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Re: Rhymes by Gamine(f): 6:21pm On Jan 18, 2008
@Colors
Concerning school
And the exams i have to do

I have written some papers
And its just been cha cha

You said i don’t have to pass
To get to the next class

But I have no next class to pass to
Because im graduating in june.

You don’t know lecturers in my school
They are all very prude!

My looks sef no go do nothing
I just have to sit down and read something!

Thanks for caring
My burdens i will continue sharing

Omo Colors
Dont take what i said wrong oh!

Girls are smart o, if not smarter
Than all of them guys wey no gather

Anyways,
Im really sorry about the news you heard
I also got some really depressing news myself

I will pray for you surely
U must get that job immediately

Weeping will solve nothing
Go and do some hunting

It will not be in vain
Great pay you will gain

Now now, i have to get back to reading!
My examinations i have tomorow rnt easy!

So be good
i will see ya soon!
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 6:43pm On Jan 18, 2008
colours welcome back
we really missed ur pack
and thanks BTT
though i dnt get the facts

, For a no good thief. sad

the rich, the poor
live under the sun
they feel its pour
but yet live on

he lives with them
but comes from a different stem
for he lives a lie
of what he's not
and choose to die
for a useless cause
a walking ghost
with no living goal

so i dont care an inch
whatever happens to him
neither would i flinch
if deaths fells him in the chin
a carefree life he already lives
so what's the pain to feel
if its taken frm him

and my greatest pray
is that the Karma lord
take him away
with a Sword or a gun
grin grin
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 11:02am On Jan 19, 2008
hmhm, wat a niz sow of talent.
here's mine, i expect its crap bt pls pardon.

aunty nana likes to holla
most times because of banana

she's such a freak
especially when she falls for a trick

haba i would say
i wish she were gay

she keeps a few pals
and hardly ever receives calls
oops she loves to play balls

one day in the pub
she came into the tub
soaked all over with suds

if momma plans to travel
my best bet is to raise an upheaval

cos we'll be stuck with her
all alone in our little lodger

wonders shall never and
she managed to hook herself her husband
there was a loud band
at their wedding stand
at last my sibs and i were free
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 11:17am On Jan 19, 2008
dis life is such a mystery
with so much of a history
out of it all comes misery
it all boils down to penury
if you happen to have no pedigree

watch out my little dear
look out of the cab just out of fear
use the baffs so much they have to tear
at a time u anything at all to wear

here's another
sad story of a crazy fellow
who was so foolish to follow
all those evil fellas
he ended with a hollow
on the deeps of his fragile marrow
he had to borrow
some bits and pieces from their harrows.




thumbs up to colours, gamine, princessa and soul thief. u 9ralannders are really good.keep it real!!!!!!!!
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 12:27pm On Jan 19, 2008
@ angel empy
thanks for the thumps up cool


here's another

. . . . . for my brother int he lord

if the world uncessantly say
you are a no good Godly Pauper
dont say lots, but say this world proper
i come from a kingdom far above ur gaze

if they say you can never be rich
take heart brother thats not the call
seek first his ways then all
will be given way above ur dreams

from them will always emenate
the stinking lying odour
but you alone have the ardour
of a prince in a castle emirate

for the lord has said you are free
you are free indeed my brother
no need to ever bother
for the lamb has paid all your fee

and to crown it all you have a crown
far above any human Glory
So don’t listen to tale of worldly story
For the Lord has made u a king in his town
Re: Rhymes by wisyno(m): 1:30pm On Jan 21, 2008
O color I wonder if you rap
    Cos your rhymes are nicely wrapped

     I must confess your talent
     has got some great contents

     you don't need to rob
     when you can get a job
      to rap to the top
     
Maybe you can rap like sasha
and make people halla
with so much laughter
Re: Rhymes by tjdno(m): 1:45pm On Jan 21, 2008
Am running to make you be my hunny
hear to my calling
even though I have no money
to take you out for shopping

I want you here
to come wipe away my tears

My love for you is lika dove
that will grow till we old

Lets keep to our says
so that our days
will be full of praise

I found myself in the ocean
searching for passion
then I found you as my solution

you are too xpensive
so I cant afford to dispence you.

Our wold of mission
without vision
all they knw is election
God we seek ur intervention
in our nationn.
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 2:00pm On Jan 21, 2008
hi guys welcome back from the weekends
and am sure we 've improve on our week ends

so more rhymes will keep on jaming
from colours, BTT, angel ampy and Gamine
wink wink wink
Re: Rhymes by dominique(f): 2:32pm On Jan 21, 2008
hey guys, sorry i was out so long
my rhymes just dont seem strong

gamine, study hard and do us proud
to give us a reason to shout and scream loud

prinsessa, i dont knowwhat to say
your rhymes just made my day

angel empty, theres nothing empty about you
your poems bring me out of the blue


my heart goes out to kenya, a country with sucha sqeaky clean image
now filled with such violence and rage.
i pray God solve their problems
and restores peace and stability to them
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 4:39pm On Jan 21, 2008
thanks Dominique
you are kind as well as unique

reaching out to those poor kenyans
the lord bless you
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 7:50pm On Jan 21, 2008
i once was 'jobless' too
but really are you?

for all that ask what you do
dont hurry to dust your shoe

Say, i pray
"i market my potentials with a tray"

worthy buyers will soon find need of you
It's the truth! andfuncommon fact too
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 8:04pm On Jan 21, 2008
wisyno:


O color I wonder if you rap
Cos your rhymes are nicely wrapped

I must confess your talent
has got some great contents

you don't need to rob
when you can get a job
to rap to the top

Maybe you can rap like sasha
and make people halla
with so much laughter





hey thanks wisyno
to rap like sasha, hell no

but then again you just never know
i'll think about it and maybe give it a go

for my look i'm thinking dreads or afro
but this will take a while as my hair has to grow

really wish i could drop lines like kanye west
but then i'll have to work on my rapping skills first

but hey i've to face reality
back to my true ability

which is writing rhymes on nairaland
hoping to be recognised one day by my fatherland
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 9:02am On Jan 22, 2008
waz up colors, and every big deal on rhymes.

here's mine for today.
i used to believe
it takes love to live

even when no one really wanted to see my face
i had to try to keep up the pace
and be careful about mom's lace

they used to say i am ugly
so much i asked God why me only?
mom would nag at my folly
made me wish i was in uni!

my sibs would cry fowl
and end up keeping me in a hole
haba, wat can i do when all they do is howl

i never made friends
for fear of meeting fiends
i didnt bother with the trends
you know i cant use threads

but give me a break
i am such a book freak
oh how i love streaks

u can say book worm
yet i ma never even warm
when the cold sips into the farm.

i know my stuff isnt really nice.u can ignore it if u are bored!!!!
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 9:50am On Jan 22, 2008
every new day
i love to stand and say
thank you for today

i greet each new dawn
with a bright smile
though i love to frown
and look serious
the charm in my smile soothes my heart
when the day disappoints me

i love to cry
in the privacy of my bathroom
because i think better
when i am am in the gloom

but a smile is divine
and leaves my day in the vine
the dawn like a new wine
how i love to dine
alone in the mine
of my muse!
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 11:55am On Jan 22, 2008
hi guys

i hope we dnt have shaky feets
after Ivorian defeat

for all hope is not lost
and it is not that bad a loss

we only fail to succed
and succed to proceed

remember it's just a step ina ladder to the top
and onward we will proceed till we win that cup

love from princesa and nairalanders wink
Re: Rhymes by jkpretty(f): 4:26pm On Jan 22, 2008
wow, hi colors
i guess your life is full of colors

You rap like u've been there a lifetime
Just hope u'll fulfill that dream in due time

Said u weeped because u wanted a job
Do anything but don't try to rob

just strolled into this thread
when my relationship was turning into shreds

Don't think i'm worrying
'Cos i don't intend to leave this world in a hurry

Guys, you all made my day
But i hope its not going to be only today

I'm sending ya'll one peck on the right chick
You made my day so i'll pay the check

But hope ya'll aren't wondering what the heck?
Cos i cld kick your butt off the deck

Lol, my first attempt
hope u enjoyed the content
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 5:26pm On Jan 22, 2008
hi everyone and thanks jk-pretty
but right now lets go back to the nitty-gritty

i'm not a football fan
men running after a ball? i think there should be a ban

too bad nigeria lost
but is winning really a must?

sorry to all soccer fans i offend
but hey, before you rush to quickly defend

listen! millions of nigerians who cant afford to feed
waste valuable time watching what isnt a need

while we watch, the footballers are getting paid
but the masses are not! i guess enough said

we should use football time to hustle
so at night a meal we can rustle

my aunt nearly cried after nigeria's loss
would she have done the same if it was a sack from her boss?

lets put first things first
instead of us wasting our zest

screaming off side or its a goal!
lets come together as a whole

and fight poverty and corruption
maybe even HIV and abortion!!!!!
grin grin grin grin grin shocked wink wink wink wink

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Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 5:38pm On Jan 22, 2008
hey gamine, how has the examination been
i'm sure you must be stressed and even a bit lean

remember what i previously said
you dont have to read like a little nerd

a smile in the right direction
will ensure the much needed affection

from your lecherous teacher
who will be asking people, that gal gamine how can i reach her wink

just be sure to drop your numba
and with his assurance of all A's you can afford to dance the rumba grin grin grin


jut kidding though!
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 5:47pm On Jan 22, 2008
Hi guys
how time flies!

PRINCESA, u r great
COLOURS, u intimidate

JKPRETTY methink ur rhyme is pretty
ANGELEMPY u r not empty

DOMINIQUE is unique
WISYNO & TJDNO aint grotesque

And for all RHYMES weavers here
I hold u in my heart so dear

I 'm sorry for judgin ur skills
'Cos life without a guide quickly kills

While waitin to hear fom you
Let me quickly brush my shoe
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 5:54pm On Jan 22, 2008
hi colours wink
wont Nigeria victory mean anything to you undecided
anyway we lost that better luck nextime smiley
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 6:01pm On Jan 22, 2008
@ Colors

U sure werent on OBJ's train
How dare u 'dvice gamine so
When we try to teach refrain
You teach the gal not to say no

U sure werent on OBJ's train
Helping Corpers and daughters-in-law eat
Forbidden fruit that begat Cain

U sure werent on OBJ's train
Beatin people outta school
Gamine, pls go to school
Read ur books and perfect your rhymes
So we can all dance out of pain
And beat the times.

One Love
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 6:02pm On Jan 22, 2008
princesa:

hi colours wink
wont Nigeria victory mean anything to you undecided
anyway we lost that better luck nextime smiley


honestly i dont think so
infact i'll have to say no

well to Nigeria, better luck next time
but really, how's that going to raise me a dime?? angry
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 6:11pm On Jan 22, 2008
BTT:

@ Colors

You sure werent on OBJ's train
How dare u 'dvice gamine so
When we try to teach refrain
You teach the girl not to say no

You sure werent on OBJ's train
Helping Corpers and daughters-in-law eat
Forbidden fruit that begat Cain

You sure werent on OBJ's train
Beatin people out of school
Gamine, please go to school
Read your books and perfect your rhymes
So we can all dance out of pain
And beat the times.

One Love



grin grin grin grin
hmmn, BTT, i definitely wasnt on OBJ's train
infact i've never been on a train, it seems like so much strain

Gamine should definitely read
but just in case there's a need

grin grin grin grin grin grin grin wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink
Re: Rhymes by BTT(m): 6:51pm On Jan 22, 2008
colors:


grin grin grin grin

infact i've never been on a train, it seems like so much strain

grin grin grin grin grin grin grin wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink wink



Confess, Confess u avnt met any train
I'm sure u heard, its not just a train. . .

If u'v neva been on a 'train'
how come u kno its so much strain?

Say, Colours let's 4get the trend
Will u be my friend
Or i should seek at another end?
Re: Rhymes by jkpretty(f): 11:11am On Jan 23, 2008
I also don't give a darm whether Nigeria wins or not
Although i presumed we'd win or tie a knot

what ever that doesn't put food on my Table
Especially when i'm loaded and comfortable

i wasn't joking when i said i was sad and teary
My relationship is uncool, won't ya'll say sorry?

Gamine i send u my best wishes
In return i want well fried fishes

By the way did u hear what happened to OBJ
that his son's wife went giving him a BJ

Opps! that was a bad thing to say
God forgive me i pray
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 2:44pm On Jan 23, 2008
thanks all ya sweeties
wish u cld gt me some candies
and lets be darlings

u know 9ja is such a place
whre footballers never get the place
in the golden races

i wonder what all da practice is worth
and all the dollars they swot

talk of the all star crew
it reminds me of a terrible screw

what a place?
all the bigdeals on this thread, ure all so wonderful.keep the rhymes flowing!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 8:51am On Jan 24, 2008
mumsy thinks am crap
popsy feels am a trap
my hommies cant cut the strap
between a good friend and a fine babe

i really wonder why girls cant seem to look away
from anything who isnt a girl
hmhm, such a farce
they feel you're old fashioned if u cant do their way

whatever.
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 3:03pm On Jan 24, 2008
jkpretty and colours
it so unfair dnt u like our color
green white green in the honours
over Africa tongue what a horror angry
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now to businesss

see them, flashing teeth on gray
lookin for another unsuspecting prey
they who are suppose to avenge ills
now look to prey on innocent virgins
deceiving with no regrets through money
but with later years bring a cloud to your morning
dont listen dont get enticed
but keep glistening with the work of your hands

my fellow lady dnt be swayed
God listens only when you pray
its all lust and the fruit of the flesh
which only lust it can atlast fetch
get busy to get dat degree
dont give in no matter how tempting it might be
a dignified lady will be at peace with herself
and when she is ready, men with be on her evry step
so dont get again deceived
like our fore-mother Eve did
but be strong, be pretty, be creative
like evry woman here on nairaland grin kiss
Re: Rhymes by gozzilla(m): 3:09pm On Jan 24, 2008
[tr][/tr]now to businesss

girl that was a blast rhyme
but i think
some think
its a decision
not deception
give in or give up
Re: Rhymes by angelempy(f): 3:37pm On Jan 24, 2008
wow, what a nice sonnet
for a dear brunnette

yeah i know i've got to be careful
with all the lobsters on the prowl
yet is so hard to pretend
not to see how well your hommies are tend

i hate to think
since everything stinks
and i cant even take drinks

but thanks for the advice
it would certainly keep me off the vice
Re: Rhymes by colors(f): 4:31pm On Jan 24, 2008

WAITING


its been nearly 25 years and i'm still waiting
right now it's so hard but i'm trying to put some faith in

dear God i wish my faith was stronger
i don't know if i can hold out much longer

why does it have to be so damn hard
to fulfill my dreams, i'm just so sad

sometimes i feel like i'm going crazy
i gaze into my future and everything seems so hazy

these days i'm so melancholic
its a wonder i'm not an alchoholic

hey, i've run out of words to say
so i'll keep waiting for a miracle, who knows it just might be today
Re: Rhymes by princesa(f): 6:26pm On Jan 24, 2008
thanks gozilla and angel empy
iwill always strive
to do u proud
and our days shall never be empty
amen
kiss

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