Wow,I can't but smile while I was reading this episode ,you're good
But fola's actions can chioma forgive her may God help us so that we are not boxed in a very tight situations !;;;

Shocking!!!
Absolute shocking episode
My heart in my hand!!
Weldon ma'am

Na real wa oooo

Thanks for the update ma’am

Hello Rose,

Can you contact me on WhatsApp 08090642385 let’s work?

I suspected George from the start so I'm not surprised, it's fola's involvement that's shocking me

I just hope fola doesn't tell George where Chioma is

James.

Ghen ghen............ Nice story Rosemary, we want more

George is a full blown maniac, while Fola is an upcoming serial killer.
So the only innocent persons here are James and Chioma.

I love this story, that george is a devil, even lucifer will be scared of him

This George is making me spat in disgust.

George killed his mom!? Arrrrggggghhh! This story is getting more complicated.

Wtf

George is one sick mf psycho...
Cos wtf with all his past, his mom?, the dad too?

I pray James will save her

George na devil's incarnate.
Thanks for the update madam Rosemary

Chineke meeeeeeee,wat a story!!! Nne welldone

Wow nice

Splendid!!! Thank God! Finally!. Thanks Rosemary33

Thank God, at last….. The criminals have been arrested.

Thanks for the update ma’am

This story sweet me. Wait is this the end of the literature?

George, Fola and even James are all psychos.

osuolale95:
This story sweet me. Wait is this the end of the literature?

Sure say we no go end am here?

If I run, una go catch me?

Rosemary33:
Sure say we no go end am here?

If I run, una go catch me?

remember i be dss inside this story, we will definitely catch you

Rosee you're a talented and gifted writer more grease to your elbow ,
But truth be told you twisted every part and every one of your audience with suspence and thriller from beginning to the end
Kudos I Duff my hat for you
But the title of the story line wouldn't have been temptation it would have been something different
But all the same whom am I to question your skills and gifted hand and your gifts
Once more thanks for this master piece !!!

royalguy123:
Rosee you're a talented and gifted writer more grease to your elbow ,
But truth be told you twisted every part and every one of your audience with suspence and thriller from beginning to the end
Kudos I Duff my hat for you
But the title of the story line wouldn't have been temptation it would have been something different
But all the same whom am I to question your skills and gifted hand and your gifts
Once more thanks for this master piece !!!

The title is already changed o ,

I changed the title as I saw the angle the story is going. So When I'm done rewriting, editing, and getting it ready for publishing, it will come out with a new title definitely.

Thank you so much for your observation.

While we are here, please let us know that this is a raw draft. As usual, every chapter of this story was written the day it was posted.

And you know how first drafts are– always raw and full of holes. So if and when I will decide to professionally publish this work, it will come out rewritten, polished, and oiled.

Please, if you are posting this story on another platform or website (I don't want this to happen, but I know humans will be humans) Please give me the credit as this is my brainchild. It takes a lot to write an original story. And bearing in mind that I will publish this work someday, don't take my glory.

For movie directors and producers, please don't see this work as your movie script and take the glory. I have seen one of my works "His neighbor's wife," on ROK TV (In fact it was my sister who even called my attention to it.) and That story is about to be officially published this December as "Akwaugo"

I knew I haven't shared the emitted script with anyone but the raw is on Nairaland. Please don't deprive an author of the opportunity to make money with his or her work.

If you love a story, contact the author and strike a deal.

Let me not forget to thank you my co-writers you all are my co-writers because as you read and make comments, you indirectly give me ideas. As such, you are navigating this story. So, thank you. And you. And you...

This tori no be only temptation.Let's just call it the devil's mate.Or do you think it's too deep.

Nuhskhut:
This tori no be only temptation.Let's just call it the devil's mate.Or do you think it's too deep.

"The Devils mate," hmm. Nice.

I will write it down and make a comparison. I already have "Hidden." I don't mind more suggestions too.

Rosemary33:
"The Devils mate," hmm. Nice.

I will write it down and make a comparison. I already have "Hidden." I don't mind more suggestions too.

TWISTED

Nuhskhut:
This tori no be only temptation.Let's just call it the devil's mate.Or do you think it's too deep.

"The devil's mate" makes the storyline too obvious