (walks in and met bukola sobbing) bukola, good evening. Are you not preparing for choir practice? Answer me now. Stop crying, you know it will make me start crying. Dcns bamise: (walks into the living room) Good evening dear (elder bamise enters) welcome dear Elder bamise: hmmmmm Moyinoluwa: Daddy, mummy, bukola is crying. What is wrong with her, tell her to stop Elder bamise: my good daughter, let her continue. That's why you're here. How many friends is this idiot having? Moyinoluwa: Only me sir Elder bamise: then how come Moyinoluwa: how come what sir Elder bamise: Do you know any of her boyfriends? Moyinoluwa: boy what? Dcns bamise: you heard him right Moyinoluwa: nothing like that sir Elder bamise: then tell me the truth Moyinoluwa: absolute truth sir Elder bamise: children of nowadays, they will like try to cover up for their friends. During our own time we say anything we see or observe. now for the last time, have you seen her with a boy before? Moyinoluwa: yes sir Dcns bamise: yes, thank God Elder bamise: name them Moyinoluwa: I do see with temitope, toluwani, and she normally play with Micheal my little brother hmmmmm and also with your gateman |
Re: Blood On The ALTAR by Aipete2(f): 9:54pm On Mar 08, 2016 |
CHAPTER THREE moyinoluwa: (walks in and met bukola sobbing) bukola, good evening. Are you not preparing for choir practice? Answer me now. Stop crying, you know it will make me start crying. Dcns bamise: (walks into the living room) Good evening dear (elder bamise enters) welcome dear Elder bamise: hmmmmm Moyinoluwa: Daddy, mummy, bukola is crying. What is wrong with her, tell her to stop Elder bamise: my good daughter, let her continue. That's why you're here. How many friends is this idiot having? Moyinoluwa: Only me sir Elder bamise: then how come Moyinoluwa: how come what sir Elder bamise: Do you know any of her boyfriends? Moyinoluwa: boy what? Dcns bamise: you heard him right Moyinoluwa: nothing like that sir Elder bamise: then tell me the truth Moyinoluwa: absolute truth sir Elder bamise: children of nowadays, they will like try to cover up for their friends. During our own time we say anything we see or observe. now for the last time, have you seen her with a boy before? Moyinoluwa: yes sir Dcns bamise: yes, thank God Elder bamise: name them Moyinoluwa: I do see with temitope, toluwani, and she normally play with Micheal my little brother hmmmmm and also with your gateman |
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