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Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by BINTILAYE101(m): 12:14am On Jan 09, 2013
uhmm! @gloatkenf l really love ur poems though am not a poet n av neva written any poem b4 but i luv poem n i would like to b a poet too, how can you helop me achieve this.
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:29pm On Jan 09, 2013
BINTI_LAYE101: uhmm! @gloatkenf l really love ur poems though am not a poet n av neva written any poem b4 but i luv poem n i would like to b a poet too, how can you helop me achieve this.
You've just got to be inspired ni jare. And it's gonna be much more easier for you, if it's your inborn ability. As in, abinibi yato si ability tins, you get... Thanks a lot, we all have talents!
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:34pm On Jan 09, 2013
The bond bound.

Being beyond what's beyond
Now I needn't being the second
I solicited He gave the bond
Showing me how to untie the bound
Now is verily around
I am naught sure how this will sound
I am far drowned in the brook of the loudest sound
What surrounds is not around but it's around
The most scary trait to ever be around
I think it's around
Perhaps, it is for now cos am still around
Don't ask me how this should sound I can't even unbound
Only He that mould the word propound
Can bring around what isn't around for it to be found.

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Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 7:00am On Feb 12, 2013
I AM CONFUSED, NAH AM NOT...

Now am off
I don't belief in being confused
But which mode is this
Confused
As if I were dissed
Just the doves perhaps naught
In lambs raiments
Who should I go with?
In whose embrace should my soul fly away with?
I am confused
No am not
I am just about living for the north
But here I am
Dining direly with the rest three states
Which kind of fate is this
These belles are some thingummy drainers of spirit
My heart's hale but very full of void
What on earth should I name this
This is as the diss
Entertaken even by Him
I meant the spittle
Is this how smartly rough the routes to affirming
One's purpose is here?
O am fed up
Of this wearied world, no hype
Inspite, the weak, is seen jacking up those hale type
Almost, just as...
Just like stagnant to 'em but the fastest to somehow
I am confused
I think I am
I am not but I don't get this
Why should love loan me a long term illness?
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Nobody: 4:35pm On Apr 09, 2013
gloatkenf: It's thee that has to be more constructive in your assertions pal. That mirror that you mayn't do without peeping at early in each morns afore dawdling out of your cave means more than reflecting things, it means manifolds, one of is correcting...and you may correct to make it right to your taste cos it's your taste and you may correct to make it more putrid, appalling, rustic and wrong cos it's the same...the pattern we embrace in restructing things as a poet needn't being of sameness, nah, you could rectify a blunt spot in the society by the merely locomoting backwards and forwards of flowing flowers on a water by being indirect... Bloke, don't confess your weakness even when it's needed; confess your meekness even when naught direly needed and be appreciative in all ramification.

I am also in your so called poemhunter.com...you've just got to search for JODEKSS in google and read my works...ehm! Save the carpet you'd blown...entertake it, I will never...it sounds repulsive
preview and edit before you post comments. Thank me later. Your post is so caught up in grammatical deficiencies that I am constrained to deny you the dignity of a direct reply. And always distance name-calling and sentiments from your pseudo-intellectual 'assertions' if you hope to convey a point to your audience.
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by gloatkenf(m): 3:35am On May 06, 2013
chukwuma101: preview and edit before you post comments. Thank me later. Your post is so caught up in grammatical deficiencies that I am constrained to deny you the dignity of a direct reply. And always distance name-calling and sentiments from your pseudo-intellectual 'assertions' if you hope to convey a point to your audience.
Wow, I haven't been here for months, now gulp this tit, if you need me to punch your dirty butt with my dirty sinisterous remarks, believe me, am damn good at that and am going to punch you real bad and you are gonna live with it till...hmmmm... who cares...! Don't be too eager to be too jealous, I have published manifolds, weighed and checked by learned heads not this very person of yourself who takes delight in depleting someone else's might directed toward what he loves... To me, you are just a piece of mustard that won't germinate an inche. All rice, compose yours, and let's read it. Believe me oaf, whatever you compose, imma pastiche it for ya dirty dick dickhead! Waiting... Bless you...
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Yellowmoon1400(f): 10:07pm On Oct 31, 2019
Let the warmth outpour of
Loveliness embrace me
Let it search in my heart
Another reason to live
Let all my nerves come to live
Let it unplug my passions
From unthinkable places
I had never imagined...

Let it pierce my heart with arrows of joy
Let it take me on a journey
Of fulfilled promises
Let me be taken to a solitude of peace
I had not known existed
Let me breathe in the atmosphere of peace
Let it overshadow my doubt...

©Precious Pen,2019
Re: Write, Comment And Paste Your Poem Now! by Britboy(m): 8:35am On Nov 01, 2019
You're my favourite notification
Every morning, every day
I pick up my device
I wait for the notification!

It's not forthcoming
I wonder why
Now I know why
But why so?

Don't keep me waiting
I don't like waiting
You make me smile
You make my day!

You have all it takes
To stop me from waiting
Make it happen
You're my favourite notification!


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