If na MB make I send yu.. No dey keep me waiting for here before I vex.
Nice tori......

your Story is losing steam.....looks like u copied someone's unfinished work.... and now that you have to fill in the blanks, you are out on a limb... the last episode sucks...

can I stage your work?am a stage director in kwara state. really like ur write up can develop a concept.

op,come complete dis tin na...ma gf dey wait ooo

Whether u copy person or not, abeg just write on cos me dey read every. I want know wetin happen to joy and john....once fine. Woman don follow for tory, ma head dey tanda. And make sure sey dem kiss o! If not, na my wahala u dey find!

With a cultist voice'hey dis feleboi if u keep me waitn again,I go break ur legs'

The last story was actually confusing, sounded diff from the others.

Take your time bro, it's better to give quality at a slow pace than give quantity and lose your respect. Whenever TV stations broadcast their soap operas dey don't increase the timing cuz the viewers enjoyed or are enjoying it, if dey can't wait for the next episode at ur tyming dey shuld Go Fvck demselves..

Be mindful of quality

stil waitin...more updates!ooooops...my soup is burning ooooo!popsy go kill me today!!!nsogbu dikwa oooo!!

Nice Job. I can't believe i left all my jobs on my table to read all these. Wow! you've just made my day

Excuses me, u er sitting on my sit.....patiently waiting 4 an update

felnino: Right in front of them stood six men armed men, the driver thought about making a run for it but thought again when he saw a plank full of nails right In front of him, he had no option but to stop the bus, the armed men ordered them all out of the bus, and asked them to drop all their valuables and money, the passengers immediately began to comply, the only thing John could think of at that moment was the safety of Joy, he hoped the men would do nothing more than collect their money and leave them alone but he was wrong, the woman who had an asthma attack earlier suddenly fainted, no one dared go to her aid, the leader of the armed men ordered THE CORPERS AND FOUR OTHER PASSENGERS into the bus where they were blindfolded, the next thing John heard was gunshots as the remaining passengers were killed in cold blood, the driver of the bus tried to escape but got six bullets into his back as a result of his action, the men then got into the bus and drove off, John's heart started to beat fast he was half glad that Joy and TJ were in the bus with him, though he didn't know this men but he knew one thing about them "don't mess with them ", TJ had his heart in his mouth, he had never had a gun pointed at him before, he didn't know where these men were taking them to but he knew it could not be good..................

Nice story bro, but my question is wher r d oda 4 passengers?
Cos ur story so far is abt JOHN, JOY(my namesake,lol), TJ, TOMIWA and BECKY. Pls b consistent in ur story....

ijbeauty:




Nice story bro, but my question is wher r d oda 4 passengers?
Cos ur story so far is abt JOHN, JOY(my namesake,lol), TJ, TOMIWA and BECKY. Pls b consistent in ur story....

read the (0) page again and u will find the answer.

ijbeauty:




Nice story bro, but my question is wher r d oda 4 passengers?
Cos ur story so far is abt JOHN, JOY(my namesake,lol), TJ, TOMIWA and BECKY. Pls b consistent in ur story....

Villager, they are the main cast.. John Being Number 1. The producer can even decide to drop Joy or TJ if he chooses but never John. This is a story and not a true life event. In an event you can't know everyfin at once.

Nice job bro! Kip it up, xpectin d rest of d story

ijbeauty:




Nice story bro, but my question is wher r d oda 4 passengers?
Cos ur story so far is abt JOHN, JOY(my namesake,lol), TJ, TOMIWA and BECKY. Pls b consistent in ur story....

They were taken away to be sacrificed...

Wow! This is fantastically superb! Nice work bro, I can't wait to see where the story ends.
Kudos!

like seriously, i cant wait to read it to d end. ao dos it end ?

op, Oya nau!

John was troubled by what Nelson just told him, he went back to the sitting room and sat on the couch, could his father had been kidnapped by those wicked men? He asked himself, he went to the fridge to get a bottle of water, but this time he sipped it slowly instead of gulping it like a dragon that wants to put out It's fire, countless thoughts occupied his mind, Joy sat beside him and held his hands, she had listened to their conversation, she felt sorry for John, she had lost both her parents a few years ago in a car crash, but she had gotten over it, she wouldn't want him to lose his father, she looked at his face and tried to console him, he looked into her eyes and his heart melted, he almost smiled, he then held her head and placed it on his chest, 10 minutes later, John looked at Joy any saw that she had slept off, he stood up and carried her to the room where Becky was, he placed her on the bed gently and kissed her, he went to the room where the guys were and he lied down on the spare bed, he was deep in thought until 1 pm when nature came and closed his eyes ………………………………………………………… Kemi woke up with a smile on her face, her concubine had satisfied her more than her husband ever did, she even wondered maybe that was the reason why John's mother left, maybe he could not satisfy her in bed and she left for that reason, wise woman, Kemi thought to herself, she had made the right choice, but she herself won't leave the house for her husband, when he comes back with John, that is even if the useless boy was found alive, she would send an assassin to take care of them, her concubine was still sleeping, she didn't blame him, he had worked like a bull, she stood up and wore her cloth, she carried her hand bag and left his house, she drove back to her husband's house as she had to go to work that morning …………………………………………………… The corpers woke up early except John, he had woken up around 8:30 am, he stood up and walked towards the bathroom, he brushed his teeth and had his bath, he saw a new T-shirt and a pair of jeans on the bed, he didn't need to ask Google before he knew it was for him, he was happy he was not going to wear the smelly palace guard clothes again, he went out of the room and walked towards the dining room, there they were eating breakfast, he greeted them before sitting down with them at the dining table, the house help brought his own breakfast of moin - moin and pap and placed it before him, he ate silently without saying a word, when they had finished eating, Nelson announced to them that a police pickup was waiting outside to take four of them home as John would go later because he had some important issues to attend to, John then interfered, he told them what happened to his father, they all felt sorry for him and hoped that his father was not in the hands of the kidnappers, Tomiwa and Becky were inside the police pickup, Joy and TJ had refused to go, Joy said she was going to Nelson's place with him until he was ready to go, he was the only person she trusted, TJ was not going to leave his friend in this state of mind, he called his father using Nelson's phone, it was his father's assistant that picked the phone, his father was out of the country, he told the assistant to tell him that he would be spending a few more days in Enugu, the police pickup left on the journey to Lagos carrying only Tomiwa and Becky, John wished them safe journey ………………………………………………… The hunter and his wife wore their best clothes and began their journey to the palace, they were going to meet their new son-in-law …………………………………………………………

Right on time....oya what happened next?...call me and tell me abeg

felnino: John was troubled by what Nelson just told him, he went back to the sitting room and sat on the couch, could his father had been kidnapped by those wicked men? He asked himself, he went to the fridge to get a bottle of water, but this time he sipped it slowly instead of gulping it like a dragon that wants to put out It's fire, countless thoughts occupied his mind, Joy sat beside him and held his hands, she had listened to their conversation, she felt sorry for John, she had lost both her parents a few years ago in a car crash, but she had gotten over it, she wouldn't want him to lose his father, she looked at his face and tried to console him, he looked into her eyes and his heart melted, he almost smiled, he then held her head and placed it on his chest, 10 minutes later, John looked at Joy any saw that she had slept off, he stood up and carried her to the room where Becky was, he placed her on the bed gently and kissed her, he went to the room where the guys were and he lied down on the spare bed, he was deep in thought until [b]1 pm [/b]when nature came and closed his eyes ………………………………………………………… Kemi woke up with a smile on her face, her concubine had satisfied her more than her husband ever did, she even wondered maybe that was the reason why John's mother left, maybe he could not satisfy her in bed and she left for that reason, wise woman, Kemi thought to herself, she had made the right choice, but she herself won't leave the house for her husband, when he comes back with John, that is even if the useless boy was found alive, she would send an assassin to take care of them, her concubine was still sleeping, she didn't blame him, he had worked like a bull, she stood up and wore her cloth, she carried her hand bag and left his house, she drove back to her husband's house as she had to go to work that morning …………………………………………………… The corpers woke up early except John, he had woken up around 8:30 am, he stood up and walked towards the bathroom, he brushed his teeth and had his bath, he saw a new T-shirt and a pair of jeans on the bed, he didn't need to ask Google before he knew it was for him, he was happy he was not going to wear the smelly palace guard clothes again, he went out of the room and walked towards the dining room, there they were eating breakfast, he greeted them before sitting down with them at the dining table, the house help brought his own breakfast of moin - moin and pap and placed it before him, he ate silently without saying a word, when they had finished eating, Nelson announced to them that a police pickup was waiting outside to take four of them home as John would go later because he had some important issues to attend to, John then interfered, he told them what happened to his father, they all felt sorry for him and hoped that his father was not in the hands of the kidnappers, Tomiwa and Becky were inside the police pickup, Joy and TJ had refused to go, Joy said she was going to Nelson's place with him until he was ready to go, he was the only person she trusted, TJ was not going to leave his friend in this state of mind, he called his father using Nelson's phone, it was his father's assistant that picked the phone, his father was out of the country, he told the assistant to tell him that he would be spending a few more days in Enugu, the police pickup left on the journey to Lagos carrying only Tomiwa and Becky, John wished them safe journey ………………………………………………… The hunter and his wife wore their best clothes and began their journey to the palace, they were going to meet their new son-in-law …………………………………………………………

that shd be 1am!
Nice write up tho!!
from page 0 to page 5

felnino: John was troubled by what Nelson just told him, he went back to the sitting room and sat on the couch, could his father had been kidnapped by those wicked men? He asked himself, he went to the fridge to get a bottle of water, but this time he sipped it slowly instead of gulping it like a dragon that wants to put out It's fire, countless thoughts occupied his mind, Joy sat beside him and held his hands, she had listened to their conversation, she felt sorry for John, she had lost both her parents a few years ago in a car crash, but she had gotten over it, she wouldn't want him to lose his father, she looked at his face and tried to console him, he looked into her eyes and his heart melted, he almost smiled, he then held her head and placed it on his chest, 10 minutes later, John looked at Joy any saw that she had slept off, he stood up and carried her to the room where Becky was, he placed her on the bed gently and kissed her, he went to the room where the guys were and he lied down on the spare bed, he was deep in thought until [b]1 pm[/b]when nature came and closed his eyes ………………………………………………………… Kemi woke up with a smile on her face, her concubine had satisfied her more than her husband ever did, she even wondered maybe that was the reason why John's mother left, maybe he could not satisfy her in bed and she left for that reason, wise woman, Kemi thought to herself, she had made the right choice, but she herself won't leave the house for her husband, when he comes back with John, that is even if the useless boy was found alive, she would send an assassin to take care of them, her concubine was still sleeping, she didn't blame him, he had worked like a bull, she stood up and wore her cloth, she carried her hand bag and left his house, she drove back to her husband's house as she had to go to work that morning …………………………………………………… The corpers woke up early except John, he had woken up around 8:30 am, he stood up and walked towards the bathroom, he brushed his teeth and had his bath, he saw a new T-shirt and a pair of jeans on the bed, he didn't need to ask Google before he knew it was for him, he was happy he was not going to wear the smelly palace guard clothes again, he went out of the room and walked towards the dining room, there they were eating breakfast, he greeted them before sitting down with them at the dining table, the house help brought his own breakfast of moin - moin and pap and placed it before him, he ate silently without saying a word, when they had finished eating, Nelson announced to them that a police pickup was waiting outside to take four of them home as John would go later because he had some important issues to attend to, John then interfered, he told them what happened to his father, they all felt sorry for him and hoped that his father was not in the hands of the kidnappers, Tomiwa and Becky were inside the police pickup, Joy and TJ had refused to go, Joy said she was going to Nelson's place with him until he was ready to go, he was the only person she trusted, TJ was not going to leave his friend in this state of mind, he called his father using Nelson's phone, it was his father's assistant that picked the phone, his father was out of the country, he told the assistant to tell him that he would be spending a few more days in Enugu, the police pickup left on the journey to Lagos carrying only Tomiwa and Becky, John wished them safe journey ………………………………………………… The hunter and his wife wore their best clothes and began their journey to the palace, they were going to meet their new son-in-law …………………………………………………………

that shd be 1am!
Nice write up tho!!
from page 0 to page 5

nice story,more grease to your elbow.

ijbeauty:




Nice story bro, but my question is wher r d oda 4 passengers?
Cos ur story so far is abt JOHN, JOY(my namesake,lol), TJ, TOMIWA and BECKY. Pls b consistent in ur story....

u probably did nt read very well,d oda 4 passengers were taken away b4 d corpers xcape

You deserve an award for this, which city are you?

Please am waiting for the next episode. Don't let it end just like that.

More abeg pls God will bless u

[color=#990000][/color] front page tinz...ao I wish it was in a book and please we are waiting for d next episode....THUMBS up

[color=#990000][/color] front page tinz...ao I wish it was in a book and please we are waiting for d next episode....THUMBS up

I use God beg u... update! Update!! U r a gem ... cool story

Please update please