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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 6:24am On Feb 06, 2013
Damn you PHCN for making me do this from my phone

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 6:25am On Feb 06, 2013
Hmmm...........
The moon is shinning in a starless sky
the clouds have tried their best
but thats all they could do
cos hiding it's presence is proving difficult
the moon's light hit me
and I remember what I have in common with it
we both reflect a light
that clouds can't hide

Light from my inside
radiant on my ugly face
evindent in my words
my letters tell the truth
i can't hide a cough
and what I feel
the Dragon lady has caught me
an escape I can't find

a feeling so strong
a hold so complete
on a heart so weak
so persuasive
and so light

dark haired
graceful legs
lips like a fountain
intelligence like a mountain
she caught my heart
in a fiery cage
even when I see an escape
i don't wanna leave

cupid shot me
did it well
can I blame him?
She can I really blame my weak heart?
She meets the requirements
and the standards
she redefines perfection....
Well almost
I sound high
she makes me higher
she looks away
and I look on

i see
I feel her
I follow her
and she makes me smile
her hands I wanna hold
and her hair I wanna stroke
Her lips I wanna kiss
and from her mouth,
I wanna listen

this is no chase
not a race
this is my feelings
my truth
this is life
possibly my death
this is hard
yet seems so easy

I'm getting incoherent

My north star
my gravity
wy hope
my wishes
to you, I swear allegiance
right after the flag of green and white please be mine
take my hand
and I promise
to make you smile or I will never smile again

To the DRAGON lady

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 6:59am On Feb 06, 2013
Oh Mynd, who is the Dragon Lady? Nice poem...very nice.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ishilove: 8:37am On Feb 06, 2013
So much mush and corniness in one thread can't be healthy... undecided
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 8:41am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove: So much mush and corniness in one thread can't be healthy... undecided
SMH....... How market?
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ishilove: 8:50am On Feb 06, 2013
Make I add my own sha.

For all the lonely asss niggas who will be. . .lonely on vals day. tongue

There is a name so sweet,
The Jesus name,
When you call on Jesus
All things are possible! ...

Okay okay, that didn't come out romantic. Lemme try again grin

The sun is shining
Breeze is blowing
I look into your eyes
They are red from scratching
Or did somebody slap you?

I hold your hands,
They are rough from farm work
Forsooth, Are you the famed NL meatseller?
I can't look at you baby, you have
Apollo.

We run across the ocean's shores,
We can't run far, I am afraid of water
The water is dirTy
But it doesn't matter
As long as I gat you babe...


What da fucck did I just write up there?? embarassed

I am so not a poet, neither am I romantic person. angry

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ishilove: 8:50am On Feb 06, 2013
Mynd_44:
SMH....... How market?
The one wey I dey sell for you, ba?
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 8:54am On Feb 06, 2013
Lmao @Ishilove. Did you just take subtle shots at some peeps or is it just my imagination? grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by greedie1(f): 8:55am On Feb 06, 2013
Mynd_44:
and I promise
to make you smile or I will never smile again

lovely....
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Caracta(f): 8:55am On Feb 06, 2013
@Mynd, my kwesion no get answer abi?
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by greedie1(f): 8:57am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove:

The sun is shining
Breeze is blowing
I look into your eyes
They are red from scratching
Or did somebody slap you?

I hold your hands,
They are rough from farm work
Forsooth, Are you the famed NL meatseller?
I can't look at you baby, you have
Apollo.

We run across the ocean's shores,
We can't run far, I am afraid of water
The water is dirTy
But it doesn't matter
As long as I gat you babe...

i don't know why i like dis but i do...i really do.

so romantic!!

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 8:59am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove:
The one wey I dey sell for you, ba?
Yes ke
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 9:00am On Feb 06, 2013
chronique: Ok,here's a lil freestyle for Badosky.


I love the way you walk baby,you is a diva,
the kinda gal I wanna trip with,down to Geneva,
forgive my manners girl,I dnt really care whoever,
you had to be with,lady,I wanna own you forever,
Baby,me and you,girl,we can do wateva,
make love all night,sweet & rough like guava,
the time is right now,it is now or never,
let me wash you up baby with some bottles of eva(wine),
I love the sound you make,would you cry me a river?,
mammy,let's get blown,it aint no time to shiver,
I'll be working you nicely while it goes wherever,
Stay locked on you from now till whenever,
my mouth in your mouth while we lick up saliva,
baby,let's make this love feel so young forever,
and even when it ends,we can start it all over,
lights out,clothes off,we can do wateva....

Guy, dis is not rap zone o.

Nice! Nice! cheesy
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ishilove: 9:00am On Feb 06, 2013
Oahray: Lmao @Ishilove. Did you just take subtle shots at some peeps or is it just my imagination? grin
It is what it is... wink grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 9:00am On Feb 06, 2013
Caracta: @Mynd, my kwesion no get answer abi?
tongue tongue tongue tongue tongue tongue tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 9:01am On Feb 06, 2013
bosun11: Your innocent look
Your piercing eyes
Always leave me mesmerised
Your straight long black hair
Tossed about with a nonchalant air
A pretty girl without a care
Your perfectly chiselled nose
Gently sniffing at a red rose
Adorned with a diamond speck
I think of you by day
And dream of you at night
You are my perfect Valentine
You will make me feel divine
Only if I can be your Valentine


Ahem! Is dis for me? wink
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Idowuogbo(f): 9:01am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove: Make I add my own sha.

For all the lonely asss niggas who will be. . .lonely on vals day. tongue

There is a name so sweet,
The Jesus name,
When you call on Jesus
All things are possible! ...

Okay okay, that didn't come out romantic. Lemme try again grin

The sun is shining
Breeze is blowing
I look into your eyes
They are red from scratching
Or did somebody slap you?

I hold your hands,
They are rough from farm work
Forsooth, Are you the famed NL meatseller?
I can't look at you baby, you have
Apollo.

We run across the ocean's shores,
We can't run far, I am afraid of water
The water is dirTy
But it doesn't matter
As long as I gat you babe...


What da fucck did I just write up there?? embarassed

I am so not a poet, neither am I romantic person. angry
its gbaski mehn... d tin fit dat guy lipsrsealed lipsrsealed wink grin grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 9:02am On Feb 06, 2013
gree-die:


lovely....

About time you showed up
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Idowuogbo(f): 9:03am On Feb 06, 2013
chronique: Ok,here's a lil freestyle for Badosky.


I love the way you walk baby,you is a diva,
the kinda gal I wanna trip with,down to Geneva,
forgive my manners girl,I dnt really care whoever,
you had to be with,lady,I wanna own you forever,
Baby,me and you,girl,we can do wateva,
make love all night,sweet & rough like guava,
the time is right now,it is now or never,
let me wash you up baby with some bottles of eva(wine),
I love the sound you make,would you cry me a river?,
mammy,let's get blown,it aint no time to shiver,
I'll be working you nicely while it goes wherever,
Stay locked on you from now till whenever,
my mouth in your mouth while we lick up saliva,
baby,let's make this love feel so young forever,
and even when it ends,we can start it all over,
lights out,clothes off,we can do wateva....

chronique records! worris dis? just say u wanna see my pant. undecided undecided embarassed
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ishilove: 9:03am On Feb 06, 2013
gree-die:


i don't know why i like dis but i do...i really do.

so romantic!!
You want the truth? I can't relate to 80% of the poems written here. Let's be realistic, c'mon! So I wrote what I can relate to, and I'm glad you saw through the smoke screen smiley

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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Ishilove: 9:05am On Feb 06, 2013
Idowuogbo:
its gbaski mehn... d tin fit dat guy lipsrsealed lipsrsealed wink grin grin
That razz guy, shey? grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 9:05am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove:
You want the truth? I can't relate to 80% of the poems written here. Let's be realistic, c'mon! So I wrote what I can relate to, and I'm glad you saw through the smoke screen smiley
I understand........iya agba
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by greedie1(f): 9:06am On Feb 06, 2013
Mynd_44:
About time you showed up
Good morning to you too smiley
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Idowuogbo(f): 9:06am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove:
That razz guy, shey? grin
u don say! grin grin grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 9:07am On Feb 06, 2013
Idowuogbo:

chronique records! worris dis? just say u wanna see my pant. undecided undecided embarassed
babe u is zo fvckin harsh angry
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by dopeJemi: 9:10am On Feb 06, 2013
[b]Come carry me home to your heart,
And never will the two of us be apart,
The lush land and all its dreamy birds,
Will sing along to our love-spoken words.

There we shall pass gracious time,
Living in lackadaisical rhyme,
By rivers vast and mountains plenty,
Where sheep travel in flocks of twenty.

And I will sing your name out loud,
So that it disturbs every floating cloud,
And never shall we be without sweet thrills,
Forevermore we will dance on lavender hills.

And from the land we will take our pleasures,
That will provide for us in endless measures,
We will bathe ourselves in honey dew,
And swim in oceans of sapphire blue.

Our love will warm us like the sun,
And in your arms I will be undone,
So if you long to live in natures art,
Come carry me home to your heart.

I will pick for you the finest berries,
And baskets of voluptuous cherries,
In breezy shade we will watch the swans elope,
And together emulate their undying hope.

Each day will be brighter than the last,
And never will we imagine greener grass,
So if this kind of life you wish to start,
Come carry me home to your heart.
[/b]
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Idowuogbo(f): 9:10am On Feb 06, 2013
Oahray: babe u is zo fvckin harsh angry
he still loves moi. tongue tongue tongue tongue
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by chronique(m): 9:12am On Feb 06, 2013
lipsrsealed
Idowuogbo:

chronique records! worris dis? just say u wanna see my pant. undecided undecided embarassed
Idowuogbo:

chronique records! worris dis? just say u wanna see my pant. undecided undecided embarassed
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Tgirl4real(f): 9:12am On Feb 06, 2013
Ishilove:
You want the truth? I can't relate to 80% of the poems written here. Let's be realistic, c'mon! So I wrote what I can relate to, and I'm glad you saw through the smoke screen smiley

Lol @ ur poem. It's really nice but sounds more like a rap punch line. grin
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by chronique(m): 9:12am On Feb 06, 2013
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Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Oahray: 9:14am On Feb 06, 2013
Lalaosky, I saw you jare! As NL cassonova, you gats write ya own poem make ya boy learn o.
Re: Win A Val With A Love Poem by Mynd44: 9:17am On Feb 06, 2013
gree-die:

Good morning to you too smiley
Where have you been?

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