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Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 7:30pm On Apr 28, 2020
With lock down, one has to try out their skills... decided to write this story story for your reading pleasure.





Do not be too critical, I admit, I am very rusty, still learning grin


Enjoy...
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 7:35pm On Apr 28, 2020
Plothole

She gazed into the mirror and she could see a smile forming on her face, she was in love with her own image, the woman she had her become, she was just called to bar a few months ago and already employment offers rolled in their numbers almost immediately, yes her dad may have had a hand in some of them, been a renown lawyer and SAN in the country, but she had no plans to work in his firm, she always wanted to become her own woman, earn it all herself. She was elated when an NGO that takes up rape and child Abuse cases called her to be their lawyer, she has always had passion for the girl child, and issues about women generally, she cared less that people tagged her a feminist and an ‘’anti-men’’, she was ready to send as many men to jail that try to exploit women omolara was one, if not the best among her peers all through her school days, and she succeeded in setting a record of the best G.P.A in faculty law university of Abuja, So YES, she had all the reason to be proud of herself. She put on a little red lipstick on her lips, pouted her lips, tonight she was not suing or sending anyone to jail, she was going to her fun, she was going to a club for the first time in years with her bestie, Richard.

‘’madame, this one you are all dressed up like this, where are you going to, is Hassan coming?’’ her mum asked with arm folded behind.

‘’not Hassan oh, Richard’’.

‘’hmmm, are you not supposed to be spending more time with your fiancé , since secondary school, you and this your Richard, hope there nothing more to this?, ko ma ye mimo(i don’t understand)’’ her mum inquired.

‘’mummy you have started again, I was with Hassan all day. You saw when he came to drop me off, Richard is coming to pick me, we are going to a club, Hassan would probably meet us there, one more time there is nothing between us, he is my friend, bestie, like a brother to me’’.

‘’ ehn ehn, you have your brothers, which one is brother, wo, better be careful, I don’t even understand children nowadays, a man and woman will be calling themselves friends. I don’t know which day goat and yam became best friends. Bestie ko, bestie ni’’ mama omolara continued, as she took her leave.


‘’gosh, this woman’’ omolara said to herself.

Yes, her mum made some valid point, but she knows Richard, she knows herself, and Richard knows her. She can never cheat in a relationship, she never bothered herself with a relationship in the university, Richard was the closest male friend she had, though they have known each other for years, since secondary school, they didn’t start talking till their first year in the university, he was in economics department, both law and economics where situated in the mini campus gwagwalada, the mini campus was not so big, so it was easy to see a person 3 times in an hour if you walk round the school. She saw Richard during registration, and recognised him as familiar face from secondary school, he walked up to her and the friendship grew from there.
There was a time at the beginning of their friendship she saw herself getting a little bit attracted to him, but she shut it out almost immediately and it all disappeared, she was helped with the fact that he had a girlfriend at that point, and since then she didn’t feel the least attraction for him or any guy, she didn’t let herself, she focus on her studies. She met her fiancé Hassan in her service year, he was a typical fine boy, and she was apprehensive about him at first, till she got to know him, he was a very sweet person, almost too perfect, His dad was a senator from kogi west, and as such it was easy for her parent to accept him. There was no way she would cheat on him, he knew she was a virgin , and she planned to give all to him on the wedding night, the only other person that knew was Richard , in her life they all knew their place, and where they stood, but her mum did not understand.




Richard drove into the compound of justice Ojerinde’s with his 4matic, it’s been a while he saw his best friend, ever since she got engaged he had to give her space. He has been in love with omolara for a while now, he didn’t even know when it happened, because he had always seen as a friend only, nothing more till the feelings crept in, he tried to shut it out, but he couldn’t and before he could come to terms with feelings and express it to her, she had gotten to a relationship with Hassan, but well ‘’time wait for no one they say’’ and he learnt a harsh lesson there. He accepted his fate, though he always had his suspicions about Hassan and his intentions, he never voiced out, so he doesn’t seem like a hater, he has seen Hassan with some jerks he knew in the university, and what do they say ‘’about birds of a feather’’, he decided to just keep watching out for omolara’s back and not try to intrude, this was her first relationship and she seemed very happy.

‘’hello stranger’’ omolara said shutting the door behind her

‘’hey beautiful’’ Richard replied taking in fragrance as they hugged.

‘’you just forgot about me abi, all this your plenty girls will not let you remember me now, better go and marry old man’’

‘’ you know you senior me abi, if people see you and I, they will think you are my sugar mummy’’

‘’SHUT UP YOUR MOUTH’’ omolara said trying to pinch his lips, Richard tried stopping her laughing, and they ended up in awkward position, his hands on her waist and her arms around his neck, staring at each other.

‘’richard, omodada goodevening oh’’ omolara’s mum voice jolted them out of the awkward position.

‘’mummy good evening ma’’ Richard greeted bowing down.

‘’how are, how is your mother, you guys should drive carefully, I heard Hassan will be there, greet my in law for me’’.

‘’no wahala mummy, I will’’ he got her sarcasm, smiled and gestured at omolara to get into the car and they drove off.
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 7:37pm On Apr 28, 2020
Continues........



Blu Cubana was filled up, the usual customers such as the spoilt rich kids of politicians, the celebrities, the businessmen, the runs girls and slays queen, then people like Richard and omolara who visited once in a blue moon. They sat at bar for about 30 min with a cup of with a cup of wine gisting, Richard was cajoling omolara to burst some moves on the dance floor when she saw Hassan stepping into the club with some friends.

‘’ this boy didn’t tell me was here already, Hassan! Hassan!’ she screamed waving.
Hassan saw her and beckoned on her to come over to where he was standing.
‘’excuse me, la boo boo duty calls’’ she said excusing herself from Richard , and walked toward Hassan. Richard sighed underneath as she left, he knew he should not be feeling the way he was feeling, it was totally wrong, he should be happy for her, but he wasn’t , he was apprehensive about this relationship of hers. He even got more worried seeing some of hassan’s friends, he knew some of them, typical Abuja big boys, he was acquainted with two amongst them way back from uniabuja, and those guys were the best of playboys. Well Hassan schooled abroad, so probably his fraternizing with them does not define his personality he thought to himself.
Hassan watched omolara walk towards him gleefully, she had such a beautiful smile. He could also see that Richard was deep in thoughts behind her and he wondered what he was thinking about that made looked so lost.

‘’hey baaabyy’’ Hassan said while a friend was whispering into his ears.

‘’hey handsome’’ omolara replied with a hug.

‘’hey guys meet my queen, it was difficult, but I FINALLY got my queen’’.

‘’awnnnnnnnnn, we go love oh’’ they chorused.

Omolora could not mutter a word, she could only blush, she felt really special.

‘’babe I just stopped over to see you, and also introduce you the guys, we were heading somewhere else for a boys hangout’’

‘’ooooh, why now, do you have to go with them?’’ omolara asked with a frown.

‘’haahaa, you this yarinya don’t guilt trip me, now you want to make feel bad abi, I can’t leave the boys like that, and you were the one complaining of not having time for your bestie earlier today’’

‘’true true, ok, you are acquitted, just be safe and careful, for me please’’ she replied giving him a tight hug.


‘’madam lawyer, call me when you get home alright’’ Hassan said giving her a kiss on her lips, and walked out with his friends.

‘’your babe fine oh, dan iska, you got her’’ a voice echoed out in the parking lot.

‘’what can I say? You know I am the king this game’’ another replied laughing.

‘’your royal highness, I hail oh, I never knew you could checkmate this particular queen’’.

‘’well I have not checkmated her yet, we are yet to have sex, she is a virgin’’.

‘’my brother what are you waiting for, give her the koko now’’.

‘’my guy , do you think I got here by rushing, well I promised you guys that I would sleep with her and bring prove, and that I will, for now she feels I am her knight in shining armour, she thinks we are getting married , I have a plan, in two weeks , I will bed omolara, and dump her as I promised’’

‘’but it’s been months bro, hope you are not catching feelings’’

‘’hahaha, king Hassan has no time for emotions’’ Hassan laughed out,

‘’ the silly girl is too egoistic, you needed to see her back then in school, forming Margaret Thatcher’’

‘’ my guys, she will be humbled, let us...........’’ Hassan didn’t get to complete his statement, the heard the sound of glass shattering..

‘’ anybody there?’’ they chorused , but didn’t see anyone apart from the bouncers moving around.

‘’there is no one there, guys lets bounce’’ and they sped off...
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 7:39pm On Apr 28, 2020
Continues...



Omolara was vibing to a song ‘’royal majesty’’ by Peruzzi, when she saw Richard walk in hurriedly and visibly shaken, looking like just saw a ghost.


‘’omolara you know I never had anything to say about your relationship right, but please listen to me now, Hassan is not a good person, he ia a bad person, and he has bad plans for you, listen, I just hard him...’’

‘’you just heard what?, you just heard what?.’’ Omolara irritatingly cut him short.

‘’you don’t call my fiancé a bad person, I don’t care or want to listen to what you have to say, i have never meddled between you and those girls you date, please don’t bring any bad energy to mine. My parents all adore Hassan, and I trust their judgement. I can see what mum was talking about now, know your place’’ She continued.
Richard could mutter a word, he could not believe the words he just heard from his friend.

‘’are we dancing?’’ she asked gulping another cup of wine, she knew she went overboard with her words, and that she was getting tipsy didn’t even help. she got up took another glass and started dancing, she just wanted to enjoy herself, she whined to every beat dancing by herself while Richard just looked on, her word weakened him, he just wanted to go home, but he couldn’t, omolara was looking drunk, and immediately he saw guy coming close where she whining seductively, he stood up and grabbed her.

‘’ok easy there lady, let me go drop you off at home’’ he said guiding her, but as he did that, she grabbed him by the neck and kissed him, and he didn’t hold back, they kissed for a few more seconds, then he pulled away.

‘’I really love you............. hassan’’ omolara said drunkenly and walked out. Richard speechless for a second, till he saw walking towards the pool, he rushed to her, and walked her to the car, checked her in to her seat. As he jammed the door, he saw her fall asleep.

‘’that idiot doesn’t deserve her’’ and a idea came into his head, he was going to be selfish and he was going to do it. He drove off.


Omolara woke up to with head ache, she yawned while opening her eyes fully.

‘’arhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!! ‘’ she screamed.

‘’ no no no no, Richard what is this??!!, what am I doing your house half naked, and is this blood?, nooooooooo!! ‘’ she screamed louder, waking him.

‘’I am sorry, we did it’’ he replied.

‘’ what??, did what Richard??’’ she closed her eyes, she recalled him trying to complain about Hassan, and a flash of her kissing him in the club came.

‘’I was drunk you bastard, you took advantage and raped me, what did I do to you, you just ruined my life’’

‘’I am sorry omolara, it’s for your own good, he doesn’t deserve you’’ Richard replied

‘’bastard who are you to decide, basrarddddd!!’’ she cried wore her gown, saw the red stain on the bed sheet, she knew what that indicated and cried more, running out .

‘’Lara lara wait. Wait’’ he tried stopping her, but she picked her heel and hit him on the head.

‘’bloody rapist, coward’’ she said to him as she ran out to the estate gate and got into a taxi.



Omolara dropped from the taxi bare footed and knocked at her father’s gate.

‘’madam , madam welcome, wetin happen? mummy don dey look for you, they say you no pick call’’ Akpan the gateman questioned her as he opened the gate, but she paid no him no attention and just kept walking.

‘’omolara, Jesus I thank you, kilo sele, why didn’t you pick your calls?, why are you just coming back?, you didn’t tell me you were sleeping out, I was so worried, I had to even call your dad’’ her mum was still complaining when omolara burst out crying.

‘’aahhh mummy he raped me, he raped’’.

‘’what? What are you saying? Who raped you? you went out with Richard now’’ her mother was bewildered.

‘’Richard Richard, he raped, he has ruin my life, mummy’’ she cried out.

‘’ what? That idiot, that idiot, he and all his family will be jailed, he touched my daughter, in fact he will face the firing squad, that stupid nonentity dare touched the daughter of justice Adeleke, let me call your father’’.

Omolara went into the bathroom, she removed her clothes, open the shower, then she gazed into the mirror, she was ashamed, she couldn’t look at her own body, she fell down to the floor and cried her eyes out, the water ran from her head down to other parts, she just shut her eyes sitting on the floor.
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 7:40pm On Apr 28, 2020
Continues.....



‘’babe tell what your mum just old isn’t true, tell me’’ Hassan questioned her as he entered into her bedroom. She couldn’t reply, she had a headache, she just wanted to sleep and wake up from the nightmare.

‘’well, your mum said the police are coming, but I am not waiting, I am going to his place with my friends, I would deal with the bastard’’ Hassan said and stormed off angrily. Omolara knew that he was supposed to take the law into his hands , but she was too weak and exhausted physically and mentally to stop anyone, and at this point, she did not really care.


Richard sat at the balcony, it dawned on him that he might acted impulsively and foolishly, he needed to talk to omolara before this gets out hands. He picked up his phone to call her when his gate was flunged open.

‘’see the fool, see the fool’’ Hassan said walking in with about 5 other guys. Richard knew he stands no chance and wanted to run inside, but one of hefty guys quickly grabbed him by the waist as he struggled to open the door.

‘’oga where you dey go’’ he was asked with a very heavy slap.

‘’you sabi rape woman abi, you wan chop meat wey no be your own’’ another one of the guys said, and in unison they gave him kicks, blows and slaps. Richard could feel the life being snuffed out of him, his body was becoming numb, yet the guys were relentless in beating him up.

‘’stop, we are the police!’’ was all he heard before he passed out.


Richard open his eyes to his mum reading her bible beside him on the hospital bed, a police officer was sitting at the other side.


‘’maa’’ was all he could say, he saw the worry and disappointment on her face.

‘’thank God you are awake, hope you feel better’’ his mum asked.

‘’yes ma’’.

‘’they said when you get better, they are taking you to the police cell, tell me you did not do it, because I don’t believe them, I didn’t raise up an animal’’.

‘’maa, please get me a lawyer, things are not as they seem, but I need a lawyer’’.

‘’I have contacted one already, and they said you would be charged to court. I doubt my upbringing, and I know my son, whatever this is all about, you need tell me the truth, this are powerful members of the society, I am only a civil servant, ever since your dad left, I have tried giving you the best, I have been proud of the man you are turning to be, please I don’t want to be disappointed now ‘’ his mum asked calmly.

‘’maa, I will not, everything will be sorted out’’ Richard replied grunting a little, obviously he was still pain. He hated seeing his mum so sad, she was a strong woman, his support system, now his foolish decision was taking a toll on her.


Since the incident, Hassan spent more time with omalara, he tried to show her as much love as he could, he was her in the room when a message entered his phone.

‘’babe good news, the fool is awake, and would be taking to jail tomorrow, he is lucky, I wanted to break every bone in his body, he is lucky the police came to his rescue’’

‘’mmmmhh’’ omolara muttered out with a half smile.
She was grateful for Hassan, he has been a strong support for her, and he has been there for her, she did not feel worthy of him and the love he is showing. She was keeping herself for him, she wanted to give it all to him on the wedding night, now this happened, oh wow she loathed Richard more! Well he is going to suffer, her father, the NGO, Hassan were all on the case, he is not getting out of this, all she has is hatred a for guy she once loved genuinely, her best friend for about 7 years.

‘’richard why?’’ she asked herself rhetorically.

Again she was grateful she had a guy like Hassan, he had not shown her any less love, in fact he has shown her move love since the incident, there she made up her mind to move on and push the incident behind , be best she can be for him, she was no longer going to wallow is self pity. After he left, she got up, took a shower and dressed nice for the first time since the incident, she planned on giving Hassan a pleasant surprise.


‘’oga lawyer na 20 min una get, anything una wan talk, make una talk inside that time’’ the police man bringing Richard out of the cell said, then he stepped back.

‘’richard, let me not lie, this kiss a difficult case, this is an attorney general’s damn it, what the heck where you thinking?’’ lawyer shola asked Richard

‘’shola, I have suffered, those guys in the cell are animals, they take my food, I wash their clothes, I am a human standing fan, I was almost sodomised, I need to get out of that place’’ Richard replied.

‘’if you want to get out, give me something to work with, else bro, you are not getting out, even back then in school, you were not one to hurt a fly, I don’t get what happened rich, you? Rape omolara? your mum called me crying, no lawyer want to take up your case, I am risking my just budding career for you, you need to tell me what happened’’

‘’shola, I need to talk to omolara, if I can talk to her, all this will be settled’’

‘’richard, the truth is omolara is not going to see you, I tried seeing her, as your lawyer, I was chased away literarily, I was fortunate to see her lawyer outside as I was coming to see you, she told, you will be taking to court by next week Monday, the judge is omolara’s fathers protégé, and he will use bring the full wrath on you out of sentiments first of all, the lawyer is from the NGO omolara works with , and you know they deal with rape cases specifically, so Richard, from every angle, this lost case, we can only plead for a better sentence, even that will be difficult’’

‘’can you get her lawyer to come talk to me, please shola’’ Richard requested.

‘’I am your lawyer, you should be talking me, all the same, I will try my best in getting her to talk to you’’. Shola said and got up to leave while the officer dragged Richard back to jail.
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 7:42pm On Apr 28, 2020
We continue tomorrow... If you read. Drop one or two comments, tanchu grin
Re: Plothole by Aybasky: 9:22pm On Apr 28, 2020
Nice story. More please.
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 10:48am On Apr 29, 2020
If you read... Make Una like small to encourage ejor
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 10:48am On Apr 29, 2020
Aybasky:
Nice story. More please.
thanks,my guy, update coming soon
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 10:53am On Apr 29, 2020
Hassan was seated in his sitting room with his friends playing a fifa game and chatting loudly, they were obviously having fun.

‘’omoh, I am still getting my share of the cake, the idiot has done the hard part, I just want her to get better, then I chop and clean mouth’’


‘’king Hassan, I hail oh, you truly have no heart, you don’t even care that she was just raped’’ said a voice mockingly.

‘’hhaha bro, I have a heart , I didn’t rape, I was only playing her to get the cookie, at least, it is better rape...’’ Hassan was saying when he heard the balcony shut loudly. He and his friends ran to check what brought the sound, he saw omolara running towards the gate, he was confounded, he was lost for words, she had heard everything, hence she ran out.

‘’omolara wait, wait’’ he called out, but ran out faster.


Lara heard him call out her name, but she was not stopping for anything the world, here she was running outside a man’s house again, it was de ja vu, hassan’s words pierced her heart, she felt a pain, she couldn’t even cry, the two men in her life have just scarred her, she did not deserve this, she has always been a good girl, an upright lady, what did she do to deserve this.

‘’men are scum, men are scum’’ she kept repeating to herself in low tunes, trying to hold back tears, and to the amusement of the taxi driver who was wondering if he had just picked up a mad woman.



Omolara got a call from her lawyer as she laid down soaking her pillow with tears, she shut every out for almost 3 days, she was tempted to take her life, but was too scared to do it, her mum thought it was only the rape issue, she didn’t tell her about Hassan, the scum bag came the previous day, she shut her room door to him, she didn’t want to listen to anything he had say, she was done, done with men, her life was great without them.

‘’hello ann, goodevening...’’ she picked the call.

‘’lara hii, so you know our standard procedure is to do a test and get a medical report, I know you are in a trauma, but you have to do those test, if not for the case, at least to certify you are fine, so just as you normally convince those girls, I am begging you to go for those test’’

‘’I will try ann’’ omolara replied and cut the call.
She remembered how she comforted and encourage young ladies to go for medical test even though they were ashamed and scared of stigmatization, she thought she would be that position today. She tried getting some sleep, she was not going for test for now, the whole world will not know she was raped.




‘’under the sexual offense act, and looking at all evidence provided by the defence and prosecuting council, the court finds you Mr Richard Omale guilty of rape and violent conduct, and hereby sentence you to 25 years in prison with hard labour’’

The words of the judge sent a shivers into Richards body, he looked towards his mum, she was crying and was being consoled by a colleague, his heart was broken , she cried more as he was being put into handcuffs and whisked away by men of the Nigerian Correction Service.




‘’so we have gotten justice today, congratulations’’

‘’how many years?’’ omolara asked ann.

‘’25 years’’.

‘’uhmm I see’’ omolara said casually.
she knew her father had a hand in the longer jail term, it was supposed to be 5-10 years max, but she right now, she could care less about the rapist, he deserved all he was getting.

‘’lara you are not doing the right thing, by not going for a medical test, if not for the overwhelming influence of your father and the NGO, you know they could her wiggled out of this by saying you didn’t do a medical test to confirm the case’’ ann scolded .

‘’I know that ann’’.

‘’I met with Richard before the trial, and he asked me to tell you to go for a test, that got me worried, what if he had an s.t.d Godforbid’’.

‘’what? he said what?’’ omolara asked alarmingly.

‘’yes, let’s go for a test now, this is your health we are talking about’’ ann encouraged omolara who got immediately from her bed.
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 10:54am On Apr 29, 2020
Updated... This last update tomorrow
Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 11:02am On May 13, 2020
The nurse who brought the test results, handed it over to the doctor and left, whlle the doctored scanned through it.
‘’hmmm, ma we have your result, your pregnancy test was negative, full blood test for stds came negative, but we discovered something’’

‘’doctor what’s that’’ omolara asked looking very worried.

‘’you said you were raped, hmm, I really don’t get, we found out your hymen is almost intact after the full comprehensive body check ’’

‘’doctor what are you saying? almost how’’ ann questioned, while omolara was looking lost.

‘’well if there was rape, it’s medically impossible for your hymen to be in place, do you remember what happened?’’

‘’doctor I only woke up to a pool of blood, I was drunk’’

‘’I think someone decided to play a costly prank on you, I don’t think there was intercourse, you medically a virgin ma’’ the doctor said to the shock of omolara and ann.
They were lost, they could not understand what was going on, a ,man has just been out behind bars for 25 years , and the doctor was saying no rape, where did they lose the plot they thought to themselves .

‘’take me to the prison please, now, let’s go’’ omolara pleaded, she could not wait for any more second, she had to talk Richard.


They finally got to the kuje prison after an hour of been stuck in the lugbe-airport road traffic, they reached the administrative block and requested to see Richard.

‘’ahh that one, I no sure say him dey alive oh, dem give us order to take am to the cell with the most dangerous criminals, dem say him rape big man daughter, any way, dem give am welcome beating, him collapse, dem just rush am go clinic’’

Omolara felt that abstract pain in her heart again, for the first time in months, she was sincerely worried.

‘’officer where is the clinic located?’’ ann inquired.



Richard opened his eyes, he was in a hospital setting again, he tried recalling what happened, then it all came back, how the prison officer told the inmates he was a rapist and left, then inmates decided to give him to the a very huge man as wife, he had spent sometime gisting with inmate from the other cell, so he understood what been a ‘’wife’’ meant, he protested, and refused them as they dragged him towards the huge man, who was looking at him like lunch about to be devoured. Richard to rather die, than be a meal to anyone, he gave a punch to one of the guys dragging him, and consequently they pounced on him, he remembered being stabbed with a pen, then another hard kick to the rib, then his eyes shut. Just as he was having a flashblack, a pleasant suprise entered, they stared at each other for a while, then she spoke.

‘’ann, can i talk to him alone please’’ omalara requested, and ann obliged.

‘’hii’’

‘’hii’’ Richard responded.

‘’how are you?’’

‘’well, I am alive’’.

‘’good’’

‘’yeah good’’ Richard responded groaning a bit.

‘’so, that night... uhmm’’

‘’I guess you finally went for a test and found out the truth’’

‘’not so sure, rich what happened that night?’’ omolara probed.

‘’I am sorry, it was foolish, a stupid and childish thing I did, I didn’t touch you, I only poured some paint on you and made it up’’

‘’are you mad? what silly prank were you playing, you stalled my life, I almost took my life, what were you trying to achieve?’’ she questioned angrily.

‘’remember I was trying to tell you something about Hassan, but you were not listening, I heard him saying he wanted to take your virginity and then leave you, it was a game to him, you were not listening, so I felt it he saw that you were no longer a virgin, he would leave, then I tell you the truth’’ richard saying that could see how foolish his plan was.

‘’whattt? How dumb , the level dumbness is baffling, like what did you think will happen?, look at how you are, ruffled, disfigured, all because you didn’t think things through, Richard I have always known you to smart, even someone an i.q of a monkey will not do this, I feel like beating you up the more’’

‘’well being in love with a person, makes you do stupid sometimes’’ Richard indirectly passed a message, and omolara caught it.

‘’hmm, I should have listened a little when you telling me about Hassan, you were right, he.....’’ she was still talking the an officer came in with an.

‘’madam time up, make una come dey go’’ the prison told them.

‘’richard we will come back for you, I have told the officers nothing must happen to you, you will be safe here till tomorrow’’ she and lara got up to leave.
Getting to the door, lara turned back to look at him, that feeling she had the first time they met, she felt it again, this time she did not shut it out, she only let out a smile.

‘’you know he wasn’t the only one at fault here, you played a big part, you refused to practice what you preach’’ ann said as the took their leave.

‘’how?’’.

‘’you always encourage those young girls to go medical check-up, face their fears in the NGO, but you refused to the same, it was a very big hole in the plot, if you had done sooner, things would not have escalated’’.

‘’hmmm’’ was all omolara could mutter as they got into the car.

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Re: Plothole by Dannyxy(m): 11:02am On May 13, 2020
Finish... Thank you for your attention wink

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Re: Plothole by Clement1111(m): 10:19pm On Mar 23, 2021
Dannyxy:
Finish... Thank you for your attention wink
Oga please continue

or if you can send the remaining one on my email,I will be grateful

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