Okay, this one is just a snippet of things to come.

I made the beat, I liked it and I thought I should play around with the vocals. That way, it gives an idea to those who may be keen on using it.


Anyway, let me know what you think.

http://www.plunder.com/Mixtape1-download-511989dc63.htm


And here is the remix featuring my man Krayola!

http://www.plunder.com/na-u-get-ur-mouth-mp3-download-a8f132891b.htm

Ehrrrrrrrm ehrrrrrm the beat was okay, but the vocals was not.

It sound slike you're trying to hard to sound sexy.

5/10. . . .

I usually take criticism on board, but saying I am "trying to sound sexy" is just not true. Please explain how I am "trying to be sexy" lol. I am a guy and as such don't have a clue how to. Lmao.

ElRazur:

I usually take criticism on board, but saying I am "trying to sound sexy" is just not true. Please explain how I am "trying to be sexy" lol. I am a guy and as such don't have a clue how to. Lmao.

Ok, maybe sexy is not the word.

"flow" trying too hard to flow and trying hard to be lyrical. I dont feel that he vocals correlates with the beats

I hope you're not taking this as an insult, I seriously need to learn to explain things without coming across as offensive

Oh flow and sexy? Lmao.

No worries, I am playing about with the vocals and not trying to impress anyone. But yeah, there is always room for improvement. Watch out for Krayola's version.

Ok

FL Gators:

Ok, maybe sexy is not the word.

"flow" trying too hard to flow and trying hard to be lyrical. I dont feel that he vocals correlates with the beats

I hope you're not taking this as an insult, I seriously need to learn to explain things without coming across as offensive

lmao. wicked girl

For your effort take 3.5/10. . . . . . leave the rapping/singing to other cats on NL

rapjunkie:

For your effort take 3.5/10. . . . . . leave the rapping/singing to other cats on NL

RAPJUNKIE YOU ARE ALSO WICKED. TERRY G MUST BE THIS GUY'S MENTOR.LMFAO
, ''FL GATORS MON WODIE''
AND WHO IS THAT BABBOON NIGGA LAUGHING MONKEY LAUGH IN THE BACKGROUND,
RAZOR GOT HIMSELF A LAUGHING GROUPIE , EVERYBODY WAN RAP BOTH CAT AND DOG , NA WA O.
THIS IS THE WACKEEST PIECE OF THRASH I SEEN IN NL MIXTAPE SO FAR. I WILL CHOOSE TO HEAR JOE SKIPPY OVER THIS GUY. THRASH

mehn ofoka. . . i lik all ur beats i can spit to anyone of them bruh. . .

streetwize:

mehn ofoka. . . i lik all your beats i can spit to anyone of them bruh. . .

I HAVENT EVEN GIVEN U MY TOP 100 BEATS YET . THE ONES I GAVE U ARE THE ONES I DASH MY FRIENDS FREE OF CHARGE. OSHE JARE , OMO LUABI MI.

Ahh so FL Gators is a girl. . .  

ehenn
As I was sayin ofoka i don sdrop anoda track self, its called pen-ultimate, u don hear am??
i put the link somwhere on d oda thread, I dey on fire anytim jus send me the full version of dat monster one

I think your verse was really nice jare.
Come on . . . you need to get more of that on the mixtape. Your charisma on the beat sef killed it.

But you'll need to get a better hook . . . I thought you were going to do a 50 or sumn.

Niice on . . . RJ doesn't like your guts, Ofoka just hates you . . . you can't take emotion-ridden comments serious can you??

Eldee, thanks man.

Yeah the chorus needs tweaking.

As per the rest of the stuff been said, when their existence is long denied, they will fade away. As you can see, I hardly dignify his post with a reply anymore.

My intention was to give a concept for those who can really rap and sing to build on, but idiotic comments have missed these.

Krayola is keen on that, so may get more people involve.

U got a Nice thing goin on there Elrazur

streetwize:

Ahh so FL Gators is a girl. . .  

ehenn
As I was sayin ofoka i don sdrop anoda track self, its called pen-ultimate, u don hear am??
i put the link somwhere on d oda thread, I dey on fire anytim jus send me the full version of dat monster one

Why does everyone think I'm a man

ofokaofoki:

RAPJUNKIE YOU ARE ALSO WICKED.  TERRY G MUST BE THIS GUY'S MENTOR.LMFAO
, ''FL GATORS MON WODIE''   
AND WHO IS THAT BABBOON NIGGA LAUGHING MONKEY LAUGH IN THE BACKGROUND, 
RAZOR GOT HIMSELF A LAUGHING GROUPIE , EVERYBODY WAN RAP BOTH CAT AND DOG , NA WA O.
THIS IS THE WACKEEST PIECE OF THRASH I SEEN IN NL MIXTAPE SO FAR. I WILL CHOOSE  TO HEAR JOE SKIPPY OVER THIS GUY. THRASH

Ok, that is it!!! You need to stop and give an advice.
All this hating needs to stop on EL Razur. . . . we are ALL still waiting on your own beat. . . . 5 months after

Mush luff tho

Fl gator. . .iwo nikan tan. . . lol. . .

Good to see this mixtape falling into one piece. . .

shats outs to razur mahn. . . ori e wanbe. . .Nice one too. . . so we got 1 track bdat lol

lalaboi:

Fl gator. . .iwo nikan tan. . . lol. . .

Good to see this mixtape falling into one piece. . .

shats outs to razur mahn. . . ori e wanbe. . .Nice one too. . . so we got 1 track bdat lol

lol kini mo se to wa out of my usual "ness"

eldee:

I think your verse was just there jare.
. . . RJ doesn't like your guts, Ofoka just hates you . . . you can't take emotion-ridden comments serious can you??

THIS IS A BETTER WAY OF TELLING U THAT YOU ARE WACK , WHEN U BAD MOUTH OTHER PEOPLE U NEED TO HAVE BULLET PROOF TO TAKE OTHERS PEOPLES BOMBS.  IF ONLY U KNEW THAT THOSE U BAD MOUTHED YESTERDAY WILL BE THE SAME ONES TO REVIEW your OWN poo TODAY THEN U WOULDNT DO IT.
THATS THE PROBLEM WITH HUMAN BEING ESPECIALLY NIGERIANS . SAVE U ALL THE STORY THE POINT REMAINS THAT  EL RAZUR IS SUFFERING FROM CHRONIC WACKNESS.


@FL GATORS
ME and u no dey the same world , you are in saturn i am in jupiter, i am light years ahead of u my 1965 day old lady. besides how could u rubbish your one time boyfriend el razur like that publicly. iyawo buruku.

el razur pele o, you dont mess with a rapjunkie and an ofoka in nairaland,. we have 75 years experience in things like this. huhuhuhu el razur wack backside mofo. to even think u rubish terry g online and u go back to make him your idol .hypocrite . eldee free me small, make i talk sense to hin head. if u see the way this el razur asswipe insults upcoming artists, the way he yabs terry g, the way he yabs anyone that uses autotune , u go know say this el razur asshole na real bad mouthinh hypocrite. he hasnt learnt not to mess with ebora meji tongbe nu nairaland.
i am just starting wit him , shebi u say u get craze, shebi u say u get bad mouth? . oya now , carry come.

lalaboi:

Fl gator. . .iwo nikan tan. . . lol. . .

Good to see this mixtape falling into one piece. . .

shats outs to razur mahn. . . ori e wanbe. . .Nice one too. . . so we got 1 track bdat lol

Lol.

I think we need better coordination to be honest.  Me, I don go back to uni for my Second degree, so time no dey my end. I can only do about an hour a day, and with many request for beats coming in and coupled with poor coordination and communication it is hard to get it together.

As per this track, I am actually waiting for someone to take it on and give directions as to if they needed more stuff to it etc.

Finally, the final/approved tracks will be kept under-wraps until "release date". I am guessing at next month or so at some point.

FL Gators:

Why does everyone think I'm a man

maybe its because you are a gay hermaphrodite.

FL Gators:

Ok, that is it!!! You need to stop and give an advice.

which advice u wan give person with bad mouth, have u noticed that rapjunkie  doesnt like el razur guts and the way he bad mouths people and destroys people thread with bad comments intentionally , we are just serving him his own pills lets see whether he can swallow it, besides i am still playing his platinum hit for him lemme see whether he can dance to his own tune.
eni koo omo, enimo okooo.

FL Gators:


Mush luff tho

hun hun hole am there.
you cant be loving me and loving el razur at the same time , am filing for divorce tomorrow morning,





THIS IS A BETTER WAY OF TELLING U THAT YOU ARE WACK , WHEN U BAD MOUTH OTHER PEOPLE U NEED TO HAVE BULLET PROOF TO TAKE OTHERS PEOPLES BOMBS.  IF ONLY U KNEW THAT THOSE U BAD MOUTHED YESTERDAY WILL BE THE SAME ONES TO REVIEW your OWN poo TODAY THEN U WOULDNT DO IT.
THATS THE PROBLEM WITH HUMAN BEING ESPECIALLY NIGERIANS . SAVE U ALL THE STORY THE POINT REMAINS THAT  EL RAZUR IS SUFFERING FROM CHRONIC WACKNESS.


@FL GATORS
ME and u no dey the same world , you are in saturn i am in jupiter, i am light years ahead of u my 1965 day old lady. besides how could u rubbish your one time boyfriend el razur like that publicly. Grin Grin iyawo buruku.

el razur pele o, you dont mess with a rapjunkie and an ofoka in nairaland,. we have 75 years experience in things like this. huhuhuhu el razur wack backside mofo. to even think u rubish terry g online and u go back to make him your idol .hypocrite . eldee free me small, make i talk sense to hin head. if u see the way this el razur asswipe insults upcoming artists, the way he yabs terry g, the way he yabs anyone that uses autotune , u go know say this el razur asshole na real bad mouthinh hypocrite. he hasnt learnt not to mess with ebora meji tongbe nu nairaland.Grin Grin
i am just starting wit him , shebi u say u get craze, shebi u say u get bad mouth? . oya now , carry come.

ofokaofoki:


el razur pele o, you dont mess with a rapjunkie and an ofoka in nairaland,. we have 75 years experience in things like this. huhuhuhu el razur wack backside mofo. to even think u rubish terry g online and u go back to make him your idol .hypocrite . eldee free me small, make i talk sense to hin head. if u see the way this el razur asswipe insults upcoming artists, the way he yabs terry g, the way he yabs anyone that uses autotune , u go know say this el razur asshole na real bad mouthinh hypocrite. he hasnt learnt not to mess with ebora meji tongbe nu nairaland.
i am just starting wit him , shebi u say u get craze, shebi u say u get bad mouth? . oya now , carry come.

You really are an id!ot. A grade one muppet.

Ignoring is the best thing you see, you lack the IQ to engage in anything meaningful and senseless.

You seem to think keeping silent is a sign of weakness, nah far from it, it is however call Wisdom, something you do not have.

Let me see, you have more trash in you than a garbage recycling centre. You claimed to be in India, yet your mentality is that of someone who never left the boundaries of Ojuelegba.

Yes, I am a critic of those making some commercial garbage for consumption of the public. This you have a problem with and as far as it goes, you can choke on it and quench. It takes nothing away from me.

Also looking at your post, it stinks of pure drivel and jealousy. I suppose you wish you are me sometimes hence why you are hell bent on following me around. You ever wonder why I never accepted your request to contact me on face book? Simple, you are an id!ot that I will rather avoid. I guess this is killing you etc.

You claim to be a beat maker, yet you lack the basics of making beat. It is even more silly that you try to teach people etc. I suppose the moment I pointed this out is what is killing you?


Seriously, everyone around here see through your charade. If you really do not get it, you add nothing to me or take nothing away from me.

Grow a brain, or borrow one as you clearly do not have one. I can criticise and post my own beats for criticism too, however no one is yet to hear your so called beat. Who do you really think you are fooling? Omo joke on you and your type.

You instead create multiple accounts to have conversation with yourself and then say "Ofoka beats are tight" what an slowpoke! At what length will you go in deceiving people? Get a life.

You are deluded and like I said before, you most likely suffer from Delusion of Grandeur. Not that you will know what that means anyway.

Also, why do you see the need to think I am in a competition with you? When I started the Mixtape idea, you  rubbished it etc, but now you are part of it? As far as I am concern, I cannot work with morons like you. Nairaland is big enough for you to make your own mix tape.  If anyone needs a real definition of an id!ot, a slowpoke, an id!ot and a brainless immature pleb, it will be you.


In the words of Eldee, you have a low IQ and it is clear for all to see.

PS
I await your trash talk. In the mean time, get some education as your post makes almost no sense.  So pardon me, when I do not reply to your post again. In fact, using the ignore function may be a good idea.

i thot u said u were ignoring , the thing dey pain u abi. u neva halla ?
you have now revealed the real reason why u have beef wit me. anuofia.
you are the cause of ur predicament, i told u from day one not to enter my thread but u entered knowing fully well the consequences of colliding with ebora nairaland.

shebi they warn u not too bumps heads with ebora, u still went ahead to bump head . so the thing pain u sotey u begin voice out , shebi u say u are ignoring , lmao. by the time i am true wit u , u would wish u never crossed eboras path, cant u see everyone has deserted u. it is now el razur alone vs ebora . and u are in deep shit.
for ya info i am just starting wit u. shebi u cooked beef 4 me, i will eat the beef , and eat the fucc kin cattle . u never halla. iwo oloshi jati jati. so the thing fit pain u so tey u write dictionary on top. we have just started .

Empty barrel, they say it makes the loudest noise. I will get back to you once you engage your brain.

@ IMO that stuff is definitely not wack. I like it o. . . I think we need a different hook on it tho.  Nice job jare. For ur first try that's not bad at all. Most people don't sound convincing on the mic at first but u came across quite well. Abeg make I drop One pidginized verse on top am. 

Abeg ofokaofoki and elrazur make una carry ur beef go somewhere else. This thread is for fun and creativity abeg. No bring negative energy come here nitori olorun. And if u really wan beef u guys should make diss tracks and yab each other to pieces.  

Everybody shout alleluia.  

and lets i forget did u notice why rapjunkie hates ur guts,?? its because you are a bad mouthing morafccuker.
those who live in glass house do not throw stones, idiot and the el razur fool is wasting his time making wack songs and feeling funky, na song u don sing be that o.   oponu buruku
see as him dey try to sing and copy terry g swagga , yet you are the first to criticise ginger ur swagga type of songs , tile tile kind of music, iwo hypocrite jati jati.   oti rin kankan.

the day wey i know this el razur na foolish boy na when one new nairalander post hin song  here for review and comments, this fool el razur was the first person to criticise the guy , so tey the guy run comot for nairaland , up till today the guy no show face  post any song here again. this idiot found it easy to kill somebody career by bad mouthing. and u wan put ur own for public to comment, that your bad mouth wey u take use chase away new nairalanders comot na him them go take finish ya own too.    am not surprised why a good pikin like rapjunkie hates u and ur stinking guts.

@Krayola

Gonna send you the back track in a minute. Need to fire up the Music pc. Also do you need it longer? Gosh, I totally forget you are on YIM lol.

Krayola:

@ IMO that stuff is definitely  wack.  
u guys should make diss tracks and yab each other to pieces.  

Everybody shout alleluia.  

alleluia, krayola oya tell him to diss me for hin song, make i give am death blow 37,  
i have been wanting to unleash my death blow 37 on somebody after the sauron death blow.
el razur oya diss now, abi fear dey grip u. come out come battle
. if u get liver.
shout alleliua everybody, another nairaland battle don land o. HURRAY.

Ofoka Im waitin for the beat oh. . . Fl gators can u spit or sing or what is it u do??
and pls ofoka im in the mood to write . . . send it sharp . . . thnx

streetwize:

Ofoka Im waitin for the beat oh. . . Fl gators can u spit or sing or what is it u do??

streetwise, someone is negotiating the purchase of that ''monster beat and 2 others from the first batch wey i send u''. have u seen the other 10 beats wey i send this evening, check ur inbox and pick ur choice quick. b4 another person try jug am

@krayola
u too check ur inbox

fl gators na makossa she wan sing.

@ofokaofoki Please send to my gmail. I'm using my phone so can't download. Thanks