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Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by mexyk(m): 9:05pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
This is epic. More ink to ur pen |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Nobody: 9:18pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
Omotayor123: Read it again. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by lexan1(m): 9:23pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
There was no link to the friend, I mean it's qood, but there should be a link to his friend ade and his dad's memory, considerinq the fact that the mum was real before, but he killed her, and now his son, so, ade should be someone that was also real, not just pure imaqination...I dunno how to explain, but it's beautifully scary tho |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by danielous(m): 9:25pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
VillageBoi:Deja vu |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Gabrendo(m): 9:56pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
Wow! cool. Usman's father is obviously insane. Love the revealing end tail. Usman's father killed his mother as well |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Gabrendo(m): 10:02pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
On scrutiny now. Fade out should come at the end of the story i guess,all through capitalization of characters name shouldn't ensue after introducing the character, and cut some slug lines to other paragraphs to enhance clarity. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Nobody: 10:12pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
Interestingly scary. The man has psychological problems. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Omotayor123(f): 10:29pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
cnario:not nice |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by trusted(m): 10:58pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
Weldone Collins. Good work u've got here. How about ur other work? |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Nobody: 11:34pm On Jun 12, 2015 |
phemocheee:no u r not |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by TheFilmmaker: 7:47am On Jun 13, 2015 |
VillageBoi: Hi check the copyright. This is Duru Collins. I sent the first draft to you via Facebook. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by TheFilmmaker: 8:20am On Jun 13, 2015 |
ugojamali: I suppose I got carried away. It's show not tell. I'll remember to keep that in mind. Regarding the formatting, I still suck at that. I'll work on it. Thanks a ton for your input. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by TheFilmmaker: 8:22am On Jun 13, 2015 |
phemocheee: Omotayor123: That's why it is a thriller. Get used to it. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by VillageBoi(m): 10:19pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
TheFilmmaker: Ah, no wonder... Couldn't recognise the username 'TheFilmmaker'... and didn't look at the bottom of the script. Glad you changed the characters names from those silly white names to Nigerian names. 2 Likes |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by TheFilmmaker: 10:58pm On Jun 13, 2015 |
VillageBoi: Lol, bro that is racist....haha. Glad you understand now |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by VillageBoi(m): 1:24am On Jun 14, 2015 |
TheFilmmaker: Hahahaha, yes oh... it's very racist of us to be ashamed to use our wonderful traditional names Liked it before... loving it as it is now. Well done. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Harvard13(m): 11:06am On Jun 14, 2015 |
phemocheee:nope. i dont get it. how are ade nd mummy not real?? |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Tashaamania(f): 6:22pm On Jun 15, 2015 |
Wow! This is gooood! Really a nice piece. Welldone |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by hahn(m): 10:40am On Jun 16, 2015 |
TheFilmmaker: I agree with villageboi. It is important that Nigerian names are used by Nigerian writers. It gives a more original feel to the story and will also raise the curiosity of foreigners when they happen to read it. Ill also advice you add some background noises like "generators could be heard from the next compound", "mosquitoes flying/sucking", "the candle light was on because nepa hadn't brought light in a while". That sort of thing |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Nobody: 1:18pm On Jun 18, 2015 |
Just to inform you guys that we're making the Usman Short film soon. If you're based in Lagos and want to be a part of this, please indicate, stating what you're good at. 1 Like |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by Brimmie(m): 11:20pm On Dec 19, 2015 |
TheFilmmaker: I'm late to the party. |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by VillageBoi(m): 7:41pm On Dec 20, 2015 |
Brimmie: No problem. It's still a brilliant script. Can't wait to see the short when its done! |
Re: Usman - A Short Psychological Thriller Script By TheFilmmaker by TheFilmmaker: 8:13pm On Dec 27, 2015 |
VillageBoi: The prospective producer backed away. |
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