slimshay:


Neck in noose, wooden spoon, puss in boots this is battle quit quotin enid blyton books/

da-whizkid:

And u say DBR b like Sauron? I beg to differ. Sauron na my mainest guy ever 4 Rap battle section. If na him, e for don dey declare himself winner since. He for don call u wey criticize am 'ninny' or 'onanist' or 'plonker' since.

hax:

or you came shorter than a midget. your lines were weaker than a somalian kid. or you're spewing hokum. etc etc lmfao

streetwize:

and dawhizkid. . . but dat my tactic good nah. . . . . nor be so

DBR:

And the winner is, is,

oNe

eldee:

@HJ & DBR

I didn't count Mobinga's vote and one from Googles . . . so we don't have a wiinner for this round yet.

DBR:

@Google, yes o, wonder y they cancelled your vote, guess they don't want moi and your money maker gettin tgeda for a victory celebration make your vote count joor

oNe

Dbr:

Streetwise, act the last part of your name,aiite.
stop sayin I don't ryhme its nauseating, thank u.

oNe

Streetwise:

@DBR chief I wasnt talking to you man. . . If you cant accept criticism bout your shyt, then you don't deserve to be a rapper. . . take it in and either try to be better or dont take the advice. .  simple!!
Yes, I have voted, but I still hav the right to analyze other people's votes like they analyzed mine bruv.
Dont be myopic, this battle Isn't the end, advice'll help you in your nex battle's and shyt . . . .  so sit still and watch as voters deliberate. . . and yeh, puke if you wanna

DBR:

Hehehe. .ibime. .u don start again o. U for let this round end officially naauw. Wanna throw shots? Take it to FFR. Will respond once ma IT guy releases some blocked site.

oNe

DBR:


Now ofoka, u need to seperate criticism from mere verbal mischief. Street has one of the longest criticism at d openin, but attacking sm1 who voted, by countering and smwhat seein no reason y d person voted me aint criticism, nobody countered U or him when u voted Ibimes, so get it right.Plus his issue that I don't rhyme is just so erroneous.
.criticize but pls make sense.

oNe

DBR:


. .yeye boy Ofoka,

DBR:

. Street na ma guy o. .make no mistake bout that!
oNe

DBR:

Me do audio battle wit ibime? He go flog me naauw. , lol.

DBR:

Ibime na failed PH rapper o,

DBR:

1st all, u need to work on your grammar. .lol.
Now, u need to seperate criticism from mere verbal mischief. Street has one of the longest criticism at d openin, but attackin sm1 who voted, by countering and smwhat seein no reason y d person voted me aint criticism, nobody countered U or him when u voted Ibis, so get it right.Plus his issue that I don't rhyme is just so erroneous.
This na play, even Ibis and I hav mutual respect for each other. .criticize but pls make sense.

oNe

04kaa:



and lastly he said u dont rhyme, did he lie??your forcing  wordplays that u forgot that rhyming is essential in a battle like his, thats why i said yall should do audio, am sure u would be worse off in rhyming than u are now   if this was an audio battle

Ibime:

WARNING SHOTZ 2: THE PRELUDE

Make nobody run. . .hehehehe


This game got rules, and he broke at least two of em/
No credible HipHop site would give him votes. .if they true to him/
Even Fatfish could spit ill lines without no rhyme structure/
so ya verse don't get the "green light". . for not respecting "time juncture"/
My mind 'puncture'/ so ya 'tyred' lines get slayed in the booth/
I aint bitter. .truth is bitter. . I'm just saying the truth/
They couldn't follow his flow, and I had more humour/
so by any measure, I set him straight. . like a fat long ruler/
He spat nothing to denote/ cos I smothered him with flow/
anyone who's Streetwise would concede it wasn't close/
Spitting Adam like A-Damn/ and forcing lucks to sound like dreadlocks?/
If wordplay is forced. . Just re-'verse'. . like a gearbox/
Don't give me cause to erupt/ cos my thoughts are corrupt/
You'll get piston (pi$$ed on) by the force I conduct/ cos I torque (talk) with a thrust!/
Ya whole verse was a collation of horrible dust/
Streetwize told you the truth, now you causing a fuss/ like you wanna combust/
When it comes to battling me, Street 'paved the way' for you anonymous phucks/
cos Street paint vivid pictures that sound harder to us/
so if  Street cross ya path. . .you'll get tarred with a brush!/


Hehehehehe. . .no hate, just collate ya bars. Round 2 will seperate the men from boys like puberty!

Ibime:

@ DBR,

Abi you no know say going back to back with Ofoka is like banging head against brick wall?. . .hehehehe

streetwize:

ohhh where is Sauron when u need him. . . thsat guy would show u wat real verbal mischief is.

FYI, I like your style, crazy metaphors and wordplay are the only way to beat Ibime, but allow me reiterate, as for this battle verse. .  poor rhyme structure. Anyways I'll stop sayin it if thats wat u want. . . but it doesn't change the fact. Either learn from it or move on. .

yeeeee, o4kaa is on my side for once. . . the moon must be blue. ,