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| The World Stood Still-flash Story by puresaint12(m): 9:24am On Oct 06, 2016 |
The world stood still,Her head spinned 360 degrees.Was she dreaming? Her brain was oblivious of the question as it was busy mixing all the neurochemicals and neurotransmitters that would fit that moment.Her heart leaped with joy,into the high heavens,out of space,past the nine planets.Her body became stiff as if she was freezing from her feet up,triggering her sleeping hair strands to stand at attention.Goose pimples spreading over her skin like harmattan wildfire as her face lightened up like new year fireworks.Her lips moved incoherently without producing a word as her heart now raced like a speed train on a test-run. "Yes! I will marry you!!" she screamed please Rate on a scale of 1-10 btw I am an aspiring writer. |
| Re: The World Stood Still-flash Story by Divepen1(m): 11:25am On Oct 06, 2016 |
okay.... 5. |
| Re: The World Stood Still-flash Story by puresaint12(m): 2:43pm On Oct 06, 2016 |
Thanks Divepen, I know i still have a long way to go Divepen1: |
| Re: The World Stood Still-flash Story by illicit(m): 8:23pm On Oct 06, 2016 |
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