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A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 11:41am On Aug 01, 2016 |
A sunny day I'll say A day to pen down my thoughts A day to take a break from the air I chose to breathe Taking in and breathing in the air I once breathed That world I found myself I enjoyed A fortress of solace I built Where all I did was took a peep inside And search my mind when I had to Without the fear of being insecure Cause I knew I was save with me But slowly with the passage of time I let myself go with the flow And the current of the flow was different From the world I knew myself to be part of And without looking back for a moment I kept going and going And now I can't help but wonder Who the better me is The one that went with the flow Or the one that was in my world 7 Likes 4 Shares |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Delicious22: 6:10pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Wow, beautifully written poem. Nice one ma. 1 Like |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 6:19pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Thanks sir |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Delicious22: 6:33pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Pranaya:Sir? ayam just 16. 2 Likes |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 6:36pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Delicious22:Lol. Respect is reciprocal |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Delicious22: 6:46pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Pranaya:Wow, ayam honoured. Wait let me call Chimamanda Adichie to come and see this master piece. 2 Likes |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 7:18pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
Delicious22:Funny you 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Delicious22: 7:24pm On Oct 20, 2016 |
"And the current of the flow was
different
From the world I knew myself to be
part of
And without looking back for a
moment I kept going and going" That's what caught my attention. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Delicious22: 12:40am On Oct 23, 2016 |
Pranaya, still awake? |
Re: A Peep Into My World by ShaqFu: 3:01pm On Oct 23, 2016 |
Pranaya:What's the rhyme scheme of the poem? |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 5:56pm On Oct 23, 2016 |
ShaqFu:i doubt if it has any. I wrote what was on my mind. |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 5:58pm On Oct 23, 2016 |
Delicious22:I was |
Re: A Peep Into My World by ShaqFu: 6:00pm On Oct 23, 2016 |
Pranaya:I see. Yet you wrote in quatrain form. Not bad all the same. Next time, be sure to check out different poetic forms and follow their rule. it helps makes you a better poet. |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Delicious22: 6:05pm On Oct 23, 2016 |
Pranaya:Hope your day is going smoothly? 1 Like |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 6:05am On Oct 24, 2016 |
ShaqFu:Noted. Thanks |
Re: A Peep Into My World by Pranaya(f): 6:05am On Oct 24, 2016 |
Delicious22:Yeah. |
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