festwiz: Which one be "eyip jeesusss" again? U dey fear?'

. Oga "EYIP JESUS", means blood of Jesus. Menn na fear hold me now. Thanks for following up.

dasagacious: UR UPDATES 2 SHORT KE,AND U NO DEY UPDATE ENUF.......LAST 2 COMMENT ......SHARP PH BO!

. Pls pardon me for my inability to make it a long full page. Well i promised now that when next i up date it gonna be longer. Thanks for contributing your comment and idea.

***CONTINUATION***

I ran straight to my mum's room passing the parlour without switching off the television. Unfortunately my mum shouted at me to get back as her wake up from her bed when i batched in.

MUM: " get back to where you came from now! ", she shouted angryly.

ME: " but mum i was out there to urinate, when i saw something on white ", i said while shivering.

MUM: " So is that why you had to run into my own room like that, disturbing my peace? "

ME: " no mother, is not like am afraid oh. I didnt see the image to well so I came to summon you to check by yourself ", i said as i placed my two hands on my head.

MUM: " prince go to bed, it late. And dont come to wake me up again, are you listening ?"

ME: " ok mum, good night", i said as i move away from her.

I moved slowly to my room still shaking as if i had a malaria, sweat all over my body. I pick up my hand set, scroll to the video and click on it, but still uncomfortably with the movie, i turn it off. Perhaps, i needed a good and sweet sound sleep, so i headed to the bath room to have a cool shawer for a peaceful rest. After my bath i walk to the parlour again and turned off the television, stroll back to my room and throw my stressful body on the foam.
It now 1:10am in the morning, i haven't had a splendid rest, just as i yawn to sleep, my phone vibrated under my pillow ringing out loud. I jerked up from my bed and without looking at the phone screen, or without consulting the magician or (BABA- LAWO) , i knew who the caller was. I picked the caller and i could hear a soft smooth feminine voice from the other side of the caller, it was mrs grace again.

ME: " Ah! Wahala again", i said as i cleared my throat to speak.

MRS GRACE: " prince are you there ? ", she ask with a low tone.

ME: " yes madam, am listening ", i replied after thinking why she had to call again when we spoke about an hour ago.

MRS GRACE: " Prince i cant sleep ", her voice change as if she wanted crying or so i thought...

ME: " why cant you sleep, or is anything the matter ?"

MRS GRACE: " erhmm no, not really but i had a terrible dream and i felt desperate to inform you "

ME: " can you pls tell me about your dream that is so terrible and you decided calling me ?"

MRS GRACE: " it about us, particularly me, i feel it everytime ", she said this and ended the called immediately.

" Oh gracious me, i just had an imagination or something like really life ghost, and here comes another boring dream ", i said. I stood up and check on the time it was now 1:50am. And i started talking alone...

ME: " So na one of the reason why she give me phone be dis!, so na to the tell me about her dreams and about us abi ?", i was tends and i began to ask myself stupid questions that nobody had the answers to offer. I shake my head and fell backward like a big elephant on the foam...
Later on, my phone beep closed to my ears, i quickly check to see if the round was a signal for battery low, but when i click on the phone i saw something written on the screen
MESSAGE: " I LOVE YOU WITH ALL MY HEART "....
I scroll the button downwardly to check the sender.

SENDER: " MRS GRACE., time 2:00am ".

On seeing this message sent by her, i felt awful and i hiss in amazement as i separated the battery from the phone. i placed a pillow under my head, close my eyes as i mediated this in my heart, " GOSH !!!, no brat will disturb again since the battery is out ", or so thought that moment..
Nothing happened untill the morning when i dressed up for school.



**TO B CONTINUED**

Jesssuussss and i think say na only me dey enjoy older babes. I just hope u bleeped that lady o, ifnot na fucckup.

Story is now getting better but i have one question to ask.

Cant u do without this ME:

AUNTY GRACE: stuffs, its making the story look like a drama not prose. Pls correct it but if u are confortable like that no probs.

You still dey prince man, kip em coming

The rock5555: Jesssuussss and i think say na only me dey enjoy older babes. I just hope u bleeped that lady o, ifnot na fucckup.

Story is now getting better but i have one question to ask.

Cant u do without this ME:

AUNTY GRACE: stuffs, its making the story look like a drama not prose. Pls correct it but if u are confortable like that no probs.

You still dey prince man, kip em coming

. Hmmmmm, i guess i had to make it look like that, remember it just how we chatted. So the idea appear to me and i included it. .....And i still remember say you be my oga at the top, so i still the under you na... Giggle..

360prince: . Hmmmmm, i guess i had to make it look like that, remember it just how we chatted. So the idea appear to me and i included it. .....And i still remember say you be my oga at the top, so i still the under you na... Giggle..

Na me be ur OGA AT THE TOP,

*CONTINUATION*

I love going to school not because i love being educated only, but there are things that gives me the urge of attending school daily withOut being absent for once. Having good and responsible friends was one of my main motives of attending school and classes. Morning i never pictured that something bad will happen or having a regretting day to school, So i thought untill when it appears like a nightmare. That morning was great and at same time i face my biggest challenge before going to school. I could here my mum struggle with something in her room.

" good morning mum, how was your night", i asked as i kept on yawning each time i speak to her.

"am feeling good my pikin and i hope you had a splendid night ?", she ask cleaning her eyes to see me clearly.

" hmmmm yah, but mum what am i gonna eat to school today ?", i ask nonchalantly.

" just go take your bath and the breakfast will be prepared in few moment ", my mum said as she walk into the kitchen..

I went back into my bedroom and put on my towel around my waist as i put on toothpaste on my brush, and move outside the house. I sighted the same spot i sat last night and advance there to brush. After the brushing, i could scent my mouth odour smell good as i place my right hand to cover my mouth before taking it to my nose," thats good ", i said as i walk back to the house, to prepare for my bathe.
The morning weather was dam cool, nimbus skies, so i concluded making a warm water for my shawer. I entered the kitchen, pick up an electric kettle to boil the water, As i plug the water in the socket , i drag a chair to seat to monitor it boiled. A thought hit my brains and i remembered that my phone wasn't with me..

" AH!, mrs grace go don call taya ", i exclaimed as i jolted up and move away from the kitchen where i was suppose to check on my water before leaving to search for my phone. I saw my handset on the floor beside my bed, i stretched my hand to take it up from the floor and tried booting it on, but it refused switching on.

" i wonder wetin the worry dis phone sef ", i said trying hard to press on the button.

I maintained same spot where i stood thinking why my phone rejected booting. I tried recalling what happened last night, " OH!, MRS GRACE MESSAGE", and "MY BATTERY " I remembered removing the battery, i quickly advance to the bed in search for it. I checked under the pillow but couldn't fine it, check under the bed
" huh!, finally ..,so na here you been hide?", i ask no one in particular as i smiled.
I fixed the battery, and switch the phone on. Immediately, as i inserted the battery a call just buzz in. Mrs grace was the one calling that very munite. I punched the answered button as i place the phone on my ear . The first word i heard as morning greetings was

" Did you see my text last night ?" she ask excitedly at the other side.

" no madam ", i replied denying.

" come to school, i demand to see you urgently ", she said and hung up.
I drop the phone on the bed, and approached the door only to hear

" PRINCE..!,PRINCE...!!, you don kill ME...!!! " my mother shouted my name, i ran up to checks whats making her shout so madly.

" mummy whats the problem?", i barge in looking confuse, as a i asked. She pointed her finger to the socket.

" ah! Fire..!" i quickly moved to unplug it, only to have an amazing shocking that nearly uprooted my di<k from it attachment. I fell down, wondering what had happened as i still proved stuborn to unplug it like (TERMINATOR), the second time. I held the metal kettle, my hair style change due to the massive shocking, and it lifted me up in the air, only to find myself land in my mum's pot.
I thought my mother should be crying that am shocked to dead, but she ended up using her grinding pistol on me. I ran around the kitchen shouting " MUMMY PLS..", as i find way for an escape. I finally got an escape track and dash outside as my mum followed me behind. I guess she got tried and stopped following.
I was already bleeding from my body due to the excessive beating my mum offered me freely instead of pitting for her son. I found myself breathing as if i was chased by a wild lion, i didnt actually know what was the time, the only thing i knew was, the sun had fully brighten up. No student passed our frontage as they do during school days. I look down on myself to check if i was badly brutalized. I got annoyed when i saw i was on boxers. I moved closer to the door and peep, my mum wasn't in. I opened the door slowly and walk in on my bear foot and straight into my bedroom and packed my school uniforms and ran out. I stopped, dash into a bush to dress up, as i came out shaking as the pains stroll into my veins and up to my head that i started having cronic headach. I walk to school late. Fever, headach moved in me like pin.

I saw the gate from far but i wasn'nt sure if i reached it.








**TO B CONTINUED**

The rock5555: Jesssuussss and i think say na only me dey enjoy older babes. I just hope u bleeped that lady o, ifnot na fucckup.

Story is now getting better but i have one question to ask.

Cant u do without this ME:

AUNTY GRACE: stuffs, its making the story look like a drama not prose. Pls correct it but if u are confortable like that no probs.

You still dey prince man, kip em coming

yes true about the "mrs grace","me" thing, since he's still learning make we try understand.

Nice update Bro...Charle i want more

Ogbeni.... Ur mum wuld hv buried u alive o... Hope d beatenz wont contiune afta skul??@prince

festwiz: yes true about the "mrs grace","me" thing, since he's still learning make we try understand.

. Oga festwiz if you had read the one i talk about my mother, how she punished me just because her kettle got burnt, You will notice that am following every advices you guys contributed. No "MRS GRACE: and ME:". Right ?

festwiz thanks for commenting....

swaggerkid: Nice update Bro...Charle i want more

. Pls go down low and wait for moreeee....

dasagacious: Na me be ur OGA AT THE TOP,

. Yah you are now the new oga at the top.

Little-flicky:
Ogbeni.... Ur mum wuld hv buried u alive o... Hope d beatenz wont contiune afta skul??@prince

. Hello babe little flicky i cant really tell for now, but i want you to keep on following. *winks*

Nice story,following thread

[quote
author=360prince]. Hello babe little flicky i cant really tell for now,
but i want you to keep on following. *winks*[/quote].... trust me on dat i sure will dearie!!

Thanks for commenting

[quote author=Little-flicky]. Ok baby, i do trust you.

ninja4life: Nice story,following thread

. Thanks for commenting, keep on following.

Bros if now u dey update dis slow what would happen when u nack FP, abeg be regular except u say na skul dey hold u, but me sef work cant stop me o. Abeg ride up.

That ur "the shock nearly uprooted my dicckk from its foundation" nearly kill me with laf

The rock5555: Bros if now u dey update dis slow what would happen when u nack FP, abeg be regular except u say na skul dey hold u, but me sef work cant stop me o. Abeg ride up.

That ur "the shock nearly uprooted my dicckk from its foundation" nearly kill me with laf

. menn na only God save me. The tin shock me so teh... I confuse and i still go hold the kettle again but this time e carry me for up as if na weight lift, before landing in my mum soup pot. So na because i don enter my mum soup and i don burnt her kettle na him mak she pound me dat morning. But i thank God say my dickkk still dey, e never rotten. .....

[color=#990000][/color]. THERE IS A SAYING BETTER DO THE RIGHT THING AT A TIME, DONT KEEP IT FOR FUTURE. ACTUALLY I PLEAD FOR FORGIVENESS, I KNOW I HAVE BEEN SLOWING DOWN MY UP DATES, BUT THERE IS A REASON WHY I HAD TO DELAY.
I HAD TO GO BACK AND MODIFY MY FIRST PAGES TO CORRECT ERRORS.
ALOT OF THINGS IN MY HEAD MAKES IT DIFFICULT FOR ME TO UP DATE. Abeg mak una 4giv me.... MBOK.

360prince: [color=#990000][/color]. THERE IS A SAYING BETTER DO THE RIGHT THING AT A TIME, DONT KEEP IT FOR FUTURE. ACTUALLY I PLEAD FOR FORGIVENESS, I KNOW I HAVE BEEN SLOWING DOWN MY UP DATES, BUT THERE IS A REASON WHY I HAD TO DELAY.
I HAD TO GO BACK AND MODIFY MY FIRST PAGES TO CORRECT ERRORS.
ALOT OF THINGS IN MY HEAD MAKES IT DIFFICULT FOR ME TO UP DATE. Abeg mak una 4giv me.... MBOK.

NA LIE U DON GO START NEW STORY ABI,U NO COME COMPLETE DIX ONE

Big ups, Prince.
You are definitely showing some improvements in your writing skills. I'm so happy to see that.
However, keep working and keep learning, you'll get there.
BTW, no probs. No need to rush the updates. Just take your time to brush and polish them to make them WOOOOOW.
God bless you

dasagacious: NA LIE U DON GO START NEW STORY ABI,U NO COME COMPLETE DIX ONE

. It not like that now. I modify my write ups, if you dont believe me, then go to the first pages and check out. PUT RIGHT NOW AM GOOD CONTINUE FROM MY LAST STOP POINT.
GOOD MORNING TO YOU ALL....

Taiye4Christ: Big ups, Prince.
You are definitely showing some improvements in your writing skills. I'm so happy to see that.
However, keep working and keep learning, you'll get there.
BTW, no probs. No need to rush the updates. Just take your time to brush and polish them to make them WOOOOOW.
God bless you

. Thanks goes to you TAIYE4CHRIST, i thought you have forgotten me .
Well since all things are getting better,i hope to improve more. Thanks for your efforts and sense of enlightenment to other ppl.
GOOD MORNING TO YOU. GRAB THIS BREAD AND WAIT FOR THE TEA.......

***CONTINUATION***

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Like MOSES, he didnt enter into the promised LAND. same , like PRINCE he didnt enter the SCHOOL
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My eyes got dim and i found myself collapsed to the ground, because i could not clearly recalled or formulate in the mind too what happened. I could hear voices of students echo clearly into my ears, as my body got weighted in their hands as they took me to somewhere i cant tell. I had fainted.

I licked my lips as many things happened, which became an action. It was like wow finally it happens so quicker as i had imagin. As the lady said

" pls kiss me tight ", a soft moaning voice.

she came close wearing only pant, her breast was topless, but the voice was that familiar. I
happily rushed up to her and start playing with her twin boys, same colour, pointed head, and attached to one place as the stay beside each other bouncing....
Yah, great one!, is like am begining to have love passion for this thing. she separated from my lips and undresses.

" not again ", i said while my eyes kept focusing on her b00bs..

" now, prince i want you to touch my body ", she pronunced rolling her eyes as she wriggled her body like a snake.

"i have waited long for this my sweetheart", i replied smiling broadly (grin) as i approached her and grab her twin balloon( paul § peter)

" prince... Yes!, like dat, press it the moreee" she moan louder as i nearly bursted her breast.

She hold me tight to her body, as my emotional attractiveness to have X increases. She had captivated me.
Suddenly, a tap a hit on my dicck cap made me jolted. My thing must have drawn the attention of the lady sitting closer to my head as i lay on a spring bed, because it has protruded so badly.

"naughty boi, whats this..?", a voice banged in my ears.

I tried opening my eyes as the lady stood up and leave. She later came back with a company. The man who came with her put on white cloth with files in his hands. I closed my eyes back to allow it sleep for sometimes as i heard a male voice say

" dont worry madam, it because of the shock thats why his dickk reacted ", the man on white said.

"ok sir, thanks", she appreciated the man.

I later opened my eyes again the second time, as i kept on breathing fast. I didnt recognise the face at first. As i clear my eyes, the person that had been sitting closer to my head was .....
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" so all dos tin wer i don de kiss since na FANTASY ?", ah! I must request for it oh , if i reach house, you must give me jor! ", i said looking confused.
I wish i talk kam out..*winks*
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I looked around to see moments of few people on whites walking up and down, rushing, some with files in their hands..

"where am i !", i shouted as everyone stood fixed.

"hey, calm down prince" she tried comforting me.

"pls where am i ?", am late for school. I pleaded calmly as tears run down my cheek. (was i mad?).

Few hours later, that same man putting on white came again. He held my right hand and injected me. I became confused the more.

"in few moments you will be discharged ", she whispered to my ears.

"who as you ?", i asked as i was so deep in my though or should i say the shocking had made me become lunatic, as i didnt recognised her.

" your school mum. Dull head ", mrs grace she giggling. I sat on the spring bed, my eyes now wide open

"were you the one sitting closer to my head?", i ask.

"yah, but first, dress up and lets vamoose from here", she said as she got up.

"but what the Bleep, brought me here", i wish i had said so openly*winks*

I dressed up in my school uniform, as we both walk out of the building. I didnt know the location where in was, street too was unknow to me.
Mrs grace halted man, she was actually discussing with someone i never met before, but when i checked well it was a motor cyclist. She beckon on me to come. I got closer and greeted the bike man as i jump on the bike without been told to do so. I turn my eyes swiftly to look the building we came Out from, L0! and BEHOLD, the art writings on the front post board, named:..
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THE EMMANUEL HOSPITAL, EKET.
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I became weaken, i remembered what my mum did. I sigh, as i waited patiently for the bike man to light his motor cycle on.

"SORRY", mrs grace said as she jumped on the bike. And drove off.........


**TO BE CONTINUED**

Prince! Prince!! Prince!!!
How many times I call you?

The beginning part, before the conversation in your dream (or is it fantasy/hallucination), need to be re-worked seriously. Couldn't make a head or tail out of it.

From "because i could not clearly recall..."

up to "finally it happens so quicker with potentials"

Also, check out and modify some typos, eg. 'twin' instead of twice,' pronounced', 'wriggled' her body, not mingled, 'sitting' not seating, and so on.

Let your editor help you out with editing b4 you post, please.

Thanks for the story, btw

And oh, lest I forget,
*walks over to Prince, collects the loaf of bread and cup of tea and whispers with an appreciative smile*
thanks bro, i really need am

Oga na three times you called me.
Thanks for contributing your knowledge, i really appreciate it.
As for the kissing stuff lik that. It was a FANTASY...
. I will see to all the corrections bro...

Taiye4Christ: And oh, lest I forget,
*walks over to Prince, collects the loaf of bread and cup of tea and whispers with an appreciative smile*
thanks bro, i really need am

. Am relaxing now, so i think this moment will be my fun hour. Bring the tea come quick....