kindly find attached herewith my latest approved work

Its not a bad design,
Its simple and straight.

The fonts are a little bit too straight and common, i know , i know, that u want it readable,
but it was too consistently the same font evrywhere.

but its nice.

Well, not going to give you the thumb on this one. There's plenty of room for improvement.

Like newcreatio said, you need to improve on the fonts. There are unlimited fonts on the internet which you can download for free, do some searching.

@cnario
luvly simple design u got there.

If i were drivin in car at 140mph and saw ur design on a billboard on the highway hung about 100 feet above the ground, and I have only 5 seconds to get "the message", I will get the message in 3 seconds, that's how nicw the job is, simple and straight, no clustering and WWF between the elements.

Keep it up bro!

wbb