Felnino com o... Abeg no go. Continue abeg

Hey man, so ur mtn(probably ur first) line has turn to be ur ex line. Nt fair o

felnino: I had received threat calls and messages from my friends who are reading my story, haba #nobemyfault

u never see threat and u dy talk. Me na bottle i go use burst ur head if u no update.#lol

Hmmm.... Interesting story, please update soon.

I luv stories lyk dis,makes me wanna act lyk jackie chan for d woman i luv...keep it up bro

Full of twists and turns. Lovely story! More fingers on your keyboard.

felnino: You are a good reader I must say, I rarely make such mistakes, it was because of the rush and pressure.

Thanks for the complement! I'm grateful! But please, update ASAP!

Pls finish this thing na! Haba! This is not life o! And this is not why christ died

D story no finish o, pls come finish am D story no finish o, pls come finish am

Pls,update the next part of the story.Don't make us wait endlessly

Am waiting oo
Update....

update fast nah.....am tired of waiting.....!!! Nice update..... I love this story! Keep it up....!!

Nice one.

Did u give this person d permission to post ur story on FB? Just to avoid plagiarism.

https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=269632113195288&id=106939056131262&refid=8&_ft_=qid.5958723412281024077%3Amf_story_key.-8533831868614739827

[color=#770077][/color]abeg wey d author? cum update now

THE STORY IS NOW ON FB.... @author ...dey don dey copy am small small..U hear'

sooo,up till now... john hasn't even nyashed joy...
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smh

Chief Dotmann woke up around 10 am, he felt satisfied, the lady who he slept with had left him in bed, he had met her in a night club, from there they drove to his apartment in Lagos, he remembered the instructions given to him by the native doctor, he had chewed the green kolanut before sleeping with the woman, now it was time for him to chew the red one, he pulled the drawer beside his bed and brought out the red kolanut, he chewed it immediately, now the process was complete, the woman's spirit would bring him more money, but she would die any moment after 24 hours, now he could do away with his range rover and buy something better, he picked his phone to call Ijeoma, he hoped she had completed the job, Ijeoma's phone rang several times but no one picked It, he prayed all was well, Ijeoma never wasted time picking his calls, he stood up and went into the bathroom ………………………………………………… Nelson picked his phone up and tried dialling Peter Adeboye's number again, still it was switched off he sat down on the couch and looked at John, suddenly an idea came to his mind, why hadn't he thought of it? He suddenly remembered that he had helped Peter install a police tracker inside his car, he still had the details of the tracker inside his laptop, he picked up his phone and called the specialist who helps him install trackers into police vehicles, within 15 minutes the man got to his house, Nelson gave him the details and he didn't use up to 5 minutes before he located the car, it was about 12,000 metres away from their current location, Nelson picked up his phone and called all his men, they were going for a serious mission, John and his friends offered to come, Nelson didn't like the idea but he said they could follow him under the condition that they were going to remain in the car, they all agreed, Nelson's men didn't take long to arrive, John and his friends entered the DPO's car, they then set out on their mission, Nelson's phone rang and he picked it, one of his men called to inform him that after further torture the suspect had confessed that she was sent by chief Dotmann, Nelson thanked his man for the good job and ended the call, he put two and two together, now he knew why Chief Dotmann was absent, that was a business for another day, right now they had to find his friend ………………………………………………… Peter Adeboye was no more lonely in the dungeon, his captives had brought in more people, five more people to be precise, four men and one woman, the men were also unclad and had their hair shaved, he was shy being naked in front of strangers but he knew he would have to get used to it ………………………………………… The tracking specialist whose name was Promise was the one directing the police convoy, he was also in Nelson's car which was the car that led the way, he told the driver to stop the car, he looked at his laptop and told the driver to take the next turn on the right which he did, soon they were off the tarred road, following the map on his laptop, he directed them through different turns, John thought the road felt familiar, it felt just like the road the kidnappers took them through, Joy and TJ also said the same thing, they made this known to Nelson, Nelson knew it had to be the kidnappers, Promise informed them that they were 1500 metres away from the cars location, Nelson ordered his driver to stop, now they had to continue on foot, Nelson went to the back of his car and picked a bullet proof vest from the trunk, he ordered his men to remember to wear their vest and make no noise as they moved, he told John and his friends to remain in his car no matter what happens, so Nelson and his 24 man squad walked for about 1400 metres when Nelson spotted Peter's car parked in front of an uncompleted building, Bison's building, he split his men into three and ordered them to surround the building, Nelson took one last look at his AK 47, they were going in hot …………………………………………………

continue with d work broh…m addicted 2 ur writeup

Action film we nid commando nw

Wow!!! This is getting interesting...
Ghen ghen ghen..

Love ur style of writing!but the suspense is killing me......
Gud story;keep it coming ooo

Ur doing a great job.keep it up

Cold faya: Nice one.

Did u give this person d permission to post ur story on FB? Just to avoid plagiarism.

https://m.facebook.com/story.php?story_fbid=269632113195288&id=106939056131262&refid=8&_ft_=qid.5958723412281024077%3Amf_story_key.-8533831868614739827

Sorry I can't grant permission for that because of an agreement between me and my publisher

THe story is becoming more interesting,I can't wait for the next update.

more naaaa abeg....

Nice story! ... More.

felnino: Sorry I can't grant permission for that because of an agreement between me and my publisher

I said its already on FB. If u didn't grant permission then u know waht it is.

My friends una gud mrning o! Felnino i dy greet too. Abeg come gv us early mrnin dosage nh.

Zzzzz under blanket, wakes up and checks time, 7:15, running late for work, jumped up and ran to bathroom.

Cold faya:


I said its already on FB. If u didn't grant permission then u know waht it is.

Thanks bro, you are a hero, people like that guy gives Nigeria a bad name.

felnino: Thanks bro, you are a hero, people like that guy gives Nigeria a bad name.

baba u need cane... were update nau...

Niccur...