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Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Nobody: 8:44pm On May 30, 2007 |
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Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by iice(f): 3:38pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
Work on your tenses man! |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by denex: 4:29pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
My life is not a tale by and idiot. Please do not generalise try to personalise this poem. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Nobody: 6:33pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
sorry iice do u know what they called poetic linesence.anyway i cant blame ufor u are not the one edit my poem .just keep ur ear and eyeson ground when my antology of poems will be out.but in literature we have what we called poetic linesence.if u really want to see my literary work of art visit poetry club web site. all of them are well elucidate.thanks . |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by iice(f): 6:38pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
Ok oh! goodluck in your linesence and how elucidate your poems are I think i shall stick to those that have no linesence! |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Nobody: 6:50pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
u see iice dont be angry honestly i appriciate ur comments and they are well noted .am a cool person,and i always stand to be corrected.i will like u to read ur comment on the subsequent one .but i asking u if a short of illumination are potray .thank iice and indeed very grateful.more of those criticism. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by mukina2: 6:54pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
iice ca va le tu tu " " i ikanise it for you |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by iice(f): 6:55pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
iice is not angry as obviously accompanied by the smiling faces Ok oh, i shall try to read your other poems, though i do not understand what you mean by oyezed: |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by SMC(f): 7:03pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
ROFLMFAO. With this kind of grammer, I wonder who will persevere with the reading. Seems to me that the poster does not even have a clue that he has written lots of crap over several posts. Goodluck to you iice. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by iice(f): 7:06pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
exactly why i suggested he worked on his tenses but since i don't know poetic linesence my suggestion didnt make any impact |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by mukina2: 7:10pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
i did poetry in school but i have never heard of poetic linesense |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by dominobaby(f): 11:11pm On Jun 02, 2007 |
Lmao!! ! I just can't grab a thing. @poster, nothing is clear at all. Take iice's words seriously! |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by denex: 12:40pm On Jun 03, 2007 |
You mean poetic licence includes a right to murder English? All those pepper sellers in Ojuelegba should hurry and apply for this poetic licence O! This is how your poem is supposed to go: Life is a tale by an idiot man full of sound and fun signifying nothing an epistle of a lunatic read by the learned listened to by serious audiences ending in laughter a flying bird pursued by a frog for a thousand and one years till its sudden and arrant death a football pitch with numerous players yet only one ball and a monkey post. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by SMC(f): 4:46pm On Jun 03, 2007 |
denex: Much better grammer, but poem is still makes no sense as a whole . Maybe original poster only wanted to make sense line by line basis, hence his use of the so called word "linesense" |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Nobody: 2:25am On Jun 04, 2007 |
this isnt poetic license at all. it's plagiarism. Our bard Oyezed has been (craftily) paraphrasing Shakespeare. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by denex: 3:06pm On Jun 04, 2007 |
Abeg you guys should forgive me to show how the poem would be even with poet licence. I didn't know what was really amiss was linesense. Which I don't have! I also didn't know it was a copycat job. No wonder there was reasonable imagery combined with terrible grammar permitted by poetic linesense. I apologise. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by kingsikaz(m): 3:49pm On Feb 01, 2008 |
try work on your tenses. let your poem rhyme and let it always be rhythmic, with that u can get there. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Trevelyan(m): 12:31pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
Its awfuly bad sum nairalanderz poet are dribbling over sum poetic licenses they av not bin issued,we all post our works in here 4 cricism n comments, so dont breed d habit of taking offence afterall such opinions cld b personal wit or witout sound judgement! |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by colors(f): 9:10pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
seriously i hate it when people ask for criticism and then when they get it they cant take it. if you cant handle the heat why go out under the sun? all this talk about poetic license is just an excuse for mediocrity. wake up to reality, your writing is CRAPPY!!!!! you cant even spell!!!!, that you would inflict on poor unsuspecting nairalanders this thing you call writing is grossly unacceptable and that you would even deem it fit to maul the work of one of literature's finest shakespeare my God you should be banned forever from nairaland!!!!!!!!!!! my advice, go back to kindergarten level, learn how to spell |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by 4Him(m): 9:13pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
Not forgetting that the entire first verse is plagiarised. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by colors(f): 9:16pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
4him |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by 4Him(m): 9:28pm On Feb 21, 2008 |
colors: lol its a line from Shakespeare by Macbeth - And then is heard no more: it is a tale Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury, Signifying nothing. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by protocol(m): 2:33pm On May 23, 2008 |
FIRSTLY, POETIC LICENS IS THE RIGHT OF A POET TO USE WORDS SAY ANY HOW BUT TO MAKE MEANINGS IF I MAY ASK, WHAT IS THE ESSENCE OF POETRY? IS IT NOT TO MAKE SENCE AND CONVEY MESSAGES. MAN, YOURS DID NOT.DO U KNOW I HAVE REDA IT FOR SAY 25MINS AND STILL COULD NOT GET ANYTHING. PLS. WK ON IT, WE AR ALL HERE TO LEARN. |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Cayon(f): 1:21am On May 24, 2008 |
Ouch!!!! tough crowd |
Re: Poem ;comment And Criticism Is Allow by Nobody: 4:31am On Jun 18, 2008 |
Funny thread!!! |
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