Hey nairalanders, I'm kinda new here and tho I'm in the medical sciences faculty, I wanna test my writing skills. So I'm calling on the Kings and Queens of this section to join me in my nairaland debut story titled "ENTANGLED"....
Sit back, relax and read!!!
posting when I have a few responses...

following..

Copyright©2015.
The characters in this story are purely fictional and bear no resemblance to anybody dead or Alive.
No part of this story must be reproduced without the concent of the author.
Mich_tino®

****PROLOGUE****
Looking into the sky at the soaring birds, He wondered what it truly meant to be free from life's unprecedented frivolities. Although quite young, he had had a lot of experiences in His few years on earth. He had it all, the looks, charm, charisma, intelligence, attitude, talents just to be specific. His physical attributes were simply nature's gift from birth but then after a few years in His teen years, he had to work simply on His methods of communication and social life.
His childhood was not all rosy and this dragged Him into the murky waters of Social timidity, low self-esteem and shyness. With undeterred dedication He went through self-training by reading wide qnd this finally paid off as He overcame His social difficulties.
Standing at the balconey of "MINGLE" a popular social center in the neigborhood, His mind wandered down the memory lane and He smiled inwardly at His conquests, failures and embarrasing moments. He was happy at His present lifestyle but there was a void He couldn't fill and this troubled His heart. Everytime he made an attempt to fill that void it always felt like putting round pegs in square holes. The more He tried the more weary he ended up becoming.
Heaving a sigh of wariness, he looked at the dying sun setting at the horizon, and decided to go home. He had been standing Here for an Hour now. With one swift turn he took a few steps into the bar and then His heart skipped a beat.
What the.......!!! It couldn't be. The recognition was unmistakable. He blinked a few times but nothing changed. Having learned emotional control, He snapped out of His reverie but still quaked within. And then He Looked straight at Her. For that brief moment time froze as their eyes locked...

Your comments and correction would be highly appreciated. critics are also welcomed...

Renylee:
following..

My first follower.. Welcome on board.. Ushers Her into the Vvip lounge.. What can I offer you ma'am??

ps2:

My first follower.. Welcome on board.. Ushers Her into the Vvip lounge.. What can I offer you ma'am??

The finest of the finest stuff that you've got

Renylee:
The finest of the finest stuff that you've got

The finest coming up.. hope yhu enjoyed the prologue??

Next update coming soon...

**Episode 1***
Charles Pepple walked towards the gate of the high-rise Landmark College notable for it's structural and academic dominance in the area. The college was more than an institution as it had won laurels not only academically but in other curricular and sporting activities. Hence it became the jewel of Cresent Estate and beyond. Due to the school all-rounding success it became a terror to other colleges, because at the mention of the name of Landmark all other schools must bow. It had truly laid a landmark indeed.
The college was a beehive of activities that morning as parents and students trooped in and out of the school premises. It was the first day of resumption for the new session and the academic and administrative offices were quite busy. Teachers were not left out as they were either conducting one exam or the other for the new students. The atmosphere was in a frenzy as familiar faces smiled at each other, elated students walked to their close friends and chatted excitedly about the past holiday, small groups of friends were seen complimenting each others looks, everybody was busy talking to someone.
Charles sauntered into his new class. He was in His final year in secondary school and was looking forward to His Waec exams. Though not from a wealthy family, his parents made sure he got the best of anything schooling could offer due to his intelligence. But all was not smooth though. Despite the hot brains, he went through hell in the first two years of his teenage period. He had been painfully shy and timid and was mostly bullied by his older classmates and Senior students. Though he came out tops of the class each term, he didn't have a voice of his own. He was handsome no doubt and even attracted female students from the higher classes but he couldn't maintain relationships with people and this led to psychological melt-downs. He was boring and always moody so girls came and left no one ever stayed to help him through his misery.
Well Nothing ever lasts forever. During the first term of His second year in senior secondary school, His Aunty bought him a gprs enabled phone as a birthday present and then the road to recovery began. After countless nights of online surfing and google searching, he began breaking the ice in his social life and overcame these social barriers. Within six months he became outspoken, confident and a charmer. He changed so drastically that people wondered how he made such transformation. But then as humans we always have the tendency to repay any wrongdoings on us. Having learnt the rudiments of communication, He decided to go on a self imposed mission mostly due to the fact that later in SS1, a group of girls in SS2 had embarrased him due to something which wasn't totally his fault.
He called it Revenge on all the girls! Hence a Player was made.

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I don show

You have got a beautiful story line, mind your tenses with care, your paragraphs and your spacing. With all of these effected you will be better.

beautiful story, just construct it well. Dont keep us waiting though

sowie guys couldn't update these past few days.. Was kinda busy... fresh updates coming up asap..

Spactacle:
I don show

Welcome on board sire....

Missmossy:
You have got a beautiful story line, mind your tenses with care, your paragraphs and your spacing. With all of these effected you will be better.

Noted Missy... Thanks.

princessadeola:
beautiful story, just construct it well. Dont keep us waiting though

Alrighty.... tanchu...

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[quote author=D9ty7 post=39146932]PS2. Am addicted to the game. [b]PS2,[/b]I hope I get addicted to the writer and your story. Few more updates and I will make corrections.
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Sure bro..

Am here. Don't keep us waiting.

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