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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 2:52pm On Jul 14, 2017
Akinwale1424:
I no know sef,, d idiot just ban me for nothing
no vex for them
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by bummybummy(f): 5:06pm On Jul 14, 2017
[quote author=SurestG post=58452205]dedication

Queenitee, Evajael, Akinwale1424, lovingyouhun, kimberlywest, stephenGee12, oluwatymylehyn, kimkardashain, nuellaluv, healer 007, shakyroh320, bummybummy, olahajayi, Dessydemmy, kyliespicer, Rachealfst, samyfreshsmooth, VeeGeeCee, Jane1234f, eyinimofeoluwa. thanks for the dedication

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by queenitee(f): 5:36pm On Jul 14, 2017
Thanks for the dedication love. I feel for the present Amanda

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 7:58pm On Jul 14, 2017
[quote author=SurestG post=58452205]dedication

Queenitee, Evajael, Akinwale1424, lovingyouhun, kimberlywest, stephenGee12, oluwatymylehyn, kimkardashain, nuellaluv, healer 007, shakyroh320, bummybummy, olahajayi, Dessydemmy, kyliespicer, Rachealfst, samyfreshsmooth, VeeGeeCee, Jane1234f, eyinimofeoluwa. Thanks for d dedication....following anytime anyday

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Kimkardashain(f): 8:19pm On Jul 14, 2017
SurestG tnk u 4 the update.i feel sorry 4 amanda

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Oyindawealth(f): 8:50pm On Jul 14, 2017
Good story line...following graciously... Thanks 4 d mention... I'll definitely see dis 2 d end. SurestG u are doin wonderfully well...keep it up!! More plssss!!!
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by gtin(m): 9:20pm On Jul 14, 2017
Can wait to know what happened with Tom
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Qasaforlife(f): 9:26pm On Jul 14, 2017
Nice story you have here. Thumbs up dearie
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by swankmee(f): 9:49pm On Jul 14, 2017
Wish Amanda and Fred would sort things coz their kids have started avoiding them.

More ink.. SurestG

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale14(m): 9:50pm On Jul 14, 2017
SurestG don update oo

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by rachealfst(f): 10:06pm On Jul 14, 2017
[quote author=SurestG post=584522 how are trip was. [/quote] Thanks for the dedication dear sis. More Inspiration....
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Jane1234f(f): 10:24pm On Jul 14, 2017
Thanks for the mention
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Ne0w1zarD: 10:31pm On Jul 14, 2017
Nice story op, but I only read action and romance (er0t!©) stories tongue
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by samyfreshsmooth(m): 11:26pm On Jul 14, 2017
SurestG:
dedication

Q.ueenitee, Evajae.l, Ak.inwale1424, lovingyouh.un, k.imberlywest, stephenGe.e12, olu.watymylehyn, kim.kardashain, n.uellaluv, healer 00.7, shaky.,roh320, bummybu.mmy, .o.lahajayi, Dessydem.my., k.yliespicer, Rachealfs.t, sa.myfreshsmooth, VeeG.eeCee, J.ane1234f, eyini.mofeoluwa.


CHAPTER 10



thanks super much for this hun

the story is captivating

i really do love smart kids like agnes..............................

Lets see how it al ends for amanda sha.....i follow still grin grin

and thanks yet again

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale1424(m): 1:31pm On Jul 15, 2017
SurestG:
dedication

Queenitee, Evajael, Akinwale1424, lovingyouhun, kimberlywest, stephenGee12, oluwatymylehyn, kimkardashain, nuellaluv, healer 007, shakyroh320, bummybummy, olahajayi, Dessydemmy, kyliespicer, Rachealfst, samyfreshsmooth, VeeGeeCee, Jane1234f, eyinimofeoluwa.


CHAPTER 10

Amanda pulled over at the parking lot and went into her shop. She looked so distressed,She was upset and her workers could sense it. Her kids gave her a shocker on their way from school.

She had gone to pick them from school to spend the 3 weeks 2nd term holiday with her at home.

"don't take us home" Agnes said

Amy smiled at her daughter as she ignited the car "hmmm so where do you want to go?" she looked behind her seat so that you could look at her daughter's face.

"Grandma's house" she blurted with a frown

"Bennett" she turned to face her son who sat silently at the front, beside her. The boy gave her a frown and smiled at his sister before replying his mother

"yes mom we are staying with granny this holiday" Little Bennett told her.

Amanda gave birth to Agnes a year after her wedding, 11years ago to be precise. An intelligent girl in Junior secondary school 2, the best in her class, she received several prizes in primary school until she was ten years old. Her parents issue affected her drastically. After so many investigations, the school counselor found out that her poor performance was due to what she was experiencing at home, her parents were invited to the school several times by the school authority, this made them both resolved into taking her to a boarding school together with Bennett, her younger brother who was given birth to 4years after her so he was 9years. Boarding school became a pleasurable place for them than home. Agnes always preferred going to her granny's than staying home to witness and see her mother being turned to punching back in her presence by her dad.

Amanda looked perplexed, and prayed deep within her that her guess should be wrong "I will drive you there but will you both tell me why you don't want to come home? At least to see your dad who misses you everyday"

The kids hated coming home from school ever since they found comfort at the boarding house but how would she tell them everything had returned to normal in their home. Amanda had always found Agnes In her room crying each time she saw them fighting and quarreling, she hated it.

"if we go home with you, we will witness another fight, and we both are happy without seeing you both for now right?" she tapped Bennett on the shoulder and he smiled. Amanda was speechless, her home was breaking, she could feel the salty taste of her tears. The rest of the drive was in silence. She drove them to their Granny's house, Fred's parents.


*****

The drive back to lagos was fantastic, Tom's love for her appreciated. Her stay at his parents' place during the weekend was interesting. Gladys was already waiting at the door to welcome the duo, Tom didn't bother staying after dropping Amy off because he was exhausted and needed to get ready for work the following day.

Gladys inquisitive stare made Amy uncomfortable, she gave Gladys the excuse of going to rest because of work the next day because she was not ready give her any gist concerning how are trip was.

Thanks for d dedication,, dem don release my first account (Akinwale14) so I no go use this acct again
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Healer007: 6:30pm On Jul 15, 2017
SurestG:
Amanda gave birth to Agnes 11years ago Bennett, her younger brother who was given birth to 4years after her so he was "9years".
undecided
NiCe.... Thanks for the update... Lovely story. Now the children loathes the idea of staying at home grin.
How will she convince them that things are now better (that's even if things are really normal comparing the recent behaviour of Fred and the advice he received earlier)
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Eyinimofeoluwa(f): 7:00pm On Jul 15, 2017
SurestG person dey h for update nw plz update plz!!!!
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 8:10pm On Jul 15, 2017
Eyinimofeoluwa:
SurestG person dey h for update nw plz update plz!!!!
i'm not feeling well so i cant update
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 8:14pm On Jul 15, 2017
Healer007:

undecided
NiCe.... Thanks for the update... Lovely story. Now the children loathes the idea of staying at home grin.
How will she convince them that things are now better (that's even if things are really normal comparing the recent behaviour of Fred and the advice he received earlier)
it should be 7years i'll correct that.
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 8:29pm On Jul 15, 2017
Akinwale1424:
Thanks for d dedication,, dem don release my first account (Akinwale14) so I no go use this acct again
okay grin congrat cheesy
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Akinwale14(m): 9:46pm On Jul 15, 2017
SurestG:
okay grin congrat cheesy
lol
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 6:39am On Jul 17, 2017
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Kimkardashain(f): 7:16am On Jul 17, 2017
SurestG:
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
ow sis 4gve me pls, how are u now?
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 7:27am On Jul 17, 2017
Kimkardashain:

ow sis 4gve me pls, how are u now?
I feel better but still can't type thanks sis
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by swankmee(f): 8:41am On Jul 17, 2017
[quote author=SurestG post=58533109]Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message


Eyah please get well soon so you can come and do d needful embarassed
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Jane1234f(f): 8:41am On Jul 17, 2017
SurestG:
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
So sorry, hope you are getting better?
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Oyindawealth(f): 8:44am On Jul 17, 2017
SurestG:
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
eeyah sorry... D Lord is ur strength.. Get well soonest!! wink
SurestG:
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
eeyah sorry... D Lord is ur strength.. Get well soonest!!
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by bummybummy(f): 11:07am On Jul 17, 2017
SurestG:
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
sorry for that, ao was ur health?

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 11:40am On Jul 17, 2017
swankmee:
[/quote][quote author=Jane1234f post=58536440]So sorry, hope you are getting better?
a bit
bummybummy:
sorry for that, ao was ur health?
I feel a little better
Oyindawealth:
eeyah sorry... D Lord is ur strength.. Get well soonest!! wink eeyah sorry... D Lord is ur strength.. Get well soonest!!
amen thank you very much smiley

I should be able to update in 3days time
Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by SurestG(f): 11:43am On Jul 17, 2017
Jane1234f:
So sorry, hope you are getting better?
thanks dear

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Re: Legal Captivity By Amponsem Akosua by Healer007: 12:00pm On Jul 17, 2017
SurestG:
Chaiiii this people are not caring o, so its only my update you notice abi and not my absence. Not even a get well soon message embarassed
cry
Dont be angry ma'am
On behalf of me and my fellow followers of your story, we want to sincerely apologize for the unaffectionate behaviorism angry we put up. in ur last message stating you were not updating because you are not feeling too well.....
E b like say people nor reason that message say you sickcheesy
Anyway, I wish you "get well soon". Take care of yourself and pray to "who you believe" for healing and full restoration of your health.
Wait oo... This speech don too dey long o angry
Oya.... "WISHING YOU SPEEDY RECOVERY" smileysmileysmiley

The rest of Una Happy Monday o
gringringringringringringringringringringringringringringrin

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