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Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by agarawu23(m): 3:30am On Jun 19, 2015
nice one laykorn

Ramadan kareem
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 4:26am On Jun 19, 2015
Ramadan Kareem
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Mathematical(f): 5:01am On Jun 19, 2015
OREMUSSANCTUS:
Even if I no like una
Make I pretend for now
Happy ramadan to midolian and d rest
How on earth will I forget ma pwincess yourmain
And also ma mathematical, hope u safe where ever u re?
Thanks anyways.. you're always a joke
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Olafeyeni: 5:03am On Jun 19, 2015
May Allah accept our deeds in this ramadan and may He make us witness many more in life. Amin
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Kbraims(m): 5:14am On Jun 19, 2015
Ramadan kareem!!!
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Hammefeez: 5:19am On Jun 19, 2015
Ramadan Kareem!
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nairalander303(m): 5:28am On Jun 19, 2015
Ramadan kareem all muslim umma
laykorn:
The crescent cracks the black that sheds the sky
And pierces through the misty wool of murky light.

Then, these clouds do a doleful dance of evil eyes
And cloak the lustrous eyes of the crescent's sight.

But none of woe is birth by the cloud's vile fight
As the hasty lunar spark was enough for euphoria.

Euphoria that the oldest men, to hide wouldn't dare.
And the youngest of men, lost in mirth and cheers.
Again, the month of blessings that overflow is here.
Again, the days of grace in sundry torrents are here.

I welcome this guest with utmost delight;
For I know it has come to give us respite.
An air of happiness fills the space;
Our homes now seem a better place!


Commentary:

It's here again; the month of over-flowing blessings and infinite grace is here again. I pray that Allah bestows his mercy upon us in this month and all the months to come after it, and that he grants us all that is needed to make the best of it. I pray for universal amity, I pray for lasting peace; I pray, I pray...
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by oba2flex(m): 5:34am On Jun 19, 2015
Nice One! Ramadan Kareem to u brothers and sisters. Let's remember to pray for the country.
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by yusufbida(m): 5:40am On Jun 19, 2015
laykorn:
The crescent cracks the black that sheds the sky
And pierces through the misty wool of murky light.

Then, these clouds do a doleful dance of evil eyes
And cloak the lustrous eyes of the crescent's sight.

But none of woe is birth by the cloud's vile fight
As the hasty lunar spark was enough for euphoria.

Euphoria that the oldest men, to hide wouldn't dare.
And the youngest of men, lost in mirth and cheers.
Again, the month of blessings that overflow is here.
Again, the days of grace in sundry torrents are here.

I welcome this guest with utmost delight;
For I know it has come to give us respite.
An air of happiness fills the space;
Our homes now seem a better place!


Commentary:

It's here again; the month of over-flowing blessings and infinite grace is here again. I pray that Allah bestows his mercy upon us in this month and all the months to come after it, and that he grants us all that is needed to make the best of it. I pray for universal amity, I pray for lasting peace; I pray, I pray...

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Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by moufan: 5:51am On Jun 19, 2015
nice
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Yasirarafat: 6:25am On Jun 19, 2015
[font=Lucida Sans Unicode][/font]9ce p0em.....Ramadan mubaraka !9ce p0em.....Ramadan mubaraka !9ce p0em.....Ramadan mubaraka !
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 7:04am On Jun 19, 2015
Mathematical:
Thanks anyways.. you're always a joke
If after ramadan, u still fresh and glowing den I will know ya not fasting

I don't see u on NL anymore, hope we alrite?
@ ya dp, cute smile #falling in luv
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by conquest989: 7:07am On Jun 19, 2015
for Day Two

Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 7:10am On Jun 19, 2015
YourMain:

Lol happy Ramadan grin
Yourmain I doubt if u can fast U sound too "polish" to fast
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Mopolchi: 7:25am On Jun 19, 2015
Happy Ramadan
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 7:49am On Jun 19, 2015
OREMUSSANCTUS:

Yourmain
I doubt if u can fast
U sound too "polish" to fast

Haha polish ?

I can't fast anyways.
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Ajerry: 8:04am On Jun 19, 2015
O thou ALLAH we praise
O thou ALLAH here,
the moon Raise
the fasting to us you Command
make us overcomes it's
demand
for we all hope to be righteous
our life should be simple and courteous
just like the prophet
though none is perfect
thou ALLAH let this
RAMADAN be a source of joy to our soul..
NOTE AM NOT A MUSLIM BUT I BELIEVE IN THE FAST....LAYKON IT BEEN OVER A WHILE WE CHAT ON WHATSAPP THOUGH ON WENESDAY WAS MY BIRTHDAY AND I CELEBRATED IT LIVE ON RADIO I WOULD SEND YOU THE AUDIO .PLS SEND ME A TEXT MY BRO HOWEVER if anypoet wanna reach me get me on whatsapp 08075776863
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Ahmad4452(m): 8:41am On Jun 19, 2015
Sobur wu be AbuUsaamah Abi na dat Boi wey i dey fink..
laykorn:
Cc:

AbuUsaamah
Yuzjet
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Lagusta

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Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 9:04am On Jun 19, 2015
YourMain:

Haha polish ?
I can't fast anyways.
Shows u a "bad" muslim Learn to fast Its good
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by kwaraguy(m): 9:51am On Jun 19, 2015
Lovely. Ramadan kareem to all Futminna muslim brothers and sisters
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Mathematical(f): 9:55am On Jun 19, 2015
OREMUSSANCTUS:

If after ramadan, u still fresh and glowing den I will know ya not fasting


I don't see u on NL anymore, hope we alrite?

@ ya dp, cute smile
#falling in luv

Am always on.. just that nairaland this days isnt as rosy like before
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 12:07pm On Jun 19, 2015
OREMUSSANCTUS:

Shows u a "bad" muslim
Learn to fast
Its good

'Snot my fault lol

I've to take medication...
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by Nobody: 1:09pm On Jun 19, 2015
YourMain:

'Snot my fault lol
I've to take medication...
Lol U see yaself Its now u know u on medication And after gbawe(fasting) ya medication go stop
Re: Welcome O Ramadhan! - A Poem And A Breif Commentary By Laykorn by joseph1832(m): 9:19am On Jun 23, 2015
OREMUSSANCTUS:
Yourmain I doubt if u can fast U sound too "polish" to fast
Oremi mumu, ba wo ni?.

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