It all began with a lie!
comfortin' n soothing words to ease ur plight,
discomfort n pain u felt up ur thigh,
till I came into ur life with my sordid lite,
a promising rendezvous thus ensued,
though without our hearts but our body knew,
---driven by lust,
---compelled by touch,
---overcome by passion,
we thus began to live the lie!

It continued with love,
one that I've never felt before,
such that I craved n long'd for much more,
the beautiful"jerusalem"btw your thighs-
-made each one of my entry a triumphant one!
we hump'd n talk'd until we sigh!!
it felt so good to be havin' so much fun!!!
---fallin' in love
---burning desires
---feelin's thru wires
and a promise to love unconditionally.

It ended with a broken heart,
and I thot I was going to be the only"one",
the "one"to give you an orgasm,
the "one"to go raw with,
the "one"I named a song after,
the "one"to name both our libido's,
the "one "I learnt a song for,
the "one"I call by other names,
the "one"I truly fell in love with,
but instead of walking down the aisle!
it became the first "one"to drown in river nile!!






















































































































































































It all began with a lie!
comfortin' n soothing words to ease ur plight,
discomfort n pain u felt up ur thigh,
till I came into ur life with my sordid lite,
a promising rendezvous thus ensued,
though without our hearts but our body knew,
---driven by lust,
---compelled by touch,
---overcome by passion,
we thus began to live the lie!

It continued with love,
one that I've never felt before,
such that I craved n long'd for much more,
the beautiful"jerusalem"btw your thighs-
-made each one of my entry a triumphant one!
we hump'd n talk'd until we sigh!!
it felt so good to be havin' so much fun!!!
---fallin' in love
---burning desires
---feelin's thru wires
and a promise to love unconditionally.

It ended with a broken heart,
and I thot I was going to be the only"one",
the "one"to give you an orgasm,
the "one"to go raw with,
the "one"I named a song after,
the "one"to name both our libido's,
the "one "I learnt a song for,
the "one"I call by other names,
the "one"I truly fell in love with,
but instead of walking down the aisle!
it became the first "one"to drown in river nile!!

ah nice.

But did you have to post it twice?

guess i made a mistake,but am happy u like it,i think ure a great poet too,check out my other poems maybe u will like them!cos i kinda like yours too