story for the gods

ikedi94:
wu dis poem help?

e help ilaycorn, see him thread for front page.

Nice one

llaykorn:
Night falls upon us once more Casting its shroud of silent dread. And when just living seems a chore And you're wishing you were dead.
That there is nowhere left to turn And you think of every promise made. Of all the bridges you had to burn The day dying as the light begins to fade.
Fear creeps slowly into your heart Hidden in the dark corners deep inside. Shown only by way of your art Written into empty words in foolish pride.
But no matter what the story is still the same The fable unchanged and the tale unbroken. The fairy tale now forgotten in you're shame And all the things that must never be spoken.
Thinking of all the smiles that you never shared All the nights that so silently passed you by. You felt lost and lonely in a world that never cared. You were so brave and quiet and by nature shy.
But you hang onto a hope with faith in your wake Even with the sorrow of all the things you left behind. And of a strange journey you never meant to take Through the wilderness looking for a home to find.
A dream to end all dreams something beautiful and new Away from the same old stories you used to tell. Strength forged in pain and all you've been through. To come out smiling through the very fires of hell.
You just want to be happy and live a life worthwhile. The dark and depression might seem like all you are. But I have faith that you will one day find a smile. And wherever you travel now I hope you travel far.

Nice Nice Nice bruh..
you an awesome poet

Good one, llaykorn. It appears the smoke from the sacrifice actually got to the heavens.

laykon.....nice poem though, a long wrong- night war among the knight slaying for pride they re'fighting for the bride long long night blood split as they fight they crawl and run fighting until the earth bring the sun....


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Nice piece though i'm yet to decipher the theme.

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Msquare220:
Nice piece though i'm yet to decipher the theme.

The theme is suicide, sir.

Ajerry:
laykon.....nice poem though,
a long wrong- night
war among the knight
slaying for pride
they re'fighting for the bride
long long night
blood split as they fight
they crawl and run
fighting until the earth bring the sun....



Laykon u re no longer on whatsap pls kindly reach me back on 08075776863

Oh! Jerry? I'll add you up right away.

llaykorn:

The theme is suicide, sir.

Oh, thank you. Then I have to reread it; interesting.

In all these dont forget to attach urself to Jesus Christ, the only source of restoration, He will restore all u have lost, especialy, ur hope, peace, joy and happiness.

this poem is rather poor, the only thing going for it is some elements of rhyme, when you have to tell people what the theme is after reading, then you know there's something wrong

llaykorn:

The theme is suicide, sir.

Are you feeling suicidal?

Nice one llaykorn

mysteriouxx:


Are you feeling suicidal?

No, no, never. Do you offer help to people who are feeling suicidal?

Vock:
this poem is rather poor, the only thing going for it is some elements of rhyme, when you have to tell people what the theme is after reading, then you know there's something wrong

I agree with you; the poem is quite poor in that sense. I'll pay more attention to that in my subsequent works. Thanks for noticing, Vock.

Ma Nigga llaykorn we made it to FB.

danbrowndmf:
Ma Nigga llaykorn we made it to FB.

Shey FB ni abi FP?

llaykorn:

Shey FB ni abi FP?

lmao...na FB..edit am for me...na mistake .

Vock:
this poem is rather poor, the only thing going for it is some elements of rhyme, when you have to tell people what the theme is after reading, then you know there's something wrong

Since you say the poem is poor, can you tell us the mood the llaykorn used? Okay forget about the mood, just tell us about the rhyme scheme since you acknowledge that the poem is rich in rhyme.

Thanks, and patiently waiting for your reply.

nice on, am officially now a fan

It is a bit maudlin. Great job...as usual.