The pandemonium wil never ceas ravage
If we dont find panacea from islam savage
It has come to take us out of the siege
Islam salvation is not a new age
It is as old as the world age
Allah has creed it to save us from the life bondage
The practise of it pristine is by knowldge
Islam is not a religion from any one lineage
It is a must practise for the globa village
Dont claim islam and stray from it frontage
By terrorising and propergate islam with bad image
Being a fundamentalist is a great advantage
Fundamentalism is islamic pledge
Terrorising and vandalising is not islam heritage
With truth and faiti i will hold the islam flag.

Nice try. But You were too straight to the point! Use of Imagery might help.

thanks, i wrote it in hot.

Ok i understand.

@meku av read one of ur poem posted i think early this year, where sm1 commented that u av to put more life into ur it. Ar u d 1 that wrote it realy. It inspired me!

Waoh! Yeah i wrote it. The dude said the poem was n't lively enough. I'm glad to know you liked it though.

these are some of my poem just feel it.

The world are waiting
To see it going
It presence is blessing
With joy & good health we fast it
It build our faith & believe
We felt it contineu
till the world ending
But it come
sure it's going
It left in us a good virtues
As we fast we've been forgiven
Let not forget it teaching
May God accept it as an act of worship
Good by RAMADAN!

The world are waiting
To see it going
It presence is blessing
With joy & good health we fast it
It build our faith & believe
We felt it continue
till the world ending
But it come
sure it's going
It left in us a good virtues
As we fast we've been forgiven
Let not forget it teaching
May God accept it as an act of worship
Good by RAMADAN!

I need not to speak through my nose
Till you know am full of sence
I need not visa lotery
To get to the land of promise
Talent wasted in Nigeria
Little of it was utilised in america
I cherish my Nira
I need not their dolars
I dont need people's vote
To be an idol is america nosense
Why do you dress naked
Then you know they are wicked
Let us reaso to an extent
And detest American's nonsense.

I need not to speak through my nose
Till you know am full of sence
I need not visa lotery
To get to the land of promise
Talent wasted in Nigeria
Little of it was utilised in america
I cherish my Nira
I need not their dolars
I dont need people's vote
To be an idol is america nosense
Why do you dress naked
Then you know they are wicked
Let us reaso to an extent
And detest American's nonsense.

This is my kingdom
It is just God wisdom
Though i'm like an atom
My heart is wide like the stadium
But i have the freedom
I do this not by seldom
Please coment u'll be welcom

why this topsy tovy
She neva pray for any dificulty
I own her more than a glossery
Let her witnes her glory
Safe her from this ill health
She is the only living heart
That stil keep me on earth
Though i cant see her
But my blood run in her
I'm longing for her eye
Yet i can feel her radiance eye
Oh God from ur infinity mercy
Revive her to be very healthy
I believe you are the only Almighty
That we will always give our glory.

Pleas do
My friend do
Forgive me pleas i'm rue
Now i realise am rude
Dont leave me to be doomed
All you've said is true
I cant just construe
Dont conclud w're through
If u leave
Who will keep me living
I know i've acted stupid
But for long you've be my buddy
Friend i promise
I will never be selfish
Any time i act clownish
Show the world i'm rubbish.