first time writer.................pleuz show me lurv abeg

As i walked down the road on my way home,I raninto an old neighbour and her freind. 'Madam',i hailed her.....'Good afternoon o....Eku ojo meta'.... 'abi o'..she replied..'na u no dey find person'.........I just laughed and asked after her family....... 'how nia aya-oba'..she asked referring to my elder sister...'fine o'...i replied her.....'how is Busayo'..she asked.....I looked puzzled and just and just as i was about to reply,she simply turned to her friend and said....'hmm,if you see this girl ehn...na man oooo.....'...I gasped....Gesticulating alongside,she continued.........'hmmm,she will wear trouser like say she no get any other cloth....she watches football at viewing centres....she will stand up to guys and even beat them up sef.....chai,the day wey she beat one boy ehn..chai..i fear..her bone too strong'.................The woman laughed heartily........

'Madam'...I said to her...'iya dey wait me for house'...........We said our goodbyes and I walked home........I knocked on our door and my sister inquired about who was at the door.......'busayo'....I replied..............THE END!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice storyline op...

A little paragraphing and spacing will make your work more interesting..
Cheers.