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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 3:59pm On Feb 05, 2013
bennyraz: smh
Smh too.
Oya lemme hug you.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by LarrySun(m): 4:01pm On Feb 05, 2013
Caracta:
@larry, who is the poem for? Give us a name pls.
My val unrequited.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 4:03pm On Feb 05, 2013
Caracta:
Smh too.
Oya lemme hug you.
smh! i no dey hug again **frowns**
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by UjSizzle(f): 4:25pm On Feb 05, 2013
Larry-Sun:
How many angels can dance on the point of a pin?

How many wings can we count from an exaltation of larks?

When giant are toppled, what hope is there for the midgets?

The day approaches,

And to thou, I'm proposing.

Even the arrow has been sheated in a red quiver,

And my heart bleeds for a lover.

Will Cupid take kindness?

By puncturing my ventricles with mildness?

O! There she sits, my val.

Her skirt billowing, even at the hem.

But my brows are furrowing, given how she reads my poem.

Now I know,

Now I know,

That after many words of love confessed,

With me she is not slightly obsessed.

I have been deceiving myself me,

Thinking the val she'd spend with me.

Go with him, my darling val,

Have fun with your lovely pal.

Lo, I have been too late,

To alter the course of fate.

My val has been claimed,

By that with a faster aim.

I shall be here waiting for you,

Even if Valentine extends till June.
it doesn't matter. Name her still smiley
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by UjSizzle(f): 4:29pm On Feb 05, 2013
Redmosquito:

U first

chicken
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by LarrySun(m): 4:35pm On Feb 05, 2013
uj_sizzle:
it doesn't matter. Name her still smiley
cry
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Agimor(m): 5:02pm On Feb 05, 2013
Just refreshing myself with all this poems.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 5:04pm On Feb 05, 2013
Larry-Sun:
How many angels can dance on the point of a pin?

How many wings can we count from an exaltation of larks?

When giant are toppled, what hope is there for the midgets?

The day approaches,

And to thou, I'm proposing.

Even the arrow has been sheated in a red quiver,

And my heart bleeds for a lover.

Will Cupid take kindness?

By puncturing my ventricles with mildness?

O! There she sits, my val.

Her skirt billowing, even at the hem.

But my brows are furrowing, given how she reads my poem.

Now I know,

Now I know,

That after many words of love confessed,

With me she is not slightly obsessed.

I have been deceiving myself me,

Thinking the val she'd spend with me.

Go with him, my darling val,

Have fun with your lovely pal.

Lo, I have been too late,

To alter the course of fate.

My val has been claimed,

By that with a faster aim.

I shall be here waiting for you,

Even if Valentine extends till June.
simply...beautiful!
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by UjSizzle(f): 5:05pm On Feb 05, 2013
Larry-Sun:

cry

aww u poor darling *hugz*
will u be my val? smiley
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 5:07pm On Feb 05, 2013
Oahray: you want make all those many guys proclaim jihad for my head? grin

abegi, am free from them today
oya put my name sharp-sharp kiss kiss
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by UjSizzle(f): 5:15pm On Feb 05, 2013
Larry-Sun:

cry
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by UjSizzle(f): 5:16pm On Feb 05, 2013
oahray!!
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 5:17pm On Feb 05, 2013
Agimor: Just refreshing myself with all this poems.

u want to write JAMB? grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Idowuogbo(f): 5:20pm On Feb 05, 2013
Oahray: Hand in hand I watched them go.
Lovers in love.
Who could blame them?
Love was in the air
and they breathed it.
A toast to their wounds,
the shots from cupid's arrow.
That baby witch
that missed me every time.

So pen in hand and paper empty,
I sit again in my shell.
With all the time in the world
I could write a long letter,
and decorate her name with roses.
Problem is,
there is no name.
Who would be patient enough
to read my gibberish?

Two words I scribble neatly
BE MINE.
And out the window
I set it free.
Let the wind take it
wherever it wishes.
Maybe...just maybe,
somewhere not here,
a lonely heart beats like mine.

*clears throat*
wink wink smiley cool
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Nobody: 5:30pm On Feb 05, 2013
hmm.. hmm..
Clears throat, i dey come!
When is the love promo ending?
cool
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by UjSizzle(f): 5:37pm On Feb 05, 2013
Larry-Sun:

cry
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 5:51pm On Feb 05, 2013
~vicky~:


abegi, am free from them today
oya put my name sharp-sharp kiss kiss
hehehe... Ok grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 5:53pm On Feb 05, 2013
uj_sizzle: oahray!!
uj_sizzle! cheesy How far na? Are you by any chance val-less? grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 5:54pm On Feb 05, 2013
Idowuogbo:

*clears throat*
wink wink smiley cool
Badosky is back! cheesy cheesy kiss Babe see as everywhere dry without you since sad
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by bosun11(m): 6:03pm On Feb 05, 2013
My head’s full of your smell,
a hug
a kiss
a valentines wish...
a dream
a star
to be where you are...
to love
to share
to show I care...
....when I close my eyes
will you be there?

if you would be my valentine
My heart would surely glow
And if you'd just be mine
I'd want the world to know
If you would just be mine
My eyes could finally rest
For my heart already knows
That you would be the best

If you would be my valentine
I would want the world to see
That I have found the perfect valentine
The one just for me

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Idowuogbo(f): 6:07pm On Feb 05, 2013
Oahray: Badosky is back! cheesy cheesy kiss Babe see as everywhere dry without you since sad
awww.... to much flavor dey spoil soup. wink

btwn! this ya poem hen! hmmm.... no comments.


@topic

oya my e-toasters come drop am na..bookings don start o! cheesy cheesy cheesy
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by dopeJemi: 6:08pm On Feb 05, 2013
uj_sizzle:

aww u poor darling *hugz*
will u be my val? smiley

I tot u wanted Me 2 be ur vaL
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ayoobscom(m): 6:11pm On Feb 05, 2013
I read through the lines
Gently till my face bronzed
Yet I do not find a poem zone

Rather I saw poems from google
Some lines jumbled like a barble
Except some rhumic lines from Tgirl
That got my heart marveled in Gwhiles

Now
Let us make a reeling plea
To the lords of pen and wits
away from shallow ponds of prose
Away from labrynth cussors of plagiarism

Babe
Come
Please come

Ve been here for thousands moons
Sitting here all alone by the whirling belladonas
Relishing here all alone by the purple coronas
But the cold in the nights threw me into forlorn
Leaving my heart clave dripping of thoights of a beautiful face

Baabe
Please come
Come tonight
And be my val....!



Just passing by..

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by timpaker(m): 6:13pm On Feb 05, 2013
. I care not if I swim in streams of tears
When I go against all odds and its fears;
To claim you, possess you and love -
You wherever you are till it pains me
And if need be
I'd damn the space, beneath and above

I'd travel long into the lights above the stars
Without frights of burns and scars
Just to search for your face amongst angels
I'd shun or fight the world like rebels
If men dares soil my chances,
For I no more bask in obtuse trances.

As I only wish to grace you with your smile and pointed nose
Wearing purple dress and smelling like rose
With the wind breathing- pause at every angelic step further
Walking to embrace me to my bliss of lonely slumber

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by ijebabe: 6:14pm On Feb 05, 2013
Who else but romancelanders would be on this thread tongue

Really touching poems guys smiley Mynd, Tgirl, Larry-Sun and Oahray just beautiful! kiss
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by pokenose(m): 6:22pm On Feb 05, 2013
TO MY VALENTINE

I love you from head to toe
To keep you, i’ll fight every foe
I promise not to let you go
Just to show how i love you so

You turn my night to day
How you do this i cannot say
Your voice is music to my ears
Extinguishing my innermost fears

I am at peace when i see you
Exalted, when i hold you
In heaven, when i kiss you
Expressing my deep love for you

You are a rare and beautiful gem
Spotless, without a speck of germ
You are the anchor of my life
Indeed my one and only wife

I do not care or mind
To say this a thousand times
I love you my valentine
I’m so glad that you are mine!

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by LarrySun(m): 7:00pm On Feb 05, 2013
uj_sizzle:

aww u poor darling *hugz*
will u be my val? smiley
You're already claimed too embarassed
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Vicjay1(m): 7:04pm On Feb 05, 2013
You are like the silky gazelle of the esteem paradise beaming brilliance on me in a blissful way. Pls be my val dear TRACY.

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 7:05pm On Feb 05, 2013
Going for lunch at 7:04,

when I get back, I go hypernova.

And I will be putting a name this time.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 7:32pm On Feb 05, 2013
Ayoobscom: I read through the lines
Gently till my face bronzed
Yet I do not find a poem zone

Rather I saw poems from google
Some lines jumbled like a barble
Except some rhumic lines from Tgirl
That got my heart marveled in Gwhiles

Now
Let us make a reeling plea
To the lords of pen and wits
away from shallow ponds of prose
Away from labrynth cussors of plagiarism

Babe
Come
Please come

Ve been here for thousands moons
Sitting here all alone by the whirling belladonas
Relishing here all alone by the purple coronas
But the cold in the nights threw me into forlorn
Leaving my heart clave dripping of thoights of a beautiful face

Baabe
Please come
Come tonight
And be my val....!



Just passing by..

Passing kini...come back here and finish what u started. tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 7:36pm On Feb 05, 2013
bosun11: My head’s full of your smell,
a hug
a kiss
a valentines wish...
a dream
a star
to be where you are...
to love
to share
to show I care...
....when I close my eyes
will you be there?

if you would be my valentine
My heart would surely glow
And if you'd just be mine
I'd want the world to know
If you would just be mine
My eyes could finally rest
For my heart already knows
That you would be the best

If you would be my valentine
I would want the world to see
That I have found the perfect valentine
The one just for me

Quite nice!

D other one was a bit long datz why I didn't quote it.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 7:45pm On Feb 05, 2013
AmBeautiful: hmm.. hmm..
Clears throat, i dey come!
When is the love promo ending?
cool

Feb 13th grin

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