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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Mikeymython(m): 2:04pm On May 14, 2023
Am beginning to like the story 😤😤😤

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 7:04pm On May 15, 2023
[quote author=Mikeymython post=123129970]Am beginning to like the story
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 11:46am On May 17, 2023
I moved to her in concern.

'Sorry, but did I say anything that hurt you?' I asked in concern.

She stopped crying but still continued to snivel.

'If there's anything I've said or done that makes you feel bad, I'm sorry,' I offered.

After some seconds, she stopped the snivelling and raised the edge of the t-shirt she was wearing up to clean her face. If she had raised the cloth further even for half of an inch, I would have seen her breast. Was that act deliberate or coincidental?

'Are you alright?' I asked, not sure of what else to say.

'I'm alright,' she replied wanly and made to go.

But, I could sense that she was not really alright. As she made to pass me on her way out, I held her by the hand.

'I thought you actually came here to open up your mind to me,' I stated. 'You will not be helping yourself if you just walk away without telling me what made you cry.'

She paused and looked uncertainly at me. 'I cried because that was the same thing my boyfriend, well, ex-boyfriend, told me.'

I sighed. How emotional!
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by CasNova: 3:31pm On May 18, 2023
Nice update.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Desire4life: 5:36pm On May 19, 2023
Keep it up.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 7:12am On May 20, 2023
Her voice became sad again. 

“It's alright, no need to get sad over it. Many other guys will still tell you, because that's what you are - beautiful and attractive. Someone saying that should gladden your heart, not depress it." 

She nodded. "Thanks." 

I held her left hand and gently rubbed the back of her palm. "I have a brotherly view about all this. All I've done so far is to take you like a sister - a senior sister. Is it okay for me to take you as a sister?" 

There was only a brief pause. "It's okay." I smiled at her. "Thanks for granting me that. Believe me, I will be a good brother and friend to you." 

I stopped to study her. She was attentive and sober. 

“As I said, don't let anything or anyone disturb your life or happiness. Whatever happens, we move on." 

She nodded. "Thanks so much, Seyi. I really appreciate." 

I nodded too. "That's the spirit. Now, give me a smile." 

I gently tickled her side. She giggled. I did it a little bit more and she laughed. 

That's the spirit," I repeated. "Thanks a lot. "Your words have really helped." 

She stood up and I followed suit. "Can you give me a hug?" She asked. 

“Why not? With all pleasure." 

I gave her the hug. She clung onto me tightly. It was  the longest hug I had ever had. I could the feel curviness of her body against mine. It was an enthralling scene and moment.

 By providence -yes, by providence - I had learnt not to be swayed by senses. I could conrol how my body reacted to what I saw or felt. 

I was man enough not to capitulate to the desires of the flesh. After what seemed like ages, she finally disengaged from me. 

"Seyi, thank you so much. I'll never forget this." 

I smiled and patted her. "To God be the glory." 

She moved to the door.

 "Goodnight, Seyi." I nodded. "Good night, sister."

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Saturn101: 2:01pm On May 22, 2023
Nice update.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by CasNova: 3:02pm On May 23, 2023
Nice work.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by ThrillPlus: 11:42am On May 24, 2023
Nice work.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Desire4life: 3:29pm On May 25, 2023
Interesting story.

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 8:08pm On May 26, 2023
She moved to the door.

 "Goodnight, Seyi." I nodded. "Good night, sister."  


*  *   

 I woke up on Thurday morning early as usual. I took my bath and dressed up in one of the clothes bought for me. By eight, Rose came around with a tray containing tea, coffee, fruit juice and digestive. 

"Good morning. Here's light meal for you." 

"Good morning, sister. How was your night?" She smiled. "Fine. Thanks for yesterday." 

"We thank God." 

I took the digestive and the pineapple juice. Many minutes later, she came to take the tray away. Our work-  shop started in earnest. 

The woman that came the previous day was around to present the first paper. This time around, she talked about Work Ethics. 

Thereafter, the routine continued. I noticed that Sharon barely looked at my side. During break when I asked if all was well with her, she answered curtly that there was no problem. 

She also appeared moody during the afternoon session. In the early part of the evening, she did not come around to my room, so I decided to pay her a visit in hers.

 When she saw that I was the one at the door, she neither shoo me off nor invited me inside. I entered nonetheless. 

"Will it not be better if you tell me what's bothering you?" I said gently. 

"Nothing is bothering me," she mumbled. 

"Really? But this is not the same Sharon I knew yesterday." 

She sat on the bed without saying a word. I could see that the room was the size of the one given to me, but the arrangement was different. 

I sighed. "Can we play scrabble?" I asked. 

She shook her head. I chuckled. She obviously  didn't want my company.

 "Okay, I can see that you are not in the mood. See you another time."

 I moved towards the door to take my leave. 

"How was she?" Sharon asked. 

I stopped to turn to her. "How was who?" She snickered.

 "You know who I'm talking about."

 I shook my head vehemently. "No, I don't know who you're talking about."

 She glared at me. "Did you have her all night long? Was Aunty Rose sweet?" 

Now I knew what she was talking about. I opened my mouth in awe.

 "Oh, you're surprised that I knew? Don't be. I came to your room to find the two of you in a love tango, hugging, kissing and romancing each other."

 Wow, so Sharon actually saw something. But then, she missed the point. I shook my head. 

"You're right we hugged, but there was never anything like kissing and romancing her." 

"Tell that to the marines," she scoffed. 

I was exasperated. How could I convince her that Rose was like a sister? How could I ...? 

"Why don't you go and meet her? Why are you here? You call yourself a Christian, but you grabbed  the sexy body of the first woman that threw herself at you."

 I was surprised at the extent of her bitterness. "If you had watched a bit more, you would have seen that the whole thing did not go beyond the hug."

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Saturn101: 4:15pm On May 29, 2023
Nice 👍 update
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Pinkdimples: 5:53pm On May 30, 2023
Nice one.. Following
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 5:17pm On May 31, 2023
Pinkdimples:
Nice one.. Following
You are welcome.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by diogo23: 8:41pm On May 31, 2023
goodness4ever:
You are welcome.
Why are you delaying the story
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by BigBasher: 5:16am On Jun 02, 2023
Go on.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 5:44pm On Jun 03, 2023
I was surprised at the extent of her bitternes. "If you had watched a bit more, you would have seen that the whole thing did not go beyond the hug."

 She looked away. I could see that she did not believe me. 

I had to go. "Okay, Sharon. Goodnight."

 She didn't say a word as I left. I went back to my room. What a day it had been. I tried to put Sharon's tantrums off my mind. How wrong she was. I soon slept off.

 Friday was the third and final day of the workshop. Once again, Rose was nice to me, while Sharon continued to sulk. After the second presentation, we were given certification. 

Rose gave us a valise each to pack our clothes. By four p.m., I was set to leave the place. Despite her reservations, I exchanged telephone numbers with Sharon. 

It had been a worthwhile experience after all. I got back to my residence some minutes past seven p.m. It looked like I had left he house several weeks ago. 

That weekend, I could not visit Precious's mum as I had planned. 

On Monday morning, I started work at FGC headquarters at Ikeja. There, I submitted my letter of acceptance of job offer. I was posted to the Media department while Sharon was posted to the PR department. 

From my first day at work, I could tell that it was going to be a fulfilling work. The official working hours were eight a.m to five p.m. I was punctual to work as usual. 

On Wednesday afternoon, Sharon came to see me in the office I shared with a colleague. It was break hour and the colleague was not in the office. 

"I want to apologize for the way I behaved and talked to you the other time," Sharon said. "I overreacted. Sorry about it." 

I smiled to play it down. "It's okay, we all make mistakes." 

We talked briefly about the challenges of our new work before she left. Later that evening, Rose also called. She wanted to know how I was faring on my new job. 

She still thanked me for the other time and professed that I was a special man. I told her to God be the glory. 

On Saturday, I decided to  rest indoor. 

On instinct, around eleven in the morning, I decided to call Sharon. Her number rang many times before it was finally picked.

 "Hello, Sharon. This is Seyi on the line." 

There was a pause. "Sharon is not around. She just stepped out to buy something but did not take her phone along." 

The voice sounded like a mature woman's own.

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by saucygal193: 11:10am On Jun 05, 2023
Nice 👍
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 8:07am On Jun 06, 2023
The voice sounded like a mature woman's own.

 "Oh, I'm sorry to disturb, madam. I'll call later." 

About thirty minutes later, I called again. 

This time, Sharon picked it. "Big Aunty told me you called minutes ago," she started. "How are you?" 

"Fine. I called to find out how you are too."

 "I'm fine. Thanks for calling." 

We chatted a bit more before cutting the line. My mind went to Precious. Shouldn't I try to see her mother as soon as possible? I could go to their church the following day to worship. 

After the Sunday service, I would see her. That Saturday afternoon, I was watching a live football match when my phone rang. I picked it up almost immediately. 

"Good afternoon," I greeted.

 "Send the account number to me  and send it right away so I can do transfer." 

Before I could say anything, the line was disconnected. I was bemused by the caller. I wasn't expecting any payment from any body, so I ignored the message. 

After about seven minutes, another call came through. 

"What are you waiting for?Why the delay? Send the account number and bank right now." 

It was the same woman.

 "Excuse me ..."

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by CasNova: 4:56pm On Jun 07, 2023
Nice work.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by YoungBruzzy(m): 12:35pm On Jun 08, 2023
I don land for here
Nice story you got going here OP
Keep it coming man

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by FrankAkowe: 6:07am On Jun 09, 2023
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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 10:56pm On Jun 09, 2023
After about seven minutes, another call came through. 

"What are you waiting for?Why the delay? Send the account number and bank right now." 

It was the same woman.

 "Excuse me ..." 

The line was dead before I could finish my sentence. What an impatient woman. I decided to call the number. 

She picked on the second ring.

 "Hello, madam. I think you got the wrong number," I quickly said. 

"But this is the number you gave to me at the supermarket this morning. My ATM had issues, I was short of cash and you bailed me out. Now, I want to pay you back as I promised." 

I shook my head as if she was physically there to see me. 

"There's a mix up, madam. I was not the person. I've not been to any supermarket today."

 "Hmn, some Nigerian men will not stop amazing me," she countered. "Is it that you're so proud you don't want  to receive repayment from a woman or what?" 

I chuckled. "I will gladly receive payment from you if I was the man. But then, I was not the person. Thanks for your time madam." 

There was no further response, so I cut the line. If I thought that was the end of the conversation, I was wrong. 

A couple of minutes later, she called again. 

"Hello, madam," I started.

 "Do you know who's calling?" she asked. 

Again, I was bemused. "Yes, you are the woman who thought I was the man that she met in the supermarket this morning."  

She laughed shortly. 

Was that funny?

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Abdulreheem(m): 6:13am On Jun 10, 2023
intresting but too short

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by YoungBruzzy(m): 9:39am On Jun 10, 2023
Interesting but short
Nice one OP

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 12:48pm On Jun 12, 2023
She laughed shortly. 

Was that funny? 

"That first time I called you, did you recognize my voice? Did you know who was talking?" 

Now, I was quite confused. Did I know her before? 

"I didn' know you and I still don't know you, madam," I said, wondering what she was aiming at. 

"Are you naturally nice or are you just trying to be nice to me?" 

I chuckled. "If you say I'm nice, I'll take that as a compliment. Thanks for the compliment."

 "No wonder, Sharon said so much about you." 

My heartbeat fluttered.   "You know Sharon?" 

She laughed shortly again. "Come on. When you first called her line this morning, I was the one who picked it."

 I was aghast. "You were the aunty?" 

"Yes, I was the one she called Big Aunty. I asked who you are and I was intrigued by what she said."

 "Did you mix my number with the man you met at the supermarket?" 

"No," she answered cooly. "Just as you said,  I too was was not in any supermarket this morning."

 I was perplexed. Why did she go through all that drama?

 "You appear to be an interesting person, and I will like to know you more. You know what? Send me your account details. I will like to send you something for the weekend." 

My heart started beating fast. How could a woman I barely knew be saying this?

 "Seyi, are you doubting my intentions?" she asked.

 She even remembered my name. 

"May be before you take a move, call Sharon and ask of me. You can also confirm this my number from her." 

I wanted to tell her that there would be no need for all that, but she had disconnected the line. I sighed. This woman must be an interesting character. 

Why did she have to make up the story that she met me at supermarket? Now, she was saying she wanted to send something to me for the weekend.

 Just like that! I am not the kind of person who jumps at such an offer, so let me not rush into it. About ten minutes later, my phone rang.

 It was Sharon on the line. 

"Hello, Sharon." 

"Hi, Seyi. Big Aunty just called me now. She said you can ask any question about her and I should give honest answer."

 I was intrigued. "I see. First and foremost, who is she to you?" 

"She's a younger sister to my mum, so she's a maternal aunt."

 I nodded. "I can sense that she wants friendship," I said. "I can easily offer that, but not to a married woman." 

There was a pause. "Big Aunty lost her husband in a U.S hospital about two wears ago." 

 "Hmn, sorry to hear that." 

"Yeah. She has two grown up kids schooling in the U.S. Right now, she's the one managing the estate business which her husband left behind."

 I sighed again. "Thanks  for calling, Sharon. I really appreciate." 

"You are welcome. See you." 

She cut the line.

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by YoungBruzzy(m): 12:55pm On Jun 13, 2023
Double wahala oh
Thanks for the update OP

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 5:37pm On Jun 14, 2023
YoungBruzzy:
Double wahala oh Thanks for the update OP
You are welcome.

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Davidpeterz: 7:43pm On Jun 14, 2023
A good read
I love your work.

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Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by goodness4ever(m): 11:18am On Jun 16, 2023
Davidpeterz:
A good read
I love your work.
Thank you.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by ThrillPlus: 5:26pm On Jun 18, 2023
Go on.
Re: Enchanted (A Thriling Love Story) by Awesome05: 1:26pm On Jun 21, 2023
Go on.

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