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Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 7:58pm On Jan 21, 2007
And death
dear Rebecca
Death is not when I squat
before an onrushing train
at Oshodi.
Death,
is when you turn your heart
from me.

Don't leave,,,
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 10:19pm On Jan 21, 2007
nice one
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 9:04pm On Jan 22, 2007
Thanks,I'm glad you liked the poem.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:05pm On Jan 22, 2007
LOL u welcome i like it.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 9:09pm On Jan 22, 2007
Is that your pic in your profile?
Tianshie thinks you're cute.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:12pm On Jan 22, 2007
tianshie:

Is that your pic in your profile?
Tianshie thinks you're cute.

that's some part of me,lol yea that's me
thanks Tianshie.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 9:27pm On Jan 22, 2007
My pleasure princess.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:33pm On Jan 22, 2007
tianshie:

My pleasure princess.
WOW me princess just call me Roxanne
anyway that was so sweet and nice of you.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 9:37pm On Jan 22, 2007
Roxanne is a beautiful song.
Your face is a poem.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:41pm On Jan 22, 2007
hmm u are making me nervous now
anyway thanks again u are so sweetn and friendly.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 9:45pm On Jan 22, 2007
You're welcome.
Don't get nervous I won't stalk ya on tha streets of Belgium
but I might stake out ya dreams wink
ONE LOVE!
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:50pm On Jan 22, 2007
aww u making me laugh u so funny
well thanks once again u sweet and funny.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 8:36pm On Jan 23, 2007
Again,my pleasure,Roxanne of the star swept gaze.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:31pm On Jan 24, 2007
once again thanks sweety grin
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 4:36pm On Jan 26, 2007
You inspire this music that fiddles on my tongue, beautiful.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by urmy(m): 4:45pm On Jan 26, 2007
My guy, i am impressed. i think poets on nairaland needs to come for some sought of competition so we can know the greates poets.
Sorry r you poet or rapper
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 9:38pm On Jan 26, 2007
tianshie:

You inspire this music that fiddles on my tongue, beautiful.
thanks again sweety
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Lalas(m): 11:21pm On Jan 26, 2007
na toast una come turn the thing to?? na wa oo!! belgium girl, the boi na poet oo!! so them sabi lie well well!! no answer am oo!! no offence to the tianshie guy oo i jus dey tell am truth
these poets get sugar clothed tongues like say life no hard, besides tianshie, who be rebecca??
lol
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 12:01am On Jan 27, 2007
Lalas:

na toast una come turn the thing to?? na wa oo!! belgium girl, the boi na poet oo!! so them sabi lie well well!! no answer am oo!! no offence to the tianshie guy oo i jus dey tell am truth
these poets get sugar clothed tongues like say life no hard, besides tianshie, who be rebecca??
lol
If i tell u i understand what ya saying here
I'll be lying to you i only get "belguim girl "
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Lalas(m): 12:04am On Jan 27, 2007
i'm guessing u are not nigerian, are u?
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 12:06am On Jan 27, 2007
Lalas:

i'm guessing u are not nigerian, are u?
Am guessing that too.
No am not am from belguim been around lotta africans
my mom's black
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Lalas(m): 12:12am On Jan 27, 2007
ok then, if u aint nigerian then u can NEVER understand what i was saying!
what i said was that you should be careful of poets like tianshie, cos they have sugar coated tongues and i said no offence to him too,
well, it sounded funnier the way i wrote it, but what the heck!!!!
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 12:24am On Jan 27, 2007
Lalas:

ok then, if u aint nigerian then u can NEVER understand what i was saying!
what i said was that you should be careful of poets like tianshie, because they have sugar coated tongues and i said no offence to him too,
well, it sounded funnier the way i wrote it, but what the heck!!!!

Lol thanks for teh advice am careful around here
and u wrote it good it was OK.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 11:26am On Jan 27, 2007
@Urmy
Thanks.I'm a poet cum rapper.

@Lalas
mind yourself O!carry your sand sand shift from my garri!

@ Amerie
Pay no heed to lalas,I'm completely innocuous.
Your beauty reminds me of the teenage Aphrodite.
You make a mockery of nature with the insolence of your beauty.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 11:48am On Jan 27, 2007
I should say this is very sweet and caring of you
to know that am so pretty then i thought i was
well u are very nice and friendly ,funny and cool i should say
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 11:56am On Jan 27, 2007
@Amerie
Mona lisa,would you like to inspire a poem?
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 12:01pm On Jan 27, 2007
I want u to write some for me
But for me writing u one sorry i cant am not good in it.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by tianshie(m): 8:17pm On Jan 27, 2007
I definitely will angel.
I'm crafting it after your face.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 8:24pm On Jan 27, 2007
thanks that's nice
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Lalas(m): 9:38pm On Jan 27, 2007
@ tianshe chai, naija man no dey use eye see fine thing!! o boi, u think say na all this yan wey u get for mouth go bring this girl come naija?? i dey feel u sha, i dey pray say make u catch ur maga!!

@belgium hottie.
i see why this guy is writing them rymes, u FINE.
but then u dont have to be too scared, pple around here are fun, if u meet the right set of peeps.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Ameriefan(f): 10:16pm On Jan 27, 2007
thanks lalas i liek people around here too
They are really fun to talk to.
Re: Obsequies Of The Heart by Lalas(m): 10:44pm On Jan 27, 2007
@ belgium hottie: hey, i have an idea, since nairaland is an open forum, why dont u jus gimme ur email add and we could get up close and personal

@tianshie, : wink

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