please examine and comment

Jeez! My eyes are hurting already.
Everything is wrong with the design, don't even know where to start from.

poor design. lack of cohesion, balance and harmony. colour usage is bad

Hope u've not printed this job?

yes, it has not been printed

You can do better bro, just pick simple fonts that are easy on the eye, 2 colours at most then you're OK.

66Kazna99:
You can do better bro, just pick simple fonts that are easy on the eye, 2 colours at most then you're OK.

thanks

1bunne4lif:
thanks

Glad to help.

1bunne4lif:
please examine and comment

Let's do this...
Style what you already have to look like the image below. Apply no colour. Just black...grey...white.
Font: Arial and Arial Black
let's see what you come up with.

Best of luck
Ya time starts now. Lemme go chill with a cold bottle of beer.

Change background, color and font....
Let me tell u one secret, steal but don't copy....

Do exactly what the poster above me said and ya good to go..

jesus..............

This design is terrible. No one white space,terrible fonts, terrible color combination. But you've tried at least to put up something like this.

what about this?

Bro work on your font usage and colors.... With constant practising, u will hit it

1bunne4lif:
what about this?

Messed up! Simple instructions you can't follow. I give up. You need Jesus.
You will have to repeat class.