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Fledgling - Poetry by Nobody: 8:48am On Jun 26, 2017
Fly high, little one,
Fly, fly, fly,
Out of your shell,
And into the sky,

Crooked wings, Wet and clammy,
Unsteady legs, Weak and new,
Wide eyes fearful, fluttery tummy,
Tunnel vision, into the blue


Fall, face first forward,
Each time that you try,
Beneath the watch,
Of one very wary eye

Nose in the sand, Few times too many,
Come out resolved, And character built,
Determination sold, for a cursory penny,
A shower of praise, A solidarity quilt


The sky's still waiting,
Waiting way up high,
Trust in its shimmers,
It's your destiny to fly

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Re: Fledgling - Poetry by phoenixthefirst(m): 2:11pm On Jun 27, 2017
MsRoe:
Fly high, little one,
Fly, fly, fly,
Out of your shell,
And into the sky,

Crooked wings, Wet and clammy,
Unsteady legs, Weak and new,
Wide eyes fearful, fluttery tummy,
Tunnel vision, into the blue


Fall, face first forward,
Each time that you try,
Beneath the watch,
Of one very wary eye

Nose in the sand, Few times too many,
Come out resolved, And character built,
Determination sold, for a cursory penny,
A shower of praise, A solidarity quilt


The sky's still waiting,
Waiting way up high,
Trust in its shimmers,
It's your destiny to fly
Nice poem. I would like to follow you. I hope you'll give me the permission.
Re: Fledgling - Poetry by Nobody: 2:21pm On Jun 27, 2017
phoenixthefirst:
Nice poem. I would like to follow you. I hope you'll give me the permission.


Thank you. Sure you can smiley.
Re: Fledgling - Poetry by phoenixthefirst(m): 2:26pm On Jun 27, 2017
MsRoe:



Thank you. Sure you can smiley.
Thanks for the permission.

Modified: it's an honour that you're following me in return.

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Re: Fledgling - Poetry by elfico(m): 6:38am On Jun 30, 2017
write write write

o good poet, write

for more ink to your quil

keeps us all joy-filled.


nive poem @op.

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Re: Fledgling - Poetry by Nobody: 10:53am On Jun 30, 2017
elfico:
write write write

o good poet, write

for more ink to your quil

keeps us all joy-filled.


nive poem @op.



Thank you. smiley

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