hmm, to read the African Writers style again... utterly amazing!

Wonderful story. Pls update

PrettySpicey: hmm, to read the African Writers style again... utterly amazing!

welcome Mama P. Enjoy as whitemosquito gives us her "sweet bite" hehehe

checking in.. tuuchea boss I like it very much...I don't grab some few lines way I go use for babes tomorrow. critism pls. ur are somewhat confusing me abt d age of ERU in episode1 u mentioned eleven years were Remix drag Eru to a corner. pls rectify dat part aside. secondly ur grammars are to intensed pls make us who dnt knw nthng undstand better. thirdly ¶ how can d mum stayed two weeks without looking at her daughter whom she hasn't seen for seven or eleven years whatever... and even talk to her..data not well punched. yours humbly Tha-ruthlxx7

BT I day ur back like tomorrow no dy

whitemosquito: lol. Essy, u no dey sleep? I'm off to bed. Thank Jah tomorrow is Saturday.

Sleep ke? When a white mosquito is awake?

ThaRuthlxx7: checking in.. tuuchea boss I like it very much...I don't grab some few lines way I go use for babes tomorrow. critism pls. ur are somewhat confusing me abt d age of ERU in episode1 u mentioned eleven years were Remix drag Eru to a corner. pls rectify dat part aside. secondly ur grammars are to intensed pls make us who dnt knw nthng undstand better. thirdly ¶ how can d mum stayed two weeks without looking at her daughter whom she hasn't seen for seven or eleven years whatever... and even talk to her..data not well punched. yours humbly Tha-ruthlxx7

Lol. Sorry. The age discrepancies are my fault. I originally wanted Eru to be really young, like 5 years old, but for what I had planned in mind, it would seem a bit raunchy to some sensitive minds. However, I've decided to stick with 7. So, Eru is seven years old, thanks for pointing out the errors.
As for Eru's mum, that's exactly the whole story...You just gotta be patient and stay tuned to understand..
Me? Grammar ke? I dont speak/write any o..If you don't understand any word, do yourself a favour, google it and grow ur vocab.
Thanks for reading. I appreciate this.

The next update's gonna be pretty short.
I'm tired.

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whitemosquito:
CHAPTER THREE

Mrs MaryAnne Eustacia Olaniyi was an Iron lady.

. Walahi ur head no cowect... Dat was an update?

whitemosquito:
CHAPTER THREE

Mrs MaryAnne Eustacia Olaniyi was an Iron lady.

You gotta be kidding me!

ThaRuthlxx7: . Walahi ur head no cowect... Dat was an update?

Boy, u better watch your tongue.

Larry, I have to post like that because of our erratic power supply. Once electricity is interrupted, my Wireless goes off. And I type straight into Nairaland off my head.. so most times, when Im satisfied with a paragraph I've typed, I upload it first then continue using the modify button..
You really gotta give me more credit na. Haba.

whitemosquito: Boy, u better watch your tongue.

. U knw I don't do too well with threat

ThaRuthlxx7: . U knw I don't do too well with threat

Y not just be civil n truly watch your tongue?
u supposed to be apologising n u still ranting.. abegi

white am sorry bt i wasn't insulting u. U gat it twisted haba y wuld i do dat nah u be ma padi no vex... Nxt update

Candis009:

Y not just be civil n truly watch your tongue?
u supposed to be apologising n u still ranting.. abegi

u wan drag dis tin go anoda level make oda pepo for tink say i b bad guy? Haba e no fwesh naw i no evn insult her she just no undastand what i mean..byDway ve apologies.... Can i as u candis.... How are u faring:p

ThaRuthlxx7:

The way you write is even appalling and leaves much to be desired.

What would happen if you spell the words in full?

If you truly want to apologise, scroll up and edit the nonsense you started typing.

Do you pay these writers for updating their threads?

ThaRuthlxx7: u wan drag dis tin go anoda level make oda pepo for tink say i b bad guy? Haba e no fwesh naw i no evn insult her she just no undastand what i mean..byDway ve apologies.... Can i as u candis.... How are u faring:p

Lol... m good

welldone white

Wonderful job, That's Why I keep loving you.

@iebanehita. I was the one who liked ur comment. @candis, zyzxx, Dyoungstar; Thanks..

whitemosquito: @iebanehita. I was the one who liked ur comment...

As far as this thread is concerned, I gat your back...

whitemosquito:
CHAPTER THREE

Mrs MaryAnne Eustacia Abimbola Olaniyi was an Iron lady.

ThaRuthlxx7: . Walahi ur head no cowect... Dat was an update?

Lol. I think I got the joke. You said your update was gonna be short and so ThaRuthless here was prolly tryna show you the extent of your exaggeration. I mean, that update's gotta be a whole page. Trust me, my fingers felt it too. I had to delete it all line after line to arrive at that short sentence.

whitemosquito: Boy, u better watch your tongue.

LarrySun: You gotta be kidding me!

Only a joke, guys.

iebanehita:
The way you write is even appalling and leaves much to be desired.
What would happen if you spell the words in full?
If you truly want to apologise, scroll up and edit the nonsense you started typing.
Do you pay these writers for updating their threads?

I kind 'f agree on 'at. Lol. It took me quite some time to understand one of his/her previous posts. But uhm, don't sweat it, eh?
Now ThaRuthlxx7, you gonna pay for the job I just did? I mean I admit I wasn't asked to but hey...just helping a brother/sister out.

Whitemosquito, you've totally squashed the dreams 'f aspiring writers like me. I don't think I could ever compete with you around. Seriously.
Wanna share a few tips 'n secrets, tho'?

alomosweets: Whitemosquito, you've totally squashed the dreams 'f aspiring writers like me. I don't think I could ever compete with you around. Seriously.
Wanna share a few tips 'n secrets, tho'?

Squashed kwa? I'm innocent o.
*in WAP voice* we are nothing but pencil....
Thanks.

Writing should never be a competition. We all have different perspectives to issues. Ever heard of the story of the three blind men who wanted to know how an elephant looked? One touched its trunk, said it was long and hollow. Another touched its tusk, said it was hard and sharp. Yet another touched its tail, and said it was hairy and stringy. And they all argued that their viewpoints were right. And weren't they all? Makes you wonder what would have happened if they had put all their descriptions together and painted a picture....Like I always say, there's no new story under the sun.
It's the HOW of you telling it that makes it stand out.. If you can work on that, lobatan.

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whitemosquito: Squashed kwa? I'm innocent o.
*in WAP voice* we are nothing but pencil....
Thanks.

Writing should never be a competition. We all have different perspectives to issues. Ever heard of the story of the three blind men who wanted to know how an elephant looked? One touched its trunk, said it was long and hollow. Another touched its tusk, said it was hard and sharp. Yet another touched its tail, and said it was hairy and stringy. And they all argued that their viewpoints were right. And weren't they all? Makes you wonder what would have happened if they had put all their descriptions together and painted a picture....Like I always say, there's no new story under the sun.
It's the HOW of you telling it that makes it stand out.. If you can work on that, lobatan.

Mmm...thanks.

whitemosquito: and oh Happy birthday today alomosweets. Hope I'm the first?

Yes indeed, you are. Thanks.
Erm, *nervously twisting fingers*, has my age been indicated?

alomosweets:

Happy birth day alomobitters
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Oh it's alomosweets... *my bad*

Of course, there are new stories, Whitey. Don't brainwash me.

Happy Birthday, Alomo.

Happy birthday, Alomo.


Whitey, let's celebrate with the guy now. You know what I mean?

Updates, please.