Oboy, some suspends can kill oh! I just got a heart attack...

Best story of de yr,kudos to u bro

Chai! Babsopey, abeg naa.. For the love of God, jes pity me n update naa.. Bikonuu..

Babsopey........ Dis is rili a nyc storyline seriously..... Have been a ghost reader tho... Kip it up...... Besides u are making use of two of my names here o funmi and temi

The story is fantastically great.. Kip it up bro.. Following u like neva b4..

One thing I love about this piece is how you tend still preach the word in your own little way and that's key, keep the ball rolling brada, I'm with you till the end

babs come and continue please

suspense is just too much,well thats what keeps a reader glued,match on bro,

i. da. ur bak. lyk spine i. da. ur bak. lyk spine

Babsopey:


Lols. Bro I'm a guy who naturally expect the worst but always hope for the best. I'm not entire good myself so I don't expect perfection from people. It'll be hard for my heart to be broken naturally, but it is possible presently.

Babsopey, can I suggest we partner to produce a movie (film) about this story. I think it will be very attractive to Movie producers.

I know a very good and talented young movie producer and director... I could contact him if you want?

nawa ooo whrz dz guy na ... cc: babsopey

KomonSense:


Babsopey, can I suggest we partner to produce a movie (film) about this story. I think it will be very attractive to Movie producers.

I know a very good and talented young movie producer and director... I could contact him if you want?

Go ahead Bro. But pm me so I can know it's you for real. NL moniker isn't enough you know.

jidxin:
nawa ooo whrz dz guy na ... cc: babsopey

I'm here peeping from work Bro. Hope you good.

Babsopey:



Go ahead Bro. But pm me so I can know it's you for real. NL moniker isn't enough you know.

So you're even here sef. Update nauu..

Always on point Bro, thumbs up!!!

Babsopey:



Go ahead Bro. But pm me so I can know it's you for real. NL moniker isn't enough you know.

Yeah of course... I will do that

Babsopey:
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Kurd princedami Odochime ObiOgechi adeseun22
Dokimazo dannybomb jidxin

I'm sorry guys, I've been wanting to tag you but I was banned because if it twice. I hope this stays.

Thanks guys

wow I'm just seeing this anyway thanks dear. following

SUSPENSE!

finally here...this is just what I needed tonight. Babsopey what a suspense filled story. can't help but ask for more.

jessysparkles:
finally here...this is just what I needed tonight. Babsopey what a suspense filled story. can't help but ask for more.

Welcome back jor. Next episode here

[b] EPISODE TWELVE MFYL PR2

To whom head is given, brain is expected and to whom brain is given, sense is expected. I was unable to bring sense out of the situation I met on ground. There were three conflicting reports on ground from three different doctors of the same clinic. My mother's husband is of the 2nd doctors’ school of thought that we should apply diabolical means to save my mother. The first doctor that was treating her whom I heard was now on work leave did direct my mum to go home as every test came negative even though my mother was still in pain. The 3rd doctor whom is currently treating her was the one that directed her to be transfer do to the teaching hospital stating she has likely consumed a poisonous substance which in turn increased her appendix problem. According to the doctor, he suspect appendix even though he could not ascertain it.

I met my mum's husband and Aramide arguing bitterly over where to take her to. The funniest part was that he has collected the money I sent to them from his daughter, Vera whom he deceived stating he was going to use it to start her transfer process. I decided not to be involved in the brawl and ask Vera to take me straight to my mother with Temmy by my side. Fortunately I met the doctor in charge attending to her there.

Me: Good morning Doctor, thank you very much for the care

Doctor: You are welcome, who are you to her?

Mother: (Speaking faintly, obviously in pain) He's my son, my only son.

Hearing that sent a stream of emotion down my body and I felt so bad I wasn't there on time to take care of my mother.

Doctor: Good, you are well educated I guess

Me: To my best sir, I'm currently in youth service.

Doctor: That's better; we need to talk in private.

The doctor took me along into his office where he spit his mind and gave a sincere medical advice.

Me: Sir, I heard we have three different reports on ground from different doctors of this same clinic, I don't think I've ever heard of such before. What's going on sir?

Doctor: First thing I need you to know is your mother is safe and getting better.

Me: She's still forcing out words sir

Doctor: I wish you saw her day before yesterday. You'll know she's better.

Me: I wasn't told it was that bad.

Doctor: I wasn't there while she was brought here. It was my colleague who is now on work leave that attended to her. I saw his report and follow up on it. Your mother consumed a rare poison that can't be easily detected. I've asked her and your sisters but they could not provide us a reasonable answer. The poison wasn't evident at first but she was feeling the pain.

Me: Which kind of poison works that way?

Doctor: Well according to my research, it could be that somebody put eye drop or something similar in her food or drink. Or somebody applied Poinsettia to her food especially vegetables.

Me: Poinsettia? I've never heard of that before.

Doctor: It's an old way of poisoning people but not to kill them. It's found more in the western world. I've not heard of it in this part of the world which is why I'm going to stick to eye drop or something similar. It might be a poison from local herbs.

Me: But who would want to poison her?

Doctor: That I can't say, but I'm sure the person is not intending to kill her, probably to silence her for a moment.

Me: Well the person was successful, so what's the way forward sir.

Doctor: Your mother has a pending appendix case that I think she's been managing before this incident. I'm not sure of the major link between the poison and the appendix but the appendix is getting worse which is why she's in pain. You'll have to take her to the teaching hospital so she can have it removed.

Me: Surgery

Doctor: Yes, don't worry; it's a minor surgery case. Appendix is a common thing.

Me: Alright sir, that you very much.

Doctor: She should be able to walk so try to get a cab to take her there because using the clinic ambulance might be more costly.

Me: I came with my car

Doctor: That's better then. (He opened a file and gave me a sealed letter) Take that to the teaching hospital, it'll make them attend to you on time. I couldn't give your sister because I understand the problem with your Dad.

Me: I don’t understand too. I’ll apply wisdom in transferring her to avoid their drama.

Doctor: If the wisdom won’t work, you can use the police, let them just hold him till she’s transferred.

Me: I hope it doesn’t get to that. Thank you so much Doctor.

Doctor: You are welcome. Please take care of your mother. I have your sister’s number , I’ll call her to know how far you’ve gone.

Me: Thank you so much sir.

I left the doctor’s office to meet my mother with Temmy and Vera staying with her.

Vera: What did the doctor say?

Me: We are going to teaching hospital. I’ll explain other things later.

Temmy: I don’t understand why they are arguing at the expense of mum’s life.

Me: Mum, how are you feeling?

Mother: (Forcing herself to speak) This belly pain is not giving me peace.

Me: Don’t worry mother, we are going to the Teaching Hospital now (she wanted to speak). Don’t bother saying anything mum. Temmy I need you to help me, we’ll have to trick her husband. (I told him the plan)

Temmy: What if it didn’t work?

Me: Then I won’t have option than to use the police.

Temmy: That will surely have after effect, but she’ll at least be alive.

Temmy and I went outside to meet them still arguing; only this time, Aramide was already crying.

Aramide: (Crying) Will, he wants to kill our mother (Temmy held and hug her while telling her the plan)

Me: Good morning sir thanks for the care sir.

Vfather: You saw me here before you entered but refused to greet me, but now you are saying good morning.

Me: I’m sorry about that sir, I saw you were very busy and I needed to see my mother on time.

Vfather: Busy doing what? Is it not this your sister giving me problem? Because you guys went to school, we won’t hear word again.

Me: Sorry about that sir. I’ve spoken with the doctor and he said we should follow your way. He said that’s the only solution.

Vfather: That’s what I’ve been saying. You kids that only came to this world yesterday will be arguing with elders. If she stays a day more here without getting to baba, you people should just look for money to bury her.

Me: God forbid sir. We’ll go today but she needs to take another injection in the afternoon before we can leave.

Vfather: She doesn’t need any injection from them again, they’ve been giving her injection and yet everything remained the same all these while. They want to kill my wife?

Me: Sir, she doesn’t have enough strength to move an inch, that’s why this particular injection is necessary. It will make her sleep for a while to garner required strength.

Vfather: Why not give her now then?

Me: She already took one this morning, it’ll be conflicting.

Vfather: Okay, like what time will they give her the injection so I can know how to arrange for cab?

Me: Doctor said around 2pm, but I think we should arrange for the cab now and prepare every other thing needed because I’ve told him we’ll love to leave earlier than 2pm.

Vfather: Getting a cab won’t be a problem. I’ll call a friend of mine, a cab driver; he’s the one that brought her here. But I’ll have to go and quickly make some arrangements at home.

Me: Alright sir. You can also pay the man ahead.

Vfather: Don’t worry, none of them will collect money for their services.

Me: Okay, thank you sir. We’ll be waiting for you sir, or should I follow you?

Vfather: No, you stay with her, I’ll do it. But I’ll go with all her transfer papers.

Me: They’ve given it to you?

Vfather: My doctor friend already did that since

Me: Okay sir, you can go with it.

He left the clinic premises and headed for where he said to be going. We quickly helped my mother to the car with the help of some nurses. We took her to the teaching hospital and met Bankole there. He took over everything from us and made sure the surgery was done as early as possible. While in the surgery room, we were outside waiting and Uche was calling almost every minute to ask about her.

This renewed behavior from Uche is something. She’s getting more caring and winning more people in my family to herself or so I thought except one person who loves Funmi too much.

Aramide: So what’s going on with you and Funmi.

Me: I’ll rather not talk about that now. There is another pressing issue.

Aramide: What’s that?

Me: What did mum ate before her illness started, and who prepared it?

Aramide: I was in school and so was Vera. Praise told us they both eat rice prepared by her. What’s the problem?

Me: Somebody did poison her and I want to know why.

Aramide: Hmm

Me: You know something?

Aramide: Not much but Vera and praise does.

Me: Where is praise by the way?

Aramide: She’s at home

Me: Who’s been taking care of her?

Aramide: Vera does that. She goes home every day.

Me: I need to speak with Vera (We called Vera from where she was talking with Temmy in the car). Vera do you know who poisoned mum?

Vera: Praise told me she saw Dad putting watery sugar in her drink.

Me: Watery sugar? She had a drink that day?

Vera: Yeah, Dad brought those drinks saying somebody was celebrating his new car at his work place.

Me: What more do you know?

Vera: Well, I overheard Dad telling somebody on phone “he’ll soon be around, they’ll both come”

Aramide: I think he was referring to you

Me: How? I’m still not getting it.

Aramide: Remember I told you mum wanted to see you urgently?

Me: Yeah

Aramide: It was him that told me, not mum.

Me: Meaning he’s the one that wanted me to come, for what?

Vera: I think Dad is involved in a ritual stuff. It has to do with him having a male child and maybe money too who knows and I think he needed both of you to do some rites for him as twins.

Aramide: He was going to use mum as bait.

Vera: They’ll tell you to do something if you must save your mother.

Me: Damn! Are you serious about this? How did you come about this?

Vera: Well my father took Praise for a kid, and that made him discuss anything while she’s there.

Me: Does mum knows about this?

Aramide: I don’t think so.

Vera: She might know a little but not all.

Me: This means you are not save any longer Aramide.

Vera: Brother Taiwo, I think she should go with you.

Me: I think so too. But let mum get well first. Please when your dad eventually got to know we are here, he’s going to be very angry, do not argue or confront him, okay. Just keep saying sorry.

Vera: He can’t guess where we are, this hospital is bigger than that.

The surgery went successfully but we were told she lost more blood than expected, so she was going to be watched for two days or more before they can discharge her.

Around 6pm in the evening while Temmy and I were contemplating on where to lodge for the night, Uche surprisingly came back bringing us dinner. She insisted on staying with us till my mother gets discharged and she got to know about my story of two mothers.

The act of care from Uche was making Aramide unease because she obviously wanted Funmi and I back together. Meanwhile, I’ve not heard anything from Funmi since she broke up with me close to two weeks now. All my effort to reach her was frustrated by her as she will either ignore my call or switch off her phone and I was starting to get used to life without her.

My mother was discharged after two days and we took her home. That was when we discovered her husband did not come home since he left the clinic according to Vera and Praise who were at home.

After staying with her for some hours, buying her all the necessary stuffs, we decided to drop Uche off in Lagos before we’ll head back home but Aramide insisted I visit Funmi and settle things with her. I saw the idea as counterproductive as I felt she does not want the relationship again. If she does, she would have at least allowed me to explain things better. Aramide was however adamant to the extent of her calling Sam (Funmi’s cousin) to get the proper direction to her house.

I do not have option than to go to her now even though I don’t know what I’ll meet there. I wish and pray everything is settled, either positively or negatively so I can be totally free.[/b]

Hmm.. Eleyi Ogidigan.. Can't wait for d next episode.. U are realy doing a gr8 job here.. Weldone

On ewedu tree, sipping my orange juice jejely.. Waiting patiently for tomorrow's episode..
Weldone sir, with this fascinating story

Nice story.
Got hooked to my screen.
It isn't a bad idea to visit funmi.
You deserve to know the truth behind all.
I hope uche isn't pulling a fast one.

Following..... well done.

Babsopey:

Welcome back jor. Next episode here

thanks dear

next please .





crossed legxx ...

rachealfst:
Following..... well done.

Thanks so much

MizXplendour:
next please .






crossed legxx ...

Ready!
Who is with the Pop corn, I beg pass here jor

Zheemub:
Nice story.
Got hooked to my screen.
It isn't a bad idea to visit funmi.
You deserve to know the truth behind all.
I hope uche isn't pulling a fast one.

Thanks so much

hayurmidey ( m):
On ewedu tree, sipping my orange juice jejely..
Waiting patiently for tomorrow's episode..
Weldone sir, with this fascinating story

AY don't be selfish na, pass juice here jor

Olatex25:
Hmm.. Eleyi Ogidigan.. Can't wait for d next
episode.. U are realy doing a gr8 job here..
Weldone

Boda Ola, se e care fun guguru ati epa, motini ki AY gbe juice owo e wa,.


Thanks for the comments, it's my driving fuel. Please don't hesitate to always drop something after reading. Thank youuuu.

[b] EPISODE THIRTEEN MFYL PR2


After dropping off Uche, we put a call through to Samson who was luckily in Lagos that moment. We did not tell Uche we were going to see Funmi because I’m sure she’ll not like it. Samson picked us up at a place closer to his house to make it easier for us. He took us down to his house saying Funmi’s house is a stone throw from there.

Sam: Bros you are looking good o, what’s the secret now

Me: Samo the boss, na God o.

Sam: Yes I know it’s God but I’m sure those Porthacourt babes too dey hmm, see bros Temmy self, Damn! I beg dash me your teddy now.

Temmy: (We all laughed) Sincerely I wish I can give you all the teddy including the beard. I wish I don’t have them at all.

Sam: That’s what all of you do say but I’m sure you wished for it while you were younger.

Temmy: Of course, all of us wanted it while in secondary school, I never knew it’s a burden like this.

Sam: So what do I offer you now. There is a joint close to this place, let’s go there and step down with pepper soup.

Temmy: That sound so cool, sincerely I don’t mind some pepper soup with well garnished smoke beef or bush meat. It’s been long I ate that, but we have to get back home today.

Sam: Today? You are not planning on sleeping over.

Temmy: Not really, though it all depends on how things unfold as it’s already getting late now

Sam: No qualms but still take something.

Temmy: Surely we’ll do. How’s life now?

Sam: Bros Temmy, we are managing o. School is on break and that’s why I’m around.

Me: Oh, what about your admission?

Sam: I’ve being admitted into Mechanical engineering. Please I’ll need your advice on how to cope there. I heard the lecturers are strict.

Temmy: They are not that strict, they just have ego. Just make sure you attended all classes, because they can set quiz test anytime. Attendance is very important.

Me: Especially for baba emeritus class, he’ll give you attendance form to fill every class.

Temmy: And if you don’t meet the required attendance percentage, don’t bother to write the exam.

Sam: What will happen if I write it?

Me: Have you heard of somebody scoring 80F before?

Sam: That’s ridiculous, 80 is a sure A.

Temmy: OYO, if you write baba’s exam without having required attendance percentage, even the VC cannot save you from 90F.

Sam: Na wa o!

Me: Hope you can cram very well?

Sam: Not really, I prefer calculation and I read to understand.

Temmy: That’s very good. It’ll make you a good engineer but will not get you a good grade. It’ll only make you average.

Me: My brother, if you want to have good grades in Mechanical Engineering or even Agricultural Engineering in that school, you must learn to cram very well. If your manual says “Corrosion is” and you write “Corrosions are”, my brother you are in . . .

Temmy: OYO. Whatever they give to you, give back to them the same way it was given to you.

Sam: That’s something o.

Me: And don’t forget to buy the manual. They will say it’s not compulsory but don’t be fooled because they will use it against you.

Temmy: You might not even use the manual but please buy it.

Sam: I heard that from somebody also. Thanks guys.

Temmy: You are welcome. Can we go to Funmi’s side now?

Sam: Surely, I pray she’s home though.

Temmy: Maybe you should call her to confirm.

Sam: That won’t work. It’s been long she pick my call. She rather calls me.

Me: Really? She doesn’t pick your calls? Since when have you noticed that?

Sam: When I was coming back home last week I put a call through to her but she did not pick up. She later called back in the evening. I’ve tried calling her like three times after that but she kept ignoring and calling back whenever she wants.

Me: But you’ve seen her since she came back from camp.

Sam: Everyday, except today. I’ve been out since morning. I came back not long ago. You should call her now or she doesn’t pick your calls too?

Me: No, she doesn’t

Sam: That’s weird. What’s happening with you two?

Me: That’s what I’m here to confirm.

Sam: What’s going her with her that she’s not picking people’s call?

Temmy: Since you came back, did you notice any strange behavior from her?

Sam: Except she now go to bar with her friends more often now.

We went to her house which was indeed a stone throw from Sam’s place. The house is on the third street and was designed similarly to Uncle Sam’s house in PH only it has more space and buildings. I guess it was the same contractor that built them with same design.
We entered the compound only to be told by their house help she has gone out with her friends. It was getting late and we were not planning on sleeping over and our journey back home will take at least 4hours barring holdup anywhere along the road. We decided to go to the said bar to see if we we’ll find her there and if we don’t, we’ll head back home.

“I’m more concern about her wellbeing now than our relationship. She going to the bar means she has started drinking again. What could have pushed her back to drinking on camp? was it an influence by her new friend or was it because we were apart for just some weeks? I really hope she okay”

She was far from okay when we saw her totally drunk sitting in between three guys who were taking the advantage of her drunkenness to sexually molest her by touching her at sensitive parts while she laughs on like a mad fellow.

Standing and staring like we saw ghost, one of the bar attendants approached us to ask what we wanted. We decided to sit round an empty table as we order for malts and “asun’ so we could stay there even though I couldn’t drink nor eat anything.

Sam: Bros Will, what should we do? Should we call the police?

Temmy: That might cause more trouble, we have to find a way of getting her out without causing trouble.

Sam: That is so unlikely in this scenario. Or maybe I should call her Dad?

Me: Her Dad is around?

Sam: I’m not sure but I saw him last week.

Temmy: We can’t call her Dad, it doesn’t make sense. Those guys are pure cultist and Funmi may have unknowingly put herself in soup.

As we were still discussing, thinking of how to take her out, I saw the Macho guy coming out from an inner room linked to the bar with a lady. He was holding Funmi’s phone. I guess that’s the reason why she doesn’t pick calls any longer. The guy jokingly shout on the three guys for making fun of his finacee as he took his sit by Funmi’s side with the other lady sitting by his other side.

Some minutes later, a group of guys and babes came into the bar talking loudly as they merge like three tables together. They were numbered up to ten or fifteen in number as I wasn't really counting. They ordered for drinks and continued to talk loudly without minding others. There was one of the guys who came without a lady. He suddenly stood up holding his drink and went to Funmi's table. Before we know what's going on, one of the three guys that we with Funmi earlier, before the macho guy came, smashed a beer bottle on the guy's head after which hell was let loose.

. We could not interfere neither were we save any longer. We tried to run out of the bar but we're sent back after after we met some guys running into the bar with cutlass of different denominations. The three of us took cover and lied down at one corner. Soon, the fight was taken outside as majority of the guys chased themselves out of the bar. Looking towards Funmi's table I discovered she, the other lady and the macho guy were lying down in a pool of blood. We rushed down to them and discovered the blood was coming from the guy's body as he has being stabbed on the back. We carried him into the car while we help Funmi get into car as well as she was still drunk. The other lady only lied down to save herself as she left the place unscathed.

We rushed the guy to the nearest private hospital where they were attending to him. I used some of the money left on me from treating my mother to pay for his initial bills. Like a Yoruba adage says "that we are quarreling does not mean the other should die" (Bi a ba n ja, bii tiku ko). After dropping the guy in the hospital, we took Funmi to her place and always her to sleep. It was already late at this time and we were not planning to travel at night. We therefore decided sleep over with Sam offering us his room.

We went back to the hospital only to meet police men standing with the macho guy. We tried to go back as we sense trouble but the nurse who recognized us pointed to the police men that we brought him. The macho guy was awake but I thought he was under arrest because I could also the bar attendant and her manager with them.

Cop1: Hello guys (he extended his hand to me)

Me/Temmy/Sam: Good evening sir (I took his hand as she did same with Sam and Temny)

Cop1: Are you his friends that brought him here?

Cop2: He meant you are in the same cult right?[/b]

Nice update brother but its not meant to end here for today na, do you want me to start dreaming? but what's WILL'S problem with cultist sef

one more tonight pls