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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:19pm On Dec 11, 2016
Tife101 d gods ar watchin u in 3D, dont comment first...
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:21pm On Dec 11, 2016
ayoxelee:


hope u'l also kip d update cmin as u r doing nw, no allow Wicklow cash ur hand o
Wicklow no go catch my hand IJN, ah! I fear dat tin d way i fear d devil

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 6:36pm On Dec 11, 2016
DEDICATED TO AYOXELEE.



JOLADE.




'Joladeee!' my mum screamed immediately i entered the room. She was surprised and shocked at the same time.




She drew me into her arms, hugging and pecking me 'oh lord have mercy! Where have you been?'




I started crying. I felt like telling her everything. Starting from when Nathan dropped me off on a lonely road at very ungodly hour. To how i was raped my hoodlums. I just felt like pouring my heart out, but i knew better.




'is Nathan responsible?' she asked.




'no no!' my response was too quick and she raised a brow, then i wiped my tears and sat on her bed 'Nathan didnt go anything, he's innocent'




She looked at me inquisitvely, then sat beside me 'tell me then, where have you been for the past three days and who owns this shabby clothes you're putting on? The police have been searching everywhere for you!'




'i...i...went to a party with some friends...' i lied.




'a party? Whose party?'




'a birthday party of a friend i newly met. The party was stormed by armed robbers and everywhere went frenzy. I escaped following a very dangerous route and thats where Kelvin found me...' i sobbed.




'Kelvin? Which Kelvin? Our Kelvin?'




I nodded. Then she hugged me wiping my tears away.




'mum? Can i ask for a favour?' i asked.




She looked at me 'what is it my dear?'




'i dont want to get married to Nathan anymore. I dont want to be engaged to him anymore'




'are you out of your mind! What are you saying?' mum asked with a slight frown on her face.




'i dont love him anymore mum...' i lied. I loved him so much it hurts 'i just want to be single for now. I'm in love with someone else'




'Jolade! Whats this nonsense you're saying?'




'the nonsense i'm saying is, i want our engagement cancelled. Whatever plans both you and his mother had has to be annuled this minute, because i cant take it anymore. I've had enough. Mummy Mabel knows what i'm saying'




She help my face with her palms 'does he maltreat you? Does he beat you?'




'no...' i lied. I couldnt count the times Nathan had laid his hands on me. They were uncountable 'he just...i...i think he doesnt love me. He doesnt mistreat me but, i dont want to end up with a man who's just with me because he was bethroted to me and has no other choice but to be with me. I want a man who will love and respect me for who i am, not for anyone or anything. I'm not saying Nathan is a bad man, he's a very good guy, a quality husband material, but i've had enough mum! I'm tired!' i cried on her shoulder.




Was it a bad thing to love? Why did i love Nathan this way?




TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 6:54pm On Dec 11, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Lets just fuvck and get this all done with. I'll pay you, how much do you need? Name your price. I know you cant be a virgin so there's no need being scared and acting holy'
TBC
The nerve..........how I fee like using some strong language now, Lawd have mercy!

This boy......

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Re: Red Ashes by ayoxelee(m): 7:17pm On Dec 11, 2016
Chumzypinky:
DEDICATED TO AYOXELEE.
....
TBC
wao! so this update was dedicated to me..... tnk u very mch , u jxt press d function key in me, gonno b kidnapping all readers wtout comment . Tnkz for d dedication






anyway, love is painful, feeling sorry for Jolade, Nathan will surely reap wat he sows. m nt just seeing Nathan and Kainene together
Re: Red Ashes by ayoxelee(m): 7:21pm On Dec 11, 2016
Chumzypinky:

Wicklow no go catch my hand IJN, ah! I fear dat tin d way i fear d devil
so u b coward
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 7:26pm On Dec 11, 2016
All hail Chumzy pinky the lady has done it again. thanks for the update dear. More MB to yr phone and more ink to your pen following bumper to bumper
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:39pm On Dec 11, 2016
holuwanoisy111:
All hail Chumzy pinky the lady has done it again. thanks for the update dear. More MB to yr phone and more ink to your pen following bumper to bumper
lollz tanks alot honey
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:07pm On Dec 11, 2016
MABEL.




'wow! I'm so surprised to see you here Tonia, its been ages since you last came to my office' i said offering her a seat. She looked serious and i immediately knew something was up 'Jolade called me yesterday. She said she got home and....'




'i know she called you...' she interrupted.




I just smiled. She continued 'look Mabel, i think our children are going through sometimes, i dont really know whats up but Jolade is no longer interested in marrying Nathan...'




My jaw dropped. My smile disappeared 'what?'




'you heard me. Yesterday, Jolade cried begging me to end the betrothal. She said Nathan is a good man which i seriously doubt. If he's a good man, why then would she not want to marry him? I think he mistreats her. From her tears, i could see she still loves him. So thats why i'm here, so we could iron out things like adults. I really like Jolade and Nathan together, i dont know about you...'




I sighed and placed my hand on my forehead. Deep down i understood Jolade's plight. No woman would have been able to tolerate Nathan for this long. I personally, had i been in Jolade's shoes, i would have ended this a very long time ago. Jolade was a very understanding woman and that was i why i wanted her for Nathan. I believed in my hearts of hearts that marriage to her would calm him down.




'oh God Tonia, i honestly dont know what to say. This kids could be a handful sometimes, God help us' i sighed.




'i want this union, i dont know about you'




'i want it too, infact, i want it more'




'and thats why i've mapped out a plan. All you have to do is play your part and everything would work out just fine...' she said with a devilish smile.




***

KAINENE.




I packed my dreadlocks in a bun. I looked at the mirror once again, satisfied with my appearance, then i turned to Kaka.




'how do i look babe?' i said twirling around.




'you look geogous babe! You look breathtaking like seriously! That guy's dic.k is surely going to fall off at the sight of you...' she winked.




I smiled devilishly 'that guy doesnt know what he's in for. I'm sure the dickhead is already celebrating his success. Kainene Igho is going to grace his bed tonight but he's greatly mistaken. By the time i'm true with him today, he wont be able to stick his godforsaken di.ck into any woman's.....'




'e don do na! Shuoo, you want spoil me? Abeg come dey go, sha no sleep for there ooo. I dey here dey wait for you, no lele, i siddon gidigba. Your mumsi go soon show ba?'




'i no sure oo. She fit no show early. That hotel get im own quata, and today na Friday, thank God say i no reach day, i for don bend'




'no lele. Make i crash small...' she said lying on my bed. I smiled and pecked her both cheeks 'abeg dey do, you download me the details wella oo'




'no quata' i said leaving the room.




****




My heart throbbed as i reached for the doorknob and opened the door. The smell of marijuana filled the air and i was like...what da hell!




Marijuana! In this room?




He was sitting on the bed, with a victorious smile on his lips, i saw several wraps of...no need to speak too much english, i saw so many wraps of Igbo by his side, i saw plenty stumps on the ground, both from cigarettes and the likes.




'welcome...' he said.




'throw that thing away!' i said in an authoritative manner.




'throw what away?'




'throw away your di.ck! You dumbass, i meant throw that stuff you have in your hand, fishbrain!'




He looked confused 'if you were keen on insulting me, why then did you come here?'




'to give you a piece of mind!' i threw my purse on the ground and walked towards him 'do you think i came here to have sex with you? Do i look like a cheap slut, a call girl who will have her backdown with just a simple phonecall? You're highly mistaken mr handsome, you're the craziest guy i've ever met in the entire universe, where you come from sef? Do you reason at all?'




The smile was off his face. He looked serious. Then he threw the stump away 'all this because of marijuana? Then i'm sorry! You wont see it with me again, there's no use getting angry'




'thats if i get to see your dirty and disgusting face again! Do you know what i feel like doing right now? I feel like cutting off your manhood!'




'i'm sorry'




'for?'




'for making you angry. Look, i never apologise to anyone. I cant even remember the last time i apologised to anyone but i'm doing it now, if smoking makes you angry, i swear i would never do it in your presence again'




'sharrap!'




'Kainene....'




'if you call my name, if you try it, i swear to heaven's name, you wont like what i'd do!' i said flinging my head and my dreads loosed.




He looked shocked and dumbfounded 'what have i done now? I just called your name'




'and i said you shouldnt!'




'okay then i'm sorry. I'm sorry it would never happen again, God! What have i gotten myself into?'




'trouble, big trouble!'




Then he reached forward and kissed me.

TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:09pm On Dec 11, 2016
Mismore make i no find your comment oo
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:11pm On Dec 11, 2016
Kharstiel Merceed, i jst dey view una wit 3D, no comment first

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:13pm On Dec 11, 2016
ayoxelee:

wao! so this update was dedicated to me..... tnk u very mch , u jxt press d function key in me, gonno b kidnapping all readers wtout comment . Tnkz for d dedication
Lollz, my self appointnd kidnapper
Re: Red Ashes by mismore(f): 10:12pm On Dec 11, 2016
Lol...i was caught at last!

Nice story op!
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:43pm On Dec 11, 2016
Nathan is too much of himself but getting Nene that easily is something else. Anyway, they wont last.......Mabel and Chichi don't jell because.......

Jolade is a milksop, she should report. Starting with Nathan down to the six unknown rapists.
Re: Red Ashes by MozB: 11:41pm On Dec 11, 2016
'Does he hurt you?' 'no', 'i love him, but i dont want to marry him, he is a good man, but he hits me'... Confused Jolade. Smh.
.
Arranged marriage never works. The earlier this too ladies find out, the better. And why do they even want this two people together?
.
Meanwhile this smoker guy wants to fall in love o... Lol
Nice story chumzypinky. Still following.
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 6:48am On Dec 12, 2016
Kainene is the one that can change d bad behavior of Nathan. Continue yr good work and pls more update.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 7:18am On Dec 12, 2016
Emmadiva i jst postion dey look u
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:07am On Dec 12, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Prettyhurts Saraphina if i dont c ur comments eh...
LOL, nice story dear. More ink to your biro
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:17am On Dec 12, 2016
Prettyhurts:

LOL, nice story dear. More ink to your biro
Tanks dear

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Re: Red Ashes by abefe99: 10:18am On Dec 12, 2016
nice one dear
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:25am On Dec 12, 2016
KAINENE.




I tried pulling away but he didnt let me go. This was my first kiss. It was slow and sensual and i didnt even know when i stopped fighting him. His hands circled my waist pulling me closer. And my hands, with minds of their own went round his neck.




He slowly lowered me to the bed. I knew what was happening but i couldnt control it, it was like i was being remoted.
The slow kiss suddenly turned rough. I'd never kissed before but it was very easy for me to move my mouth in rhythm with his. Nothing came to my mind that moment, my mind was blank.




Then he stopped. I reached for his head and pulled it closer but he sat up. He wiped his face with his palms 'i'm sorry. But you have to go home' he said looking at my lips.




I remained on the bed. I was so ashamed of myself. Words couldnt explain how i felt that moment. It was as if i was going crazy.




I slowly sat up, reached for my purse and walked towards the door with my head bowed low.




'Kainene,' he called. I stopped but i didnt turn back. I felt him coming towards me, then he stopped 'this is the first time i let a woman go without sleeping with her. And this is my first kiss'




I turned around quickly as if i had been slapped hard from behind 'you said?'




'you heard me'




Then i walked towards him 'do you think you can fool me with your lies? Do you even hear yourself at all? This is the first time you're letting a woman go without sleeping with her and you're telling me this is your first kiss? So for your mind, dem write capital letter MUMU for my forehead abi? See this mugu oo'




He took a step backwards with a frightened look on his face 'i'm sorry, but it wasnt a lie, i....'




'shut up before i cover your face with my left hand!' i barked 'now listen here, i dont want to ever see you anywhere close to me again. I swear down, the next time i see you or you call my cellphone, i would show you how crazy i can be. You just dont know what Kainene is capable of!' i turned around and walked to the door.




'can we be friends?'




'not a chance!' i placed my hand on the doorknob.




'you had my first kiss'




I turned around and eyed him 'well, you had mine too!!!'




I left the room.



***




'nawa oo, you tey for der oo...' Kaka said rubbing her eyes sleepily 'i dey sleep sotey...anyway, leave matter for the jungles, tell me yawa, give me the latest!' she sounded excited.




I sighed. How do i tell her that i went there and got kissed by the guy? How do i tell her that if he hadnt broken the kiss in the first place, i would have fallen into his trap? How do i tell her about the skipping of my heart at the mere thought of him? I didnt know what was wrong with me but i knew something, there was something about this guy.




'babe, i tire abeg...' i said in a voice i could barely recognise was mine 'i go download you yawa tomorrow'




'you say?' the look on her face was alarming. And i knew what she was thinking. Yes, she was right to a point. Kaka was my best friend and she knew just when something had gone down. I had to tell her.




'he kissed me Kaka. We kissed' i threw my purse on the floor and covered my face with my palms 'oh God, i'm so ashamed of myself!'




'you say wetin? E just be lyk say pesin tear me slap now now as i dey talk to you...' she dipped a finger into her ear and shook it 'eh hen, e don clear now, you say una do wetin?'




'i said we kissed, Goddamit!'




'eh na, cus dem write mumude for my face, abi pesin use fool take decorate my armpit na. See beta download me ifeneme, give me gist. I don siddon hear wait for you make you come dey tell me say Tom and Jerry go Aso rock go dey fight Buhari or say Obasanjo go shoprite dey buy ice-cream for Patience Ozokwor, no use me take play oo'




I rolled my eyes. One thing about Kaka she never took things seriously. So i told her everything. When i was done, she was like, Ibu just became the president of Nigeria.




She laughed those gossip laughters while clapping her hands 'Mary don disvirgin oo! I talk am! You cant believe that i actually sensed something was going to happen the moment you agreed to go see the guy at the hotel he booked....' that was her first correct english for the day 'i knew in my hearts of hearts that you felt something for this guy. You just dey here dey puff, dey spread, dey bend nyash, i just dey peep you from side mirrow, you no know. Baby K, you like that guy oo. That was why you went to see him, so you could, i dont know your motives but search your mind well, use Hype take clean your mind, you get my story. The guy kiss you, you no fit tear am slap....'




'its not like that Kaka, you're making me feel worse. I actually struggled with the guy, he took advantage of me....'




'this one na too much Wole Soyinka english. I no go school oo, Kainenechukwu Igho, take it or leave it, you cant get rid of this guy, mark my words....'




I stared at her.




TBC

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:26am On Dec 12, 2016
Saraphina, i just dey monitor your movements
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:30am On Dec 12, 2016
Rosypearl Girlyy make i no find una comments oo, chop clean mouth is a sin
Re: Red Ashes by Girlyy: 10:30am On Dec 12, 2016
Thanks for the update #more please...
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:31am On Dec 12, 2016
Girlyy:
Thanks for the update #more please...
Dats my baby gal, at lease you no chop clean mouth
Re: Red Ashes by saraphina(f): 10:33am On Dec 12, 2016
thank you for this wonderful break fast ma..
Re: Red Ashes by saraphina(f): 10:35am On Dec 12, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Saraphina, i just dey monitor your movements
abeg na...
Re: Red Ashes by rosypearl(f): 10:38am On Dec 12, 2016
ghost reader mode deactivated, i must follow dis one, thats a very nice story u have up there more ink to your pen
Re: Red Ashes by tijehi(f): 12:35pm On Dec 12, 2016
Really nice story to ri Olorun.
Will follow to d end.

Well done.
Re: Red Ashes by empress101(f): 1:53pm On Dec 12, 2016
cheesy nice story line
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 2:05pm On Dec 12, 2016
Mushmustapha comment oo

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