Collins is portrayed as a handsome young man who had an advanced brain for his age and exposure. He became fascinated with science and technological related stuff at a tender age, but was limited because of the condition of his environment and other factors. But despite this, he was determined to make something out of what he knew, so he kept pursuing knowledge.
As the universe would have it, he was given an admission based on scholarship to study his desired course in one of the most prestigious university in the country.
He met and fell in love with a girl in the university, who made him discover himself and what his true purpose was.

On the other hand, Temi is depicted as a beautiful and confident girl who exudes grace and poise. She perfectly defines beauty with brains theory, a touch of Arrogance to complete the description.
But behind this facade is a lady who had struggled with fear and competition. She lived with trying to please her grandpa, the Chairman of the company, that she is rightfully the heir to the family company and not her half brother, discrimination being a major factor.
Along the line, she met a guy who understood her and was ready to support her journey, but during the course of this, they were able to uncover some deep secret about the company and her grandfather

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Hi there, it's your favorite editor
So, I have a bit of time this morning so as a public service, here's a few edits:

lumycr8:
Collins is portrayed ... (Your use of the word "portrayed here makes me feel like you're reviewing this work, not writing it. You are the narrator, so narrate. I would recommend: Collins is handsome. He...and so on. Be descriptive. Show, don't tell. as a handsome young man who had an advanced brain for his age and exposure. He became fascinated with science and technological related stuff at a tender age, but was limited because of the condition of his environment and other factors. But despite this, he was determined to make something out of what he knew, so he kept pursuing knowledge.
As the universe would have it, he was given an admission based on scholarship to study his desired course in one of the most prestigious university in the country.
He met and fell in love with a girl in the university, who made him discover himself and what his true purpose was.

On the other hand, Temi is depicted (same as above)
as a beautiful and confident girl who exudes grace and poise. She perfectly defines beauty with brains theory, a touch of Arrogance to complete the description.
But behind this facade is a lady who had struggled with fear and competition. She lived with trying to please her grandpa, the Chairman of the company, that she is rightfully the heir to the family company and not her half brother, discrimination being a major factor.
Along the line, she met a guy who understood her and was ready to support her journey, but during the course of this, they were able to uncover some deep secret about the company and her grandfather

So, It's a pretty good synopsis, but the last paragraph is missing the element of suspense. Fix that.