Imagine you were told to come up with a romance scene in a play. What would the scene be like? This scene is like in a theater not in a movie, so the audience responds to you. Plus, there isn't a build up like the movies. Also no sex involved Just the idea of sex afterwards keeps the audience entertained.

My Scene
The girl sitting down on a chair. Music is playing in the background
I walk in with a little swagger, holding roses and chocolates, oils and stuff, and a bottle of wine/champagne
Then I walk over to her, kiss her slowly on the hand She blushes
Then I Proceed to give her the rose and pour the wine into a glass 4 her
After that, I start to rub her feet with the massage oils and slowly work my way up
At the shoulders, I whisper something the audience cannot hear, but she blushes.
End it with a nice little toast. Scene fades to black

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@ OP. isnt all that a bit of an overkill

too many things in one!