Hello Nairalanders and fellow poets! I will be dishing out poems wriiten by my girlfriend for your review,critic and scrutiny. She just began in the journey of poetry and I want her to be thoroughly guided by your discreation.... Thank you as you follow...

I will be posting the first poem by her (callidymphna) and its called "EAST MEETS WEST". I would love to here your criticisim.

EAST MEETS WEST
Destined union of two hearts
Cupid's victim by two swords
Diminishing the distance thereof
Soul's joined as one in love
As east meets west
A journey begins
Unending lifetime race
Supersedes Romeo and Juliet's fate

East meet west
Anger, jealousy, greed, and the rest
Eclipse of two distinct points
Fiery flames burnt down the best

War between blood witnessed
Sequel of strength and greatness
The land bears scars of this fight
The stars barn us from its sight
As East meet West
The stage is set.

that's gold

Script94:
that's gold

Thank u sir. Stay tuned for more

REMEMBER TO FORGET
How can i remember to forget? All the dreams that we shared Never knew i will regret Smiles and kisses when you cared.
How can i remember to forget? Nights we spend in the moonlight Never knew all this would fade Oh! You broke my heart with spade.
How can i remember to forget, The melody to my heartbeat Breaking each morn' with songs so sweet Matching the passion with great heat.
How can i remember to forget The taste of your lips Begilded by your hips Taunting me even in dreams.
How can i remember to forget Eyes as emerald, shone like gold Thought you would be my 'To have and to hold' How can i remember to forget!
My sweet love!!!

Ur comments are highly appreciated

SITTING ON THE FENCE Sitting on the fence The consolation of a coward Dance of indecision Lyrics of confusion
Being neither hot nor cold Condemned by the Holy book Paranoid on what to choose Casualty of a weak mind
Tossed by the wind of times Driven by so many tides Rumours and truths alike Failing to sail on either side
Sitting on the fence That's a foolish saying hence Son dessert from her embrace She'll conquer your mental state.

SITTING ON THE FENCE Sitting on the fence The consolation of a coward Dance of indecision Lyrics of confusion
Being neither hot nor cold Condemned by the Holy book Paranoid on what to choose Casualty of a weak mind
Tossed by the wind of times Driven by so many tides Rumours and truths alike Failing to sail on either side
Sitting on the fence That's a foolish saying hence Son dessert from her embrace She'll conquer your mental state.