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Agrippa's Syndrome by Judias(m): 5:39pm On Jan 27, 2019
This is purely a fictitious writing....

Fantasy, thriller and history.....

Agrippa's Syndrome


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@Judias

©2019


Episode One


The trombone sound was heard reverberating the east tower of the Palate dome of the Seven kingdoms. The sound only avail the coronation of the Iron King III who is to oversee and rule the affairs of the Seven kingdoms after the sudden disappearance of Alonso the Iron King II. Some hearsay said the king was kidnapped by the grey monkeys of the evil mountains while some said the king disintegrated into gamma rays, an ancient myth many have held on to since the inception of the Seven Kingdoms by the Grail Angel. Alympha, the great sorceress pointed her hands suddenly to the servant Agrippa and named him the Iron King III of the seven Kingdoms. Agrippa was separated and taken through the rites of coronation, from the washing by 200 monks at the ascending waters to the burial in the tomb of the grail angel, and finally the boiling in hot olive sap for 7 days. All these rites must be survived before a king is crowned. And more so, they are nothing compared to the privileges the King would enjoy after. Apart from being the ruler of the Seven Kingdoms, He would be married to 7 maidens from the Seven Kingdoms. He will have access to the kings Gold; the gold is used to purchase angelic portions in the celestial market which only the king have access to. He will also be in control of seasons and weaponry in the Kingdom. Agrippa overcame the rites of coronation and he was crowned before the people at the rising of the Blue Sun. Though many questioned why an ordinary servant was chosen by the gods but nobody could speak out loud for the fear of Alympha the Sorceress.
Agrippa began to rule the Seven kingdoms as the Iron King III. He chose his three wise men from the ruling families. Dodones, Paroites and Bana were the names of the three wise men. They are to be in the decision cabinet of the king. Agrippa made friend with Alympha the Sorceress so as to learn from her pool of wisdom and to keenly harness every patterns and instructions from the gods. The seven Kingdoms have a distinct feature which was the factor for the division into Kingdoms. Agrippa sought the wisdom of the gods on how to progress the course of the Kingdoms. And the gods gave him a warning that he should guard the iron ore of the Kingdom and not to explore it until the earth start to produce the yellow lettuce. Agrippa kept this in the core of his heart and told his three wise men to bear witness so as to preserve the warning. The only snare attached to the warning is that the 7 maidens betrothed to the king will never get pregnant until the yellow lettuce starts growing. The snare is to test the obedience and perseverance of Agrippa.
Re: Agrippa's Syndrome by Emakasurebet: 5:44pm On Jan 27, 2019
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Re: Agrippa's Syndrome by PharoahIII: 11:14pm On Jan 27, 2019
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Judias:
This is purely a fictitious writing....

Fantasy, thriller and history.....

Agrippa's Syndrome


All rights reserved
@Judias

©2019


Episode One


The trombone sound was heard reverberating the east tower of the Palate dome of the Seven kingdoms. The sound only avail the coronation of the Iron King III who is to oversee and rule the affairs of the Seven kingdoms after the sudden disappearance of Alonso the Iron King II. Some hearsay said the king was kidnapped by the grey monkeys of the evil mountains while some said the king disintegrated into gamma rays, an ancient myth many have held on to since the inception of the Seven Kingdoms by the Grail Angel. Alympha, the great sorceress pointed her hands suddenly to the servant Agrippa and named him the Iron King III of the seven Kingdoms. Agrippa was separated and taken through the rites of coronation, from the washing by 200 monks at the ascending waters to the burial in the tomb of the grail angel, and finally the boiling in hot olive sap for 7 days. All these rites must be survived before a king is crowned. And more so, they are nothing compared to the privileges the King would enjoy after. Apart from being the ruler of the Seven Kingdoms, He would be married to 7 maidens from the Seven Kingdoms. He will have access to the kings Gold; the gold is used to purchase angelic portions in the celestial market which only the king have access to. He will also be in control of seasons and weaponry in the Kingdom. Agrippa overcame the rites of coronation and he was crowned before the people at the rising of the Blue Sun. Though many questioned why an ordinary servant was chosen by the gods but nobody could speak out loud for the fear of Alympha the Sorceress.
Agrippa began to rule the Seven kingdoms as the Iron King III. He chose his three wise men from the ruling families. Dodones, Paroites and Bana were the names of the three wise men. They are to be in the decision cabinet of the king. Agrippa made friend with Alympha the Sorceress so as to learn from her pool of wisdom and to keenly harness every patterns and instructions from the gods. The seven Kingdoms have a distinct feature which was the factor for the division into Kingdoms. Agrippa sought the wisdom of the gods on how to progress the course of the Kingdoms. And the gods gave him a warning that he should guard the iron ore of the Kingdom and not to explore it until the earth start to produce the yellow lettuce. Agrippa kept this in the core of his heart and told his three wise men to bear witness so as to preserve the warning. The only snare attached to the warning is that the 7 maidens betrothed to the king will never get pregnant until the yellow lettuce starts growing. The snare is to test the obedience and perseverance of Agrippa.




This isn't good writing at all, it's what in literature we call purple prose, your syntax needs improving. Also, why write about Agrippa or whatever you call him? You're Nigerian, write about Nigeria, write about your history, we have a history too.
Re: Agrippa's Syndrome by tsharp(m): 2:38pm On Jan 28, 2019
PharoahIII:
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This isn't good writing at all, it's what in literature we call purple prose, your syntax needs improving. Also, why write about Agrippa or whatever you call him? You're Nigerian, write about Nigeria, write about your history, we have a history too.


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Re: Agrippa's Syndrome by damselposh(f): 3:11pm On Jan 28, 2019
PharoahIII:
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This isn't good writing at all, it's what in literature we call purple prose, your syntax needs improving. Also, why write about Agrippa or whatever you call him? You're Nigerian, write about Nigeria, write about your history, we have a history too.




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